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Year: 192   Season: Winter   
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Dash and Duchess
12:41:10 DD | ~Squizard~
Ivy, XD we are lol!
Lynx Glory
12:40:45 ⛈ whisper/lynx
ooh nice!

also ivy i didnt see your post either sorry xD

i think it's really cool that you guys speak german! I tried to learn a while ago, i might remember a bit but forgot most. I have german relatives so i wanted to learn it for them xD
Crestwood Eq.
12:40:06 Ivy / poison ivy
DD

German twinssss
Dash and Duchess
12:39:18 DD | ~Squizard~
Lynx, Oo!! I also know a few languages! (badly πŸ’€) I speak a bit of German and Spanish :D
Lynx Glory
12:38:38 ⛈ whisper/lynx
or cool xD
Lynx Glory
12:38:32 ⛈ whisper/lynx
that wild ToT
Crestwood Eq.
12:38:06 Ivy / poison ivy
and 6 bedrooms and 5.5 baths. it's only a family of 5
Crestwood Eq.
12:37:38 Ivy / poison ivy
i guess that's what you get when you have a neurosurgeon for a dad. it even has a pretty long pool too. and there is a golf course right behind them
Crestwood Eq.
12:36:41 Ivy / poison ivy
it has an elevator for god's sake
Lynx Glory
12:36:34 ⛈ whisper/lynx
ivy
dang
Crestwood Eq.
12:36:07 Ivy / poison ivy
the house wylder and his fam live in has an estimated value of over 3 million USD!!!!!! That's over 4.1 million canadian dollars

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i can speak spanish, german, and i know a few french words
Lynx Glory
12:35:26 ⛈ whisper/lynx
DD
yess :D
Lynx Glory
12:35:21 ⛈ whisper/lynx
ivy
whatt
Dash and Duchess
12:35:13 DD | ~Squizard~
Ooo we talking languages? :D
Crestwood Eq.
12:34:54 Ivy / poison ivy
guess what
Crestwood Eq.
12:34:44 Ivy / poison ivy
lynx
Lynx Glory
12:33:35 ⛈ whisper/lynx
loony
ooh that's nice :)
Lynx Glory
12:32:51 ⛈ whisper/lynx
in other words im french canadian
Lynx Glory
12:31:34 ⛈ whisper/lynx
anna
oh nice :) i speak french lol, i was born in a french place but not france lol ^^
Crestwood Eq.
12:14:40 Ivy / poison ivy
hi trish

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Dash and Duchess
12:41:10 DD | ~Squizard~
Ivy, XD we are lol!
Lynx Glory
12:40:45 ⛈ whisper/lynx
ooh nice!

also ivy i didnt see your post either sorry xD

i think it's really cool that you guys speak german! I tried to learn a while ago, i might remember a bit but forgot most. I have german relatives so i wanted to learn it for them xD
Crestwood Eq.
12:40:06 Ivy / poison ivy
DD

German twinssss
Dash and Duchess
12:39:18 DD | ~Squizard~
Lynx, Oo!! I also know a few languages! (badly πŸ’€) I speak a bit of German and Spanish :D
Lynx Glory
12:38:38 ⛈ whisper/lynx
or cool xD
Lynx Glory
12:38:32 ⛈ whisper/lynx
that wild ToT
Crestwood Eq.
12:38:06 Ivy / poison ivy
and 6 bedrooms and 5.5 baths. it's only a family of 5
Crestwood Eq.
12:37:38 Ivy / poison ivy
i guess that's what you get when you have a neurosurgeon for a dad. it even has a pretty long pool too. and there is a golf course right behind them
Crestwood Eq.
12:36:41 Ivy / poison ivy
it has an elevator for god's sake
Lynx Glory
12:36:34 ⛈ whisper/lynx
ivy
dang
Crestwood Eq.
12:36:07 Ivy / poison ivy
the house wylder and his fam live in has an estimated value of over 3 million USD!!!!!! That's over 4.1 million canadian dollars

--------

i can speak spanish, german, and i know a few french words
Lynx Glory
12:35:26 ⛈ whisper/lynx
DD
yess :D
Lynx Glory
12:35:21 ⛈ whisper/lynx
ivy
whatt
Dash and Duchess
12:35:13 DD | ~Squizard~
Ooo we talking languages? :D
Crestwood Eq.
12:34:54 Ivy / poison ivy
guess what
Crestwood Eq.
12:34:44 Ivy / poison ivy
lynx
Lynx Glory
12:33:35 ⛈ whisper/lynx
loony
ooh that's nice :)
Lynx Glory
12:32:51 ⛈ whisper/lynx
in other words im french canadian
Lynx Glory
12:31:34 ⛈ whisper/lynx
anna
oh nice :) i speak french lol, i was born in a french place but not france lol ^^
Crestwood Eq.
12:14:40 Ivy / poison ivy
hi trish

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Critque on this piece♡ April 20, 2019 05:04 AM

Former Stable
 
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https://i.postimg.cc/dt9x46tr/Untitled48-1.png
So this is the black horse piece I have done, and I don't know what it isays but it's not quite right ,so anything you can spot PLEASE for the love of God point it out XD also does anyone know how you make things look softer on ibispaint?

Edited at April 20, 2019 05:08 AM by Raven Hollow Elite
Critque on this piece♡ April 20, 2019 04:48 PM


Emerald Eventing
 
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I think you have a good start.
Personally, I think you should play around with the lighting a bit as the background and horse lighting does not match.
Also, the horses feet aren’t blended into the snow very well.
One last thing. The tail and feathers look a little messy. There are some great hair tutorials out there that I recommend you check out.
This is pretty much my hair painting technique:
https://www.deviantart.com/ehrendi/art/Mane-and-tail-tutorial-189546528

Nice job overall :)
Keep practicing!!!

Edited at April 20, 2019 04:48 PM by Emerald Eventing
Critque on this piece♡ April 20, 2019 10:30 PM

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I'm seconding everything Emerald said. Also, the lines on the horse's shadow are very sharp, when in that lighting they'd be rather soft. I would recommend blurring the background a bit, too; it's very busy and draws attention away from the horse.
Critque on this piece♡ May 8, 2019 10:16 PM

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Pretty much what Emerald said. Go around with the eraser tool one more time since I saw some green stuff (grass) around the hair. And maybe change the eye color and/or make it brighter. Outlining would be great. The hair needs some softening and less smudging. And maybe make the shadow a bit more faint as itΒ’s on snow, so it should be a bit more faint! :)
Critque on this piece♡ May 9, 2019 01:35 PM


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You have a really good start. In addition with what has been said I think if you can try blurring the background a little it may help the horse pop. You could also experiment with lighting to bring attention to certain areas.

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