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Ruby Valley
09:46:00 Echo/ Eco Friendly
Hi Katz!
Ruby Valley
09:45:53 Echo/ Eco Friendly
One issue though. I can't draw cats
Ruby Valley
09:43:17 Echo/ Eco Friendly
-HEE Click-
Debating to draw this coat as a cat pattern :>
Glacier Bay Farms
09:41:31 Arctic Cove Katz
What do your doodles look like, DD
Glacier Bay Farms
09:40:38 Arctic Cove Katz
When I have trouble sleeping, I wander around the house and that always makes me tired enough to sleep
Dash and Duchess
09:37:18 DD | ~Squizard~
Echo, i feel that but for me it's motivation TOT i've been up till around 4am doodling every day >.>
Ruby Valley
09:13:30 Echo/ Eco Friendly
My insomnia won't let me sleep T-T
Ruby Valley
09:13:07 Echo/ Eco Friendly
Im so tired I thought shady tree farms was angel warm blood stud xS
Elephant Walk Stable
09:09:28 Chey
I got my braces tightened again today and they seem to hurt a little extra than normal...
Glacier Bay Farms
09:05:27 Arctic Cove Katz
Not a problem, I knew what you meant, Luna
Clear Springs
08:55:34 Froggie
Breyer's and Dreyer's, Carl's Jr and Hardee's, Best Foods and Hellmann's are all products sold under different names in the Eastern and Western US
Shady Tree Farm
08:51:59 Shady
I know she's just EEE, but I still hate when they do this from week 4 to week 8 x)
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Painted Perfection
08:35:21 Luna
Apparently I cant spell today sorry Arctic
Painted Perfection
08:34:45 Luna
Acrtic usually you can get it at Walmart
Painted Perfection
08:34:01 Luna
Chey I've looked everywhere and have yet to find it
Ruby Valley
08:32:32 Echo/ Eco Friendly
The mints too strong here where i am
Ruby Valley
08:32:20 Echo/ Eco Friendly
Mint.. Ew..
Ruby Valley
08:32:09 Echo/ Eco Friendly
Hii
Glacier Bay Farms
08:29:28 Arctic Cove Katz
👋 Echo
Glacier Bay Farms
08:28:53 Arctic Cove Katz
Las Vegas doesn’t have any Perry ice cream shops, or I would try it

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Ruby Valley
09:46:00 Echo/ Eco Friendly
Hi Katz!
Ruby Valley
09:45:53 Echo/ Eco Friendly
One issue though. I can't draw cats
Ruby Valley
09:43:17 Echo/ Eco Friendly
-HEE Click-
Debating to draw this coat as a cat pattern :>
Glacier Bay Farms
09:41:31 Arctic Cove Katz
What do your doodles look like, DD
Glacier Bay Farms
09:40:38 Arctic Cove Katz
When I have trouble sleeping, I wander around the house and that always makes me tired enough to sleep
Dash and Duchess
09:37:18 DD | ~Squizard~
Echo, i feel that but for me it's motivation TOT i've been up till around 4am doodling every day >.>
Ruby Valley
09:13:30 Echo/ Eco Friendly
My insomnia won't let me sleep T-T
Ruby Valley
09:13:07 Echo/ Eco Friendly
Im so tired I thought shady tree farms was angel warm blood stud xS
Elephant Walk Stable
09:09:28 Chey
I got my braces tightened again today and they seem to hurt a little extra than normal...
Glacier Bay Farms
09:05:27 Arctic Cove Katz
Not a problem, I knew what you meant, Luna
Clear Springs
08:55:34 Froggie
Breyer's and Dreyer's, Carl's Jr and Hardee's, Best Foods and Hellmann's are all products sold under different names in the Eastern and Western US
Shady Tree Farm
08:51:59 Shady
I know she's just EEE, but I still hate when they do this from week 4 to week 8 x)
-HEE Click-
Painted Perfection
08:35:21 Luna
Apparently I cant spell today sorry Arctic
Painted Perfection
08:34:45 Luna
Acrtic usually you can get it at Walmart
Painted Perfection
08:34:01 Luna
Chey I've looked everywhere and have yet to find it
Ruby Valley
08:32:32 Echo/ Eco Friendly
The mints too strong here where i am
Ruby Valley
08:32:20 Echo/ Eco Friendly
Mint.. Ew..
Ruby Valley
08:32:09 Echo/ Eco Friendly
Hii
Glacier Bay Farms
08:29:28 Arctic Cove Katz
👋 Echo
Glacier Bay Farms
08:28:53 Arctic Cove Katz
Las Vegas doesn’t have any Perry ice cream shops, or I would try it

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Art Critique c: August 7, 2024 04:45 AM


Twin Flames
 
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Hey everyone!

I am wanting to improve on my art so thoguht I would reach out to the community for some advice. I am looking for some in depth critique on anything and everything.

Some things I am currently trying to improve:
Lighting & hair ~ I also use Ibis Paint x

Feel free to pick the art apart :3 and thank you in advance <3

Here are some recent examples:


Edited at August 7, 2024 04:48 AM by Twin Flames
Art Critique c: August 13, 2024 02:53 AM


Twin Flames
 
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Another recent example :)

Art Critique c: August 17, 2024 09:32 AM


Cherry Creek Ranch
 
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I have no criticism, just came here to say these are AMAZING
Art Critique c: September 1, 2024 10:09 PM


Marigold Ridge
 
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First of all, I gotta say these are absolutely incredible!!! Your composition is on point and I love the horse in a bar!
As for advice, something that stood out to me were the horse's shadows. That sharp kind of shadow is what might happen if the horse were standing on a hard, reflective surface, not in a more nature-y landscape.
To determine where the shadows should lie, look at the surrounding bg and light sources for clues. For example, a horse standing in clear, still water would likely have a more defined shadow, possibly with part of its reflection, but the water would give it a kind of ripple affect. At other times, the shadow might not be more than a smudge, especially if there's very little light. If there is a very strong light source in the piece, the shadows would be longer and more defined, but would still have softer edges. I'd say for most of your examples, the shadow would mainly be a darkened smudge underneath the horse.
Something that might help is to see what your own shadow looks like at various times of the day and in various settings, and then apply it to your art.
Whoo! That was long, but I hope it's helpful!! Your lighting is overall very strong (especially in pieces 3 & 4 which I ADORE!!)
Do tell me if you've got other questions! You're doing awesome <333
Art Critique c: September 5, 2024 09:17 PM


KPH Equestrian
 
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First, I wanna say that I LOVE your body prep and the way you do hair! I think the most important thing is the darker shadows under the belly.
With some of these pieces, the lighting is more(for want of a better word) distilled, so the shadows should be softer. In the first piece(blue one), there's light in the water, which would be illuminating the belly slightly. Try lowering the opacity of your deeper shadow layer a bit and let the horse's detail show through ;)
The next piece(forest one) same thing- there isn't super strong lighting coming from anywhere in prticular, so the shadows will be much softer. Again, play with the opacity of your layers.
I really like the lighting in the blue/green piece(4th one), it matches the background very well<3
The next one, in water, same thing- light reflects off of water and back onto the horse, so not only would the shadows be lighter, there would be some subtle lighting over top of them.
Next one, the bartender, the lighting is spot on! Only thing I could think of is adding a shadow under the cup on his hindquarters, and possibly a reflection on the shiny countertop.

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