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Desperately seeking a tesoro straw!!
Port Royal Equines
01:29:05 ISH Bravery 4 Sale!
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Brindle, Bravery, and Geldings for sale! I need em gone ASAP. All cheap.
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EEE TB stallion for breeding - need EEP of any combo to breed, known EE producer and EEE.

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Sono Reizin
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Critque on this piece♡ April 20, 2019 05:04 AM

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https://i.postimg.cc/dt9x46tr/Untitled48-1.png
So this is the black horse piece I have done, and I don't know what it isays but it's not quite right ,so anything you can spot PLEASE for the love of God point it out XD also does anyone know how you make things look softer on ibispaint?

Edited at April 20, 2019 05:08 AM by Raven Hollow Elite
Critque on this piece♡ April 20, 2019 04:48 PM


Emerald Eventing
 
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I think you have a good start.
Personally, I think you should play around with the lighting a bit as the background and horse lighting does not match.
Also, the horses feet aren’t blended into the snow very well.
One last thing. The tail and feathers look a little messy. There are some great hair tutorials out there that I recommend you check out.
This is pretty much my hair painting technique:
https://www.deviantart.com/ehrendi/art/Mane-and-tail-tutorial-189546528

Nice job overall :)
Keep practicing!!!

Edited at April 20, 2019 04:48 PM by Emerald Eventing
Critque on this piece♡ April 20, 2019 10:30 PM

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I'm seconding everything Emerald said. Also, the lines on the horse's shadow are very sharp, when in that lighting they'd be rather soft. I would recommend blurring the background a bit, too; it's very busy and draws attention away from the horse.
Critque on this piece♡ May 8, 2019 10:16 PM

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Pretty much what Emerald said. Go around with the eraser tool one more time since I saw some green stuff (grass) around the hair. And maybe change the eye color and/or make it brighter. Outlining would be great. The hair needs some softening and less smudging. And maybe make the shadow a bit more faint as it’s on snow, so it should be a bit more faint! :)
Critque on this piece♡ May 9, 2019 01:35 PM


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You have a really good start. In addition with what has been said I think if you can try blurring the background a little it may help the horse pop. You could also experiment with lighting to bring attention to certain areas.

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