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Ravenwood Farm
03:22:11 
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This is the one I need to make the embryo for, I was thinking Tesoro if he cab still do embryos, but I'm not sure about that hrt or str honestly
NightClan
03:21:54 Night
Yeah, I'm hopeful I get some nice ee based TBs with fun colors and good ratings
Minerva
03:20:55 Min
Ahh fair play! Good luck with both of them though, fingers crossed!
NightClan
03:20:26 Night
Min,
Yeah, I'd definitely bump up hrt some...the color potential is what I'm really eyeballing haha
Minerva
03:19:33 Min
Night, I didn't think the Ginkgo one matched particularly well to be honest- there's a lack in HRT for sure
Black Moon Magic
03:19:15 Mori
He was 16.3 in May, then I changed his feed and suddenly his clumsiness made more sense

Minerva
That's why I haven't got him any blankets yet XD
NightClan
03:19:14 Night
Thanks guys!
Minerva
03:18:59 Min
Thankfully I picked up 2 Kuuma straws so that's Hephaestine's second and Daeira's first sorted since they both produced WWWs with him this month. Might just chuck the other two at some untracked studs and see what happens because they're not LB material anyway
Fantasy Horses
03:17:43 Fantasy | Fanta
Night
I agree with Min
NightClan
03:17:40 Night
Min,
That was the initial plan but Ginkgo has so much color potential and they match super well so now I'm stuck xD
Rancho Redondo
03:17:09 Trini
how yall getting these beautiful Wild WWW’s >.< good luck on her wk3/4 ! and congrats hehe
Ravenwood Farm
03:17:04 
Oops, I wish you luck Min
Minerva
03:16:49 Min
I'd sven the stormrage one 100%
NightClan
03:15:41 Night
Which one do we think gets the filly sven? The other one would just get a med since I'm broke lol
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Minerva
03:15:19 Min
Oh shit I haven't even done first embryos for 3 of my 4, whoops
Ravenwood Farm
03:13:53 
Uff I still have to make the second embryo of one of my girls
Prismatic
03:08:32 Prism/Chrome/Rainy
Indeed. My WB herd kind of sucks otherwise lol
Minerva
03:07:32 Min
Hopefully she matches one of the other W4 boys and you can start a proper dynasty xD
Minerva
03:07:03 Min
Fingers crossed Prism! I'm still drooling over her, she's a really impressive capture
Prismatic
03:06:24 Prism/Chrome/Rainy
I am praying she has a good wk 3/4 T_T she's the first WWW I've ever had

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Ravenwood Farm
03:22:11 
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This is the one I need to make the embryo for, I was thinking Tesoro if he cab still do embryos, but I'm not sure about that hrt or str honestly
NightClan
03:21:54 Night
Yeah, I'm hopeful I get some nice ee based TBs with fun colors and good ratings
Minerva
03:20:55 Min
Ahh fair play! Good luck with both of them though, fingers crossed!
NightClan
03:20:26 Night
Min,
Yeah, I'd definitely bump up hrt some...the color potential is what I'm really eyeballing haha
Minerva
03:19:33 Min
Night, I didn't think the Ginkgo one matched particularly well to be honest- there's a lack in HRT for sure
Black Moon Magic
03:19:15 Mori
He was 16.3 in May, then I changed his feed and suddenly his clumsiness made more sense

Minerva
That's why I haven't got him any blankets yet XD
NightClan
03:19:14 Night
Thanks guys!
Minerva
03:18:59 Min
Thankfully I picked up 2 Kuuma straws so that's Hephaestine's second and Daeira's first sorted since they both produced WWWs with him this month. Might just chuck the other two at some untracked studs and see what happens because they're not LB material anyway
Fantasy Horses
03:17:43 Fantasy | Fanta
Night
I agree with Min
NightClan
03:17:40 Night
Min,
That was the initial plan but Ginkgo has so much color potential and they match super well so now I'm stuck xD
Rancho Redondo
03:17:09 Trini
how yall getting these beautiful Wild WWW’s >.< good luck on her wk3/4 ! and congrats hehe
Ravenwood Farm
03:17:04 
Oops, I wish you luck Min
Minerva
03:16:49 Min
I'd sven the stormrage one 100%
NightClan
03:15:41 Night
Which one do we think gets the filly sven? The other one would just get a med since I'm broke lol
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Minerva
03:15:19 Min
Oh shit I haven't even done first embryos for 3 of my 4, whoops
Ravenwood Farm
03:13:53 
Uff I still have to make the second embryo of one of my girls
Prismatic
03:08:32 Prism/Chrome/Rainy
Indeed. My WB herd kind of sucks otherwise lol
Minerva
03:07:32 Min
Hopefully she matches one of the other W4 boys and you can start a proper dynasty xD
Minerva
03:07:03 Min
Fingers crossed Prism! I'm still drooling over her, she's a really impressive capture
Prismatic
03:06:24 Prism/Chrome/Rainy
I am praying she has a good wk 3/4 T_T she's the first WWW I've ever had

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Art Critique Help Please! May 12, 2019 02:29 PM


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Hi!! I'm looking for some honest, down to earth critique on my art. What do I need to improve, what on my art looks good, the whole run down! Gimme your personal thoughts! Tear it apart. ;)

Examples:
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https://i.postimg.cc/MT4GfJMm/my-persona-crystalux-by-crystalsong-acres-dd4tans-pre.jpg
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Art Critique Help Please! May 12, 2019 02:32 PM


Lambo Farms
 
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I might would try to work on the lighting of the horses so it matches the background a little more, Other than that i think they look great!
Art Critique Help Please! May 12, 2019 03:18 PM


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Lambo Farms said:
I might would try to work on the lighting of the horses so it matches the background a little more, Other than that i think they look great!

Thank you!
Art Critique Help Please! May 12, 2019 06:14 PM


Jellos Warmbloods
 
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I think you're off to a really excellent start here. All these pieces look lovely!

I think the next things to work on, that really stick out to me, would be matching the tone of the horse to the background, and ground shadows. These will definitely refine themselves the more you practice.
Art Critique Help Please! May 12, 2019 06:57 PM


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Jellos Warmbloods said:
I think you're off to a really excellent start here. All these pieces look lovely!

I think the next things to work on, that really stick out to me, would be matching the tone of the horse to the background, and ground shadows. These will definitely refine themselves the more you practice.


Thank you, I really appreciate your help! I'm definitely going to try much harder, especially the shadow since I always seem to forget it lol
Art Critique Help Please! May 13, 2019 01:34 PM

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Gonna second Jello on those ground shadows, they'll make or break your art. I love your manes and tails a lot, they're hard to get the hang of, but I think there could be a little smudging around the outline of white markings to make it seem like there's overlapping hairs. Other than that, perhaps making the outline highlight a bit less strong in shadowed places, and just slightly less strong in general.
Art Critique Help Please! May 13, 2019 04:47 PM


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White Crown Stables said:
Gonna second Jello on those ground shadows, they'll make or break your art. I love your manes and tails a lot, they're hard to get the hang of, but I think there could be a little smudging around the outline of white markings to make it seem like there's overlapping hairs. Other than that, perhaps making the outline highlight a bit less strong in shadowed places, and just slightly less strong in general.

Thank you, I appreciate you taking the time to help! :)

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