Horse Eden Eventing Game
Horse Eden Eventing Game


Year: 203   Season: Winter   
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Centura stable
07:25:59 Centura
hello Ruby
RubyWood
07:13:55 
hello!
Hibiscus Fields
07:02:25 
-HEE Click- zam color 1 of 9 that's cool
Mustang Willows
06:43:49 Charlie
Farewell to you too Centura
Centura stable
06:43:45 Centura
be back in a bit
Centura stable
06:43:37 Centura
I have to go get ready to ride now :)
Glacier Bay Farms
06:43:35 Arctic Cove Katz
Reading back over my posts, there is one I didn’t mean to post
Centura stable
06:43:23 Centura
charlie
farwell
Mustang Willows
06:43:00 Charlie
Well the horses are calling I guess I have to go
Mustang Willows
06:41:25 Charlie
Yes well I don’t want to but I get up when my kid wants too
Glacier Bay Farms
06:41:05 Arctic Cove Katz
Please delete the previous post
Centura stable
06:40:48 Centura
charlie
wow, my dog woke me up at 2am and I was so excited for riding I couldn't sleep. I'm exhausted now
Mustang Willows
06:40:46 Charlie
That’s how I feel about my kid
River
06:40:45 ♡ River
Charlie
Yep!
Glacier Bay Farms
06:40:38 Arctic Cove Katz
Demanding food
Glacier Bay Farms
06:40:28 Arctic Cove Katz
And when cats are demons they need to eat
Mustang Willows
06:40:19 Charlie
Okay thanks for telling me River
Mustang Willows
06:39:56 Charlie
I am a night owl or something
River
06:39:51 ♡ River
Charlie
It's not really a percentage, it just boosts the overall horse, so it could be a really shitty horse or a really awesome horse
Glacier Bay Farms
06:39:50 Arctic Cove Katz
But it’s hard to sleep when the sun is shining in the window

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Centura stable
07:25:59 Centura
hello Ruby
RubyWood
07:13:55 
hello!
Hibiscus Fields
07:02:25 
-HEE Click- zam color 1 of 9 that's cool
Mustang Willows
06:43:49 Charlie
Farewell to you too Centura
Centura stable
06:43:45 Centura
be back in a bit
Centura stable
06:43:37 Centura
I have to go get ready to ride now :)
Glacier Bay Farms
06:43:35 Arctic Cove Katz
Reading back over my posts, there is one I didn’t mean to post
Centura stable
06:43:23 Centura
charlie
farwell
Mustang Willows
06:43:00 Charlie
Well the horses are calling I guess I have to go
Mustang Willows
06:41:25 Charlie
Yes well I don’t want to but I get up when my kid wants too
Glacier Bay Farms
06:41:05 Arctic Cove Katz
Please delete the previous post
Centura stable
06:40:48 Centura
charlie
wow, my dog woke me up at 2am and I was so excited for riding I couldn't sleep. I'm exhausted now
Mustang Willows
06:40:46 Charlie
That’s how I feel about my kid
River
06:40:45 ♡ River
Charlie
Yep!
Glacier Bay Farms
06:40:38 Arctic Cove Katz
Demanding food
Glacier Bay Farms
06:40:28 Arctic Cove Katz
And when cats are demons they need to eat
Mustang Willows
06:40:19 Charlie
Okay thanks for telling me River
Mustang Willows
06:39:56 Charlie
I am a night owl or something
River
06:39:51 ♡ River
Charlie
It's not really a percentage, it just boosts the overall horse, so it could be a really shitty horse or a really awesome horse
Glacier Bay Farms
06:39:50 Arctic Cove Katz
But it’s hard to sleep when the sun is shining in the window

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Critique for a Newbie! December 8, 2021 02:14 PM

Former Stable
 
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So I've just started doing manips and by no means anywhere near perfect, but I thought I'd ask about my first completed piece. It's also a realllly big piece, so I'm already having trouble resizing it without losing most of the quality lol
Here it is:
https://postimg.cc/bZ9t7dLx
Critique for a Newbie! December 8, 2021 02:17 PM

The Golden Horse
 
Posts: 1809
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It's looks good! however i would proably thicken up the tail where it joins to the body. other than that it looks pretty good! I would ask somewhere between 15-50k for it
Critique for a Newbie! December 8, 2021 02:29 PM


Thistleberry Farm
 
Posts: 4433
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this is really well done for somebody new to art!
i have been doing manips on here for a while, so here is some advice <3
i feel like the horse is FAR too contrasted to the background, lower that contrast and up the brightness just a bit.
also if you understand how lighting works and if you are able to do that, it would be really nice to see a litthe bit of a lighter part around the horses back, because you can see in the background the sun shines through.
also it could be really nice to see some ripples in the reflection, you can do this by grabbing the smudge tool and setting it to high, and do some straight, curves or squiggly lines across the reflection to make it seem more realistic.
if you do all that, id say its probably worth 20-45k!
super well done, great job!
Critique for a Newbie! December 8, 2021 02:36 PM

Former Stable
 
Posts: 0
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Thank you so much guys!
Critique for a Newbie! December 8, 2021 02:42 PM


Over the Garden Wall
 
Posts: 857
#944628
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The horse feels really flat/2D and I think adding a little rim lighting or some very soft highlights could really make a difference.
I'm borrowing CC Knabs' piece from the Official Critique thread for an example:
Critique for a Newbie! December 9, 2021 07:32 PM


Wolf Dancer
 
Posts: 4158
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Great job, Starting Bid should be around 10-15k and AB 30k-40k

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