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Whitewolf
02:12:33 Fang
Issy I remember, I have a really nice upcoming straw that needs a good mare ๐Ÿ‘€ she’s better than the maiden I was gonna toss it at lol
The Red Herring
02:09:10 Lil' Red
-HEE Click-
โ™กโ™กโ™ก
Nightingales Ridge
02:08:40 𓅪 Issy
Fang you have an embryo from my gal if you want it remember
Hardwicke House
02:06:21 Phan
-HEE Click-
yay!
Elephant Walk Stable
02:04:25 Chey
Why do chicken coops only have 2 doors?

If they had 4 doors they'd be called chicken sedans.
Elephant Walk Stable
02:03:36 Chey
oh good one, swanky
Elephant Walk Stable
02:03:16 Chey
I have another one...
Swank Plateau
02:03:10 Swanky
Do you know why you should stand in a corner if your cold?

Its 90 degrees.
Whitewolf
02:01:49 Fang
Sounds like a dad joke lol
Elephant Walk Stable
02:01:26 Chey
Why did the bike tip over?

It was too tired.
Whitewolf
02:00:49 Fang
Chey go for it, could use some entertainment
Elephant Walk Stable
02:00:28 Chey
Do ya'll want to hear a really bad joke but made me almost piss my pants?
Whitewolf
02:00:16 Fang
I’d love to do just 3. But I don’t want to end up with a lot of embryos lol
Whitewolf
01:57:34 Fang
Even with not doing most of my girls I still have 6 matches or 8 if you count the 2nd embryos
Gaelic Gladiacres
01:55:55 Gladius
probably going to do like my top three matches on day 1 without items and just yolo it haha
Gaelic Gladiacres
01:55:27 Gladius
Honestly I think I need to take off from RO this coming year (plus y'know save up for the cap party... lol). I'm uh. overrun and my barns are exploding at the seams XD
Elephant Walk Stable
01:54:02 Chey
Financially, I don't think I can afford next RO
Whitewolf
01:53:11 Fang
I’m not ready for RO. I mean I have all the ebs and etc but I don’t wanna :( lol
Nightingales Ridge
01:51:39 𓅪 Issy
It's a fuzzy but I think I can still read it
Nightingales Ridge
01:51:04 𓅪 Issy
Cute Glacier. I love the lighting too

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Whitewolf
02:12:33 Fang
Issy I remember, I have a really nice upcoming straw that needs a good mare ๐Ÿ‘€ she’s better than the maiden I was gonna toss it at lol
The Red Herring
02:09:10 Lil' Red
-HEE Click-
โ™กโ™กโ™ก
Nightingales Ridge
02:08:40 𓅪 Issy
Fang you have an embryo from my gal if you want it remember
Hardwicke House
02:06:21 Phan
-HEE Click-
yay!
Elephant Walk Stable
02:04:25 Chey
Why do chicken coops only have 2 doors?

If they had 4 doors they'd be called chicken sedans.
Elephant Walk Stable
02:03:36 Chey
oh good one, swanky
Elephant Walk Stable
02:03:16 Chey
I have another one...
Swank Plateau
02:03:10 Swanky
Do you know why you should stand in a corner if your cold?

Its 90 degrees.
Whitewolf
02:01:49 Fang
Sounds like a dad joke lol
Elephant Walk Stable
02:01:26 Chey
Why did the bike tip over?

It was too tired.
Whitewolf
02:00:49 Fang
Chey go for it, could use some entertainment
Elephant Walk Stable
02:00:28 Chey
Do ya'll want to hear a really bad joke but made me almost piss my pants?
Whitewolf
02:00:16 Fang
I’d love to do just 3. But I don’t want to end up with a lot of embryos lol
Whitewolf
01:57:34 Fang
Even with not doing most of my girls I still have 6 matches or 8 if you count the 2nd embryos
Gaelic Gladiacres
01:55:55 Gladius
probably going to do like my top three matches on day 1 without items and just yolo it haha
Gaelic Gladiacres
01:55:27 Gladius
Honestly I think I need to take off from RO this coming year (plus y'know save up for the cap party... lol). I'm uh. overrun and my barns are exploding at the seams XD
Elephant Walk Stable
01:54:02 Chey
Financially, I don't think I can afford next RO
Whitewolf
01:53:11 Fang
I’m not ready for RO. I mean I have all the ebs and etc but I don’t wanna :( lol
Nightingales Ridge
01:51:39 𓅪 Issy
It's a fuzzy but I think I can still read it
Nightingales Ridge
01:51:04 𓅪 Issy
Cute Glacier. I love the lighting too

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Art Critique - Be nitpicky, please! September 21, 2024 10:13 PM


KPH Equestrian
 
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Here's my latest WIP, all I've got left is the forelock, everything else is done.
Please be as nitpicky as humanly possible, somethings bugging me and I don't know what >.>
Spooky-Pegahonse-WIP-2.png
Just wanna add I had to repaint the WHOLE horse, and am very proud of myself for that part at least. Oh, and the tail, I like that :3

Edited at September 21, 2024 10:15 PM by KPH Equestrian
Art Critique - Be nitpicky, please! September 26, 2024 04:15 PM


Clover Realm
 
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I think the shadows on its wings, mane, and tail need to be darkened to better fit the shadows of the clouds in the background; the front legs/hooves could also do with a bit more detailing to match the rest of the horse's body. The eyes don't stand out from the rest of the horse's face either, but I assume those will either be covered by or added after you finish the forelock. Overall it looks amazing so far! (:
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Edit: Not sure if these were intentional or not, but upon closer inspection, you can also see through where the wing on the left connects to the body; and through the tail.

Edited at September 26, 2024 04:31 PM by Clover Realm
Art Critique - Be nitpicky, please! September 26, 2024 07:17 PM


KPH Equestrian
 
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Clover Realm said:
I think the shadows on its wings, mane, and tail need to be darkened to better fit the shadows of the clouds in the background; the front legs/hooves could also do with a bit more detailing to match the rest of the horse's body. The eyes don't stand out from the rest of the horse's face either, but I assume those will either be covered by or added after you finish the forelock. Overall it looks amazing so far! (:
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Edit: Not sure if these were intentional or not, but upon closer inspection, you can also see through where the wing on the left connects to the body; and through the tail.


I need to figure out how to pretty much repaint wings, but I'm not confident enough to try on this piece xD
Tis all intentional! The whole horse is slightly see through, as he is a ghost boi :3
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Here's the updated image, did the forelock and the eyes
I learned how to draw hair better on this piece, and have developed my style a bit more :3
Art Critique - Be nitpicky, please! October 5, 2024 03:25 PM


Dash and Duchess
 
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maybe add some more texture in certain areas? remaining a ghosty boi but just a tad more ? <3
Art Critique - Be nitpicky, please! October 5, 2024 08:29 PM


KPH Equestrian
 
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Dash and Duchess said:
maybe add some more texture in certain areas? remaining a ghosty boi but just a tad more ? <3


like where? I did add a noise layer at low opacity for fur texture, but it got lost on the white version ^^; I'd also like to note that this was the original stock(by LuDa-Stock on DA)
level-5-showjumping-l-springen-56-by-luda-stock-d983a7j.jpg

Edited at October 5, 2024 08:29 PM by KPH Equestrian

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