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Horse Haven Stables
06:51:02 HHS⎹ Lyla
oh im so sorry i didnt realize my other post was still there!
Horse Haven Stables
06:48:27 HHS⎹ Lyla
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EEE-WWW Mares auction! Includes:
-Wild PEE-E SH Mare
-EEW/EWE/WEE SH and ISH Mares
-EWW SH Mare
-WWW ISH Mare
Come check 'em out! Need them gone :)
KPH Equestrian
06:35:28 Jake From State Farm
art auction, ends in 4 days
-HEE Click-
Mirage
05:53:42 
-HEE Click-
 Painted Performance
05:48:42 
-HEE Click-
EWE X colt
Whispering Wood Barn
05:18:32 ~Whispy~
193 WWW TBLB
-HEE Click-

193 WWW TB
-HEE Click-

My fellow color breeders, I am looking for new blood :) ISO:
-HEE Click-
Horse Haven Stables
04:50:28 HHS⎹ Lyla
-HEE Click-
EEE-WWW Mares auction! Includes:
-Wild PEE-E SH Mare
-EEW/EWE/WEE SH and ISH Mares
-EWW SH Mare
-WWW ISH Mare
Come check 'em out! Need them gone :)
Ironhorse
04:45:31 Sting
Looking for a WWE+ Knabby Brood for this RO.
Sunni
04:35:43 Sunni bunny
I am in need of Detergent, if you have one for sale message me.
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Check out this handsome EEE Irish Sport Horse Colt with a colorful Black Tobiano coat.
$10'000

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Constructive Criticism January 8, 2018 05:39 PM

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Hey! I'm just wondering where I can improve my art :) I haven't been doing for that long so any any help is appreciated!
This is my most recent piece:

https://horseeden.com/horse.php?id=15154277

Thanks!
Constructive Criticism January 8, 2018 05:49 PM


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my only thing i have to say is that the background looks a bit too blurry but otherwise i love this piece
Constructive Criticism January 8, 2018 10:58 PM


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$Wings of Glory$ said:
my only thing i have to say is that the background looks a bit too blurry but otherwise i love this piece


Partly agree with this. Maybe try and make the horse clearer/sharper to match the little baby tree next to it? Overall a beautiful piece. Great work.

EDIT: Also, maybe try playing with the highlights on the horse? Just look at the light source.

Edited at January 8, 2018 11:02 PM by Oceane Elites
Constructive Criticism January 8, 2018 11:07 PM

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Oceane Elites said:


$Wings of Glory$ said:
my only thing i have to say is that the background looks a bit too blurry but otherwise i love this piece


Partly agree with this. Maybe try and make the horse clearer/sharper to match the little baby tree next to it? Overall a beautiful piece. Great work.

EDIT: Also, maybe try playing with the highlights on the horse? Just look at the light source.


Yeah good point! I’m just starting to add highlights and lowlights into my manips now ao hopefully that will be fixed soon xD

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