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Gem Queens Estate
05:57:13 Snow❆Gem
Breed PP apricot... again? My goodness. Maybe tomorrow I'll try. I had that quest not long ago.
Gem Queens Estate
05:50:59 Snow❆Gem
This internet! O.o
Ravenwood Farm
05:44:06 
Ooo they are indeed not tiger, but they are amber! What is that? xD
Angels angels
05:43:31 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Oh Amber eyes
Ravenwood Farm
05:42:44 
Maybe I should do it just for peace of mind x3
Angels angels
05:40:48 [1k+ brindles] Angel
I mean you could gene test her and find out lol
Ravenwood Farm
05:40:19 
Ah ok. I just keep wondering why it's not blue, since she's double creme
Angels angels
05:39:30 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Nah I think it is just brown eye
Ravenwood Farm
05:39:07 
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This one doesn't have tiger eye, by any chance?
KPH Equestrian
05:38:57 Rapcoon | Jester
black with creme is smokey black lol
Gem Queens Estate
05:38:03 Snow❆Gem
@raven

Black, brown, and bays + creme = buckskin. :D And then the pearl makes it added to the color name after that. :D
KPH Equestrian
05:37:07 Rapcoon | Jester
hm, not buckskin, she doesn't have cream. Looks like bay under the white ^^
Cozmic Elite
05:37:07 
I didn't think twice for a moment since Buckskin AAs like me Lol
But she doesn't have cream.
Ravenwood Farm
05:35:51 
I think brown or bay?
Gemstone Stable
05:33:21 Snow❆Gem
@CE

Oh lovely! She's a buckskin pearl under the white! XD *boops*
Cozmic Elite
05:30:54 
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Oh lil wild hiding prl
Hummingbird Meadows
05:30:03 Bird
@Dusty, thanks! I wasn't sure since the boots have pink in them and the dress doesn't have pink:
Savannah Stables
05:26:05 Dusty
Hummer
It's cute!
Hobo Queens Farm
05:22:19 Her Majesty
Am I the only Goober who thinks it is possible to play online horse games while cleaning my real life horse tack? How will I get all this saddle soap off my keyboard anyway?
Leafpool
05:18:22 Leaf
Moonas son rated ewe

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Gem Queens Estate
05:57:13 Snow❆Gem
Breed PP apricot... again? My goodness. Maybe tomorrow I'll try. I had that quest not long ago.
Gem Queens Estate
05:50:59 Snow❆Gem
This internet! O.o
Ravenwood Farm
05:44:06 
Ooo they are indeed not tiger, but they are amber! What is that? xD
Angels angels
05:43:31 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Oh Amber eyes
Ravenwood Farm
05:42:44 
Maybe I should do it just for peace of mind x3
Angels angels
05:40:48 [1k+ brindles] Angel
I mean you could gene test her and find out lol
Ravenwood Farm
05:40:19 
Ah ok. I just keep wondering why it's not blue, since she's double creme
Angels angels
05:39:30 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Nah I think it is just brown eye
Ravenwood Farm
05:39:07 
-HEE Click-
This one doesn't have tiger eye, by any chance?
KPH Equestrian
05:38:57 Rapcoon | Jester
black with creme is smokey black lol
Gem Queens Estate
05:38:03 Snow❆Gem
@raven

Black, brown, and bays + creme = buckskin. :D And then the pearl makes it added to the color name after that. :D
KPH Equestrian
05:37:07 Rapcoon | Jester
hm, not buckskin, she doesn't have cream. Looks like bay under the white ^^
Cozmic Elite
05:37:07 
I didn't think twice for a moment since Buckskin AAs like me Lol
But she doesn't have cream.
Ravenwood Farm
05:35:51 
I think brown or bay?
Gemstone Stable
05:33:21 Snow❆Gem
@CE

Oh lovely! She's a buckskin pearl under the white! XD *boops*
Cozmic Elite
05:30:54 
-HEE Click-
Oh lil wild hiding prl
Hummingbird Meadows
05:30:03 Bird
@Dusty, thanks! I wasn't sure since the boots have pink in them and the dress doesn't have pink:
Savannah Stables
05:26:05 Dusty
Hummer
It's cute!
Hobo Queens Farm
05:22:19 Her Majesty
Am I the only Goober who thinks it is possible to play online horse games while cleaning my real life horse tack? How will I get all this saddle soap off my keyboard anyway?
Leafpool
05:18:22 Leaf
Moonas son rated ewe

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Art Critique Help Please! May 12, 2019 02:29 PM


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Hi!! I'm looking for some honest, down to earth critique on my art. What do I need to improve, what on my art looks good, the whole run down! Gimme your personal thoughts! Tear it apart. ;)

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Art Critique Help Please! May 12, 2019 02:32 PM


Lambo Farms
 
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I might would try to work on the lighting of the horses so it matches the background a little more, Other than that i think they look great!
Art Critique Help Please! May 12, 2019 03:18 PM


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Lambo Farms said:
I might would try to work on the lighting of the horses so it matches the background a little more, Other than that i think they look great!

Thank you!
Art Critique Help Please! May 12, 2019 06:14 PM


Jellos Warmbloods
 
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I think you're off to a really excellent start here. All these pieces look lovely!

I think the next things to work on, that really stick out to me, would be matching the tone of the horse to the background, and ground shadows. These will definitely refine themselves the more you practice.
Art Critique Help Please! May 12, 2019 06:57 PM


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Jellos Warmbloods said:
I think you're off to a really excellent start here. All these pieces look lovely!

I think the next things to work on, that really stick out to me, would be matching the tone of the horse to the background, and ground shadows. These will definitely refine themselves the more you practice.


Thank you, I really appreciate your help! I'm definitely going to try much harder, especially the shadow since I always seem to forget it lol
Art Critique Help Please! May 13, 2019 01:34 PM

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Gonna second Jello on those ground shadows, they'll make or break your art. I love your manes and tails a lot, they're hard to get the hang of, but I think there could be a little smudging around the outline of white markings to make it seem like there's overlapping hairs. Other than that, perhaps making the outline highlight a bit less strong in shadowed places, and just slightly less strong in general.
Art Critique Help Please! May 13, 2019 04:47 PM


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White Crown Stables said:
Gonna second Jello on those ground shadows, they'll make or break your art. I love your manes and tails a lot, they're hard to get the hang of, but I think there could be a little smudging around the outline of white markings to make it seem like there's overlapping hairs. Other than that, perhaps making the outline highlight a bit less strong in shadowed places, and just slightly less strong in general.

Thank you, I appreciate you taking the time to help! :)

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