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Emerald Estate
04:27:40 Varaa
High-level KNN and SH geldings for sale, 2k
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Unwanted Ones
04:21:10 
Selling upgrade 160k pm me

Hundreds of cheap brood mares in my stables
Narran Park
04:17:15 Sting
EEE X & TB Auction.
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She Craves Genesis
03:23:55 pheezy 2
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All 1k PPP-PEE Color TB and X Mares, most are level 2 or 3.

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PEE Mares 1k except for Tuki. She's 4k because shes an EWW producer but I'll take the best offer.
EPP Frame RID Mare 2k
EWE Tobiano Chestnut X Filly 30k
Horse Haven Stables
03:20:14 HHS⎹ Lyla
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EEE-WWW Mares auction! Includes:
-Wild PEE-E SH Mare
-EEW/EWE/WEE SH and ISH Mares
-EWW SH Mare
-WWW ISH Mare
Come check 'em out! Need them gone :)
Foal Me Once Farms
02:08:00 Roan🦋⃤
Selling a handful of my horses.
Stallions and mares, you can find them in my stud barn and personal barn,
all are some variations of WW.
My shop is also stocked.

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Fluffy's Cosy Home
01:58:57 Fluffy
Auction:
*World Class
*EEE
*PEE combo
*Colour
*Chimera
*Rares
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I have:
*WWW/WW Straws
*Studs
*Items in my store
*Decors
*Sale horses
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Cynical Stables
01:36:33 
40 horses for auction, pretty cheap and 500ebs bid increment
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MakeEm Fancy
01:07:30 Ally 💜
WPP KNN mare
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Skyrim
12:40:36 Wynter/Ghostly
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6 year old WWE rated RID stallion for sale at 300k or offer. Has produced EWE's and EEE's.

I also have EWE RID mares for 70k and EEE RID mares for 15k. Feel free to offer.

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Emerald Estate
04:27:40 Varaa
High-level KNN and SH geldings for sale, 2k
-HEE Click-
Unwanted Ones
04:21:10 
Selling upgrade 160k pm me

Hundreds of cheap brood mares in my stables
Narran Park
04:17:15 Sting
EEE X & TB Auction.
-HEE Click-
She Craves Genesis
03:23:55 pheezy 2
-HEE Click-
All 1k PPP-PEE Color TB and X Mares, most are level 2 or 3.

-HEE Click-
PEE Mares 1k except for Tuki. She's 4k because shes an EWW producer but I'll take the best offer.
EPP Frame RID Mare 2k
EWE Tobiano Chestnut X Filly 30k
Horse Haven Stables
03:20:14 HHS⎹ Lyla
-HEE Click-
EEE-WWW Mares auction! Includes:
-Wild PEE-E SH Mare
-EEW/EWE/WEE SH and ISH Mares
-EWW SH Mare
-WWW ISH Mare
Come check 'em out! Need them gone :)
Foal Me Once Farms
02:08:00 Roan🦋⃤
Selling a handful of my horses.
Stallions and mares, you can find them in my stud barn and personal barn,
all are some variations of WW.
My shop is also stocked.

-HEE Click-
Fluffy's Cosy Home
01:58:57 Fluffy
Auction:
*World Class
*EEE
*PEE combo
*Colour
*Chimera
*Rares
-HEE Click-

I have:
*WWW/WW Straws
*Studs
*Items in my store
*Decors
*Sale horses
-HEE Click-
Cynical Stables
01:36:33 
40 horses for auction, pretty cheap and 500ebs bid increment
-HEE Click-
MakeEm Fancy
01:07:30 Ally 💜
WPP KNN mare
-HEE Click-
Skyrim
12:40:36 Wynter/Ghostly
-HEE Click-
6 year old WWE rated RID stallion for sale at 300k or offer. Has produced EWE's and EEE's.

I also have EWE RID mares for 70k and EEE RID mares for 15k. Feel free to offer.

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Critque on this piece♡ April 20, 2019 05:04 AM

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https://i.postimg.cc/dt9x46tr/Untitled48-1.png
So this is the black horse piece I have done, and I don't know what it isays but it's not quite right ,so anything you can spot PLEASE for the love of God point it out XD also does anyone know how you make things look softer on ibispaint?

Edited at April 20, 2019 05:08 AM by Raven Hollow Elite
Critque on this piece♡ April 20, 2019 04:48 PM


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I think you have a good start.
Personally, I think you should play around with the lighting a bit as the background and horse lighting does not match.
Also, the horses feet aren’t blended into the snow very well.
One last thing. The tail and feathers look a little messy. There are some great hair tutorials out there that I recommend you check out.
This is pretty much my hair painting technique:
https://www.deviantart.com/ehrendi/art/Mane-and-tail-tutorial-189546528

Nice job overall :)
Keep practicing!!!

Edited at April 20, 2019 04:48 PM by Emerald Eventing
Critque on this piece♡ April 20, 2019 10:30 PM

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I'm seconding everything Emerald said. Also, the lines on the horse's shadow are very sharp, when in that lighting they'd be rather soft. I would recommend blurring the background a bit, too; it's very busy and draws attention away from the horse.
Critque on this piece♡ May 8, 2019 10:16 PM

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Pretty much what Emerald said. Go around with the eraser tool one more time since I saw some green stuff (grass) around the hair. And maybe change the eye color and/or make it brighter. Outlining would be great. The hair needs some softening and less smudging. And maybe make the shadow a bit more faint as it’s on snow, so it should be a bit more faint! :)
Critque on this piece♡ May 9, 2019 01:35 PM


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You have a really good start. In addition with what has been said I think if you can try blurring the background a little it may help the horse pop. You could also experiment with lighting to bring attention to certain areas.

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