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Legacy Elm
04:20:48 Gabs
homozygous recessive (mumu) allows them to be mushroom?
Chimera Collector
04:20:48 
Yeah basically
Legacy Elm
04:20:16 Gabs
oh so they are literally just the color of a mushroom
Vancouver
04:19:36 Ana / Van
The gene mumu
Chimera Collector
04:19:25 
Arctic
-HEE Click-
This is a mushroom
Legacy Elm
04:19:17 Gabs
what makes them mushroom? I saw a few yesterday, and they were all different colors
Vancouver
04:19:12 Ana / Van
-HEE Click-
Mushroom
Vancouver
04:18:41 Ana / Van
-HEE Click-
Ohhh
Glacier Bay Farms
04:18:25 Arctic Cove Katz
A new horse coat color
Legacy Elm
04:17:55 Gabs
what is mushroom LOL
Santana Rising
04:17:41 San
I know he's just PPP, but I feared he will only be SPS and his dad is only hetero mush.
DarkRed
04:17:29 
Angels~

I see you have lots of brindles! Those were my favorite last time I was here
Dash Warmbloods
04:17:10 
These mushroom quests are mean
Chimera Collector
04:16:50 
Guys look at this Beautiful tobiano ❤️
-HEE Click-
Glacier Bay Farms
04:16:45 Arctic Cove Katz
I might have to steal one of her future foals, Van
Angels angels
04:16:41 [1k+ brindles] Angel
I am starting a wilb bay ratings project. I have five matches with EWE-EWW mares with a EWE wild bay AA dude and one embryo from a EWE TB girl to a WWW LB dude for RO :3
Legacy Elm
04:16:28 Gabs
San, those black hooves are adorable
DarkRed
04:16:19 
What’s good for breeding? Really just the colors and patterns?
Angels angels
04:15:49 [1k+ brindles] Angel
DarkRed
Good for show horse. Trash for breeding lol
Legacy Elm
04:15:33 Gabs
wild bay is actually a color, how about that!

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Legacy Elm
04:20:48 Gabs
homozygous recessive (mumu) allows them to be mushroom?
Chimera Collector
04:20:48 
Yeah basically
Legacy Elm
04:20:16 Gabs
oh so they are literally just the color of a mushroom
Vancouver
04:19:36 Ana / Van
The gene mumu
Chimera Collector
04:19:25 
Arctic
-HEE Click-
This is a mushroom
Legacy Elm
04:19:17 Gabs
what makes them mushroom? I saw a few yesterday, and they were all different colors
Vancouver
04:19:12 Ana / Van
-HEE Click-
Mushroom
Vancouver
04:18:41 Ana / Van
-HEE Click-
Ohhh
Glacier Bay Farms
04:18:25 Arctic Cove Katz
A new horse coat color
Legacy Elm
04:17:55 Gabs
what is mushroom LOL
Santana Rising
04:17:41 San
I know he's just PPP, but I feared he will only be SPS and his dad is only hetero mush.
DarkRed
04:17:29 
Angels~

I see you have lots of brindles! Those were my favorite last time I was here
Dash Warmbloods
04:17:10 
These mushroom quests are mean
Chimera Collector
04:16:50 
Guys look at this Beautiful tobiano ❤️
-HEE Click-
Glacier Bay Farms
04:16:45 Arctic Cove Katz
I might have to steal one of her future foals, Van
Angels angels
04:16:41 [1k+ brindles] Angel
I am starting a wilb bay ratings project. I have five matches with EWE-EWW mares with a EWE wild bay AA dude and one embryo from a EWE TB girl to a WWW LB dude for RO :3
Legacy Elm
04:16:28 Gabs
San, those black hooves are adorable
DarkRed
04:16:19 
What’s good for breeding? Really just the colors and patterns?
Angels angels
04:15:49 [1k+ brindles] Angel
DarkRed
Good for show horse. Trash for breeding lol
Legacy Elm
04:15:33 Gabs
wild bay is actually a color, how about that!

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Critiques Needed | Tasi September 26, 2021 06:13 PM


Spirtasi Whims
 
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I did this earlier in the year and I think I want to do it again. I want you guys to be as constructive with your critiques as you can be, last time you guys were really good and I got some really good pointers and ways to improve along with what I seemed to struggle with *cough* lighting *cough*. Rip these pieces to shreds and let me know what I could do better!
These are my most recent pieces that I can show
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Critiques Needed | Tasi September 26, 2021 10:19 PM


Chidori
 
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There's not much I can find wrong with these they are beautiful! But if you want me to be picky here's what I noticed:
On the second picture the front left sock of the mare is inconsistent with the other 3 socks. I would brighten that one up to match the lighting of the other ones. Or you could darken the back left leg to match the front.
The third picture looks a little jagged on the back of the horse. You can try softening your eraser brush just a tad bit so your lines arent so harsh. This will also help your lines look more fluid and natural.
The last picture is amazing but it looks like his legs are cut off to me. Something that will help him look more like he's standing in tall grass is to take your eraser brush and make grass blade strokes on his legs to let the background show through.
These are all very small details and your art is very impressive! Keep up the good work!

Edited at September 26, 2021 10:23 PM by Chidori
Critiques Needed | Tasi September 26, 2021 10:30 PM


Spirtasi Whims
 
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Thank you so much Chidori!
Critiques Needed | Tasi October 1, 2021 08:46 AM


Spirtasi Whims
 
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Still looking!!
Critiques Needed | Tasi October 2, 2021 03:51 AM


Riverbreeze Stables
 
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So, I had to really look over the images, for a very long time. They are beautiful! And I am an absolute fan of your fourth image, the colour, lighting and shading are absolutely gorgeous. It is also difficult to find things to fix since art is very objective and you are talented.

Now, other than what Chidori has mentioned. Some critiques, or more like tips you can take to your new works.
- Your images are very heavily contrasted, especially the third one. It hides a lot of details that could add to your image, like colour, texture, or shading. I think that's your technique, which looks cool and not really a thing to "fix". But to try something new, you could try something less stark. Like a bright/softer image to test your abilities?
- The first image looks like it's missing a back leg. Not sure if that's the stock or not, but I noticed it and it did make the image look a little off.
- The wings on your second image could be a little more detailed at the joint, and they sort of look like they sit on the withers (unless that's the purpose and I missed it). Nothing too noticeable, but adding in feathers growing to the horse's shoulder, or defining the muscles of the wing attached to the shoulders just add that little extra detail that's nice.

That's about all I see, your work is truly amazing and always nice to see.

Edited at October 2, 2021 03:56 AM by Riverbreeze Stables
Critiques Needed | Tasi October 2, 2021 03:36 PM


Spirtasi Whims
 
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Still looking for more critiques anything that hasn't been said before would be awesome!
Critiques Needed | Tasi October 8, 2021 09:37 AM


Wings Of Glory
 
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I would say the hair could be a bit thicker and fuller:] really just me nit-picking but I love the theme of these and I feel like the top and second one the horses don't quite match the background color wise so maybe try playing with that a little bit more
The last one I have almost no critique other than the shadow could have been a tad darker and the third one Is just stunning with the smooth skin and shading but I do feel like all together your pieces could benefit from some more small details like some accessories or some things that match the theme of the piece as a whole
Edit: I do also notice this quote frequently with your art that your horses cut out is fairly rough and sometimes has a few places where it still has some background

Edited at October 8, 2021 09:42 AM by Wings Of Glory

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