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Horse Eden Eventing Game

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Snitches' Stitches

07:40:20 Snitch

Okay, cutie, yeah you can stay -HEE Click-

07:37:05 Blu

Never seen one with Palomino as an option for chimera
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Rubygem

07:08:50 Asha ~ Ruby girl :D

ok i gotta go byee

Rubygem

07:05:22 Asha ~ Ruby girl :D

geez i was trying to do breed appovol and my lap top died then i plugged it in then it did a update lol

07:02:25

Hello Ivy :)

07:02:00

Oh no! Hats off to you though, that's dedication!

07:00:37 Ivy / poison ivy

hi

06:58:30 Storm

You're welcome. When I attempted to organize all of my barns, it froze the screen after a few, so it took 4 hours 🫠

06:55:34

Yeah, I'm on mobile using the desktop version, that's probably it. I'll try it again when I have access to my laptop again. Thanks! :)

06:53:14 Storm

Has to be on computer from what I've noticed

06:52:56 Storm

Normally you can move a single one. I've done that

06:52:12

The new-ish organization options for barns and pastures. You can make different "groups" for them now

06:51:03 Storm

What are you talking about?

06:44:28

I just made a new pastureland, but can't drop a singular pasture in it? It just takes them all lol. Is it a computer only type thing?

Minerva

06:10:47 Min

North, why not use the maps on capture days and sell any decent ones you get? Especially if you did a breed like KNN you'd probably make some money

iiSea

06:09:00 Sierra

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I'd reroll him if he wasn't 1/1.. I like to see my flashy lol

06:02:30 Loony/Loony Tune

Should I reroll?
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05:59:21 Hails

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I have never been happier

05:58:16 Loony/Loony Tune

Ummm okay
-HEE Click-

05:55:24 Heyy it's Capp

Ok cool!

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Snitches' Stitches

07:40:20 Snitch

Okay, cutie, yeah you can stay -HEE Click-

07:37:05 Blu

Never seen one with Palomino as an option for chimera
-HEE Click-

Rubygem

07:08:50 Asha ~ Ruby girl :D

ok i gotta go byee

Rubygem

07:05:22 Asha ~ Ruby girl :D

geez i was trying to do breed appovol and my lap top died then i plugged it in then it did a update lol

07:02:25

Hello Ivy :)

07:02:00

Oh no! Hats off to you though, that's dedication!

07:00:37 Ivy / poison ivy

hi

06:58:30 Storm

You're welcome. When I attempted to organize all of my barns, it froze the screen after a few, so it took 4 hours 🫠

06:55:34

Yeah, I'm on mobile using the desktop version, that's probably it. I'll try it again when I have access to my laptop again. Thanks! :)

06:53:14 Storm

Has to be on computer from what I've noticed

06:52:56 Storm

Normally you can move a single one. I've done that

06:52:12

The new-ish organization options for barns and pastures. You can make different "groups" for them now

06:51:03 Storm

What are you talking about?

06:44:28

I just made a new pastureland, but can't drop a singular pasture in it? It just takes them all lol. Is it a computer only type thing?

Minerva

06:10:47 Min

North, why not use the maps on capture days and sell any decent ones you get? Especially if you did a breed like KNN you'd probably make some money

iiSea

06:09:00 Sierra

-HEE Click-

I'd reroll him if he wasn't 1/1.. I like to see my flashy lol

06:02:30 Loony/Loony Tune

Should I reroll?
-HEE Click-

05:59:21 Hails

-HEE Click-

I have never been happier

05:58:16 Loony/Loony Tune

Ummm okay
-HEE Click-

05:55:24 Heyy it's Capp

Ok cool!

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September 29, 2019 01:58 PM

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Hello.. I will just have this for Critique of my art? I make it rarely so I won't put stuff up on here much.. Please be honest in what you think ;-; Thank chew!

https://postimg.cc/dLkmvCLb
What do you think of this? Is it O.K? I understand the coloring is a lot .. odd..

This is a WIP but I thought I'd share, I still have shading on the body, face hooves.. everywhere! And the mane & tail to color in... + everything else on the thing lol Also - This next piece is obviously not for use one HEE.

https://postimg.cc/7JkMSjb5
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Eek. Okay. Took alot of time off to work on line-art coloring and stuff. I decided to do a manip, so far I think it's ok. (It is a work in progress)

https://postimg.cc/SJzcWxW6

Does it seem ok so far?

Edited at December 30, 2019 11:45 PM by Broken Meadows

September 29, 2019 02:00 PM

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Fixed link

https://postimg.cc/dLkmvCLb

Edited at September 29, 2019 02:00 PM by ~Running Free~

September 29, 2019 03:46 PM

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Thank you @Freedom Elites
I don't know why the link won't work..?

September 29, 2019 11:03 PM

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I like it but it does look a bit odd with the lineart horse against such a realistic background.

October 3, 2019 01:17 PM

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I think the colouring is lovely,but the mane/rail needs a bit more...shape?

October 5, 2019 09:13 PM

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Coloring highlights and shadows on the horses would improve it a lot

October 22, 2019 11:14 PM

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Thank you all! I forgot about this forum :/

I have been working on shading / fitting the horses into different backgrounds.

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