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05:37:19 HHS⎹ Lyla
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-Wild PEE-E SH Mare
-EEW/EWE/WEE SH and ISH Mares
-EWW SH Mare
-WWW ISH Mare
Come check 'em out!
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ISO Semi-Custom Horse Avi!
Fantasy Horses
05:18:18 Bravery + AD ISH
Auction! Discounted Quality!
- ISH, TB, and WB!
- P+ rated
- EEE and Elite bravery!
- AD, SD, and bravery
- Wild captures, some maps used!
- Ages 2 & 3!
- Rare color like apricot and dapple grey!
- Mostly mares, a few stallions
- 1k to 2k ONLY!
- Ends on the 25th at 12pm GT!
-HEE Click-
Barbury Estates
05:14:23 Amelia
ISO an upgrade!! Please pm me!
Sunni
05:09:34 Sunni bunny
Looking for a white broodmares with a PPP rating for a quest's.
Message me,
Breed doesn't matter.
MakeEm Fancy
04:52:13 Ally 💜
EWW RID chimera filly
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Darkwood
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Skyfeather Stables
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SH and PON colour clear out! Ends in 13 hours!
Siren Sound Estates
03:54:49 S҉ Sem
Please help me test this WPP-W boy!
-HEE Click-
I will pay 2000 ebs as a thank you
NightClan
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Critique March 25, 2019 02:45 PM


Zephyr Elites
 
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Would love some critique on my most recent pieces.

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https://i.lensdump.com/i/WEW5xx.jpg

https://i.lensdump.com/i/WTfdVT.jpg

Also I currently have my prices set at 35k for a horse avatar, just wanted to know if you guys think thats too high.

Thanks.

Edited at March 25, 2019 03:02 PM by Zephyr Elites
Critique March 25, 2019 02:58 PM

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Hmm I can't see anything that I personally think could be improved , very pretty art though! :)
Critique March 26, 2019 12:43 PM

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For the first one, the horse looks like it's in blue or white light, while the background would be giving off orange/red light. The horse is also pretty light for the darkness of the background.
For the second one, I would work on adding shading to the mane and tail, because they don't look connected to the rest of the horse. I would also work on where shadows would be cast based on where the light is coming from.
Critique March 29, 2019 04:30 PM


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I think the prices are fine. Keep practising and getting better!♡
Critique April 5, 2019 12:51 AM

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Personally, I feel like the patterns on the first are too bright for the overall tone and lighting.The muzzle is also slightly blurred. I do love the movement of the tail on the second, very natural.

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