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Gaelic Gladiacres
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-HEE Click- EEE X mare for sale, training tracked and maiden as of RO today! Snap her up quick for cheap, offers welcome! Feel free to check out the rest of the sale offerings while you're there--studs, gelds, broods, foals, bravery, rated/tested/trained and tracked. Trained bravery horses are great for bit hunting for the new gear! 😉
Elysium Opalus
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Rehoming WWE-WWWs
World Class braves
PON, AA, and more
-HEE Click-
-HEE Click-

Seeking high quality non-ai artist for fantasy horse art of either one of these horses:
-Click-

Grab rusty bits for the new horse decor event
-HEE Click-
Dream Stables
12:08:39 Ava
EEE Broods need bred before the night ends!
3k
-HEE Click-
Westspot Equine
12:08:11 
ISO: WWW Sport Pony to breed to 1-3 mares (EEW) year 204.
Eagles Peak
12:02:22 
Join Sport Horse Finatics to participate in our Canada Day contest! Prizes up to 100k!

-HEE Click-
Port Royal Equines
11:53:09 ISO Brave EWW ISH
Last call!! Freshman ISH straws. Free to EWW+ mares.
-HEE Click-

-HEE Click-
ISH ABLB, LB, Unplaced sire thread. Check it out! Straws are in store.
Wolf Dancer
11:40:06 Wolf Burger (Leg)
ISO of Rerolls looking for someone willing to take WWW LB mare brood or embryo for 204 as a trade! PM me please!
Solstheim Manor
11:31:16 Sol
selling a 1-month upgrade for 90k :)
Elysium Opalus
11:29:33 free palestine
Rehoming WWE-WWWs
World Class braves
PON, AA, and more
-HEE Click-
-HEE Click-

Seeking high quality non-ai artist for fantasy horse art of either one of these horses:
-Click-

Cheap item shop restock:
-HEE Click-
MakeEm Fancy
10:55:40 Ally 💜
Level 3 and 4 geldings 2k each
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In need of some criticism!! August 19, 2020 12:42 AM


Solasta Farms
 
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Hi friends, I just recently tried photo manipulation for the first time and would like to know what everyone thinks! I do notice some minor technical mistakes that were ignored because I was too tired (lol.) I would love some advice on coat recoloring and manes/tails especially!
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Just for context, the head and neck belonged to a bay horse and the body belonged to a grey. They were spliced together and recolored!

Edited at August 19, 2020 12:44 AM by Rose-Moor Stables
In need of some criticism!! August 19, 2020 09:01 AM


Jellos Warmbloods
 
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I think overall you did really nice with this. I love the color scheme you used, the pose you created is attractive, and I find your mane and tail technique very fitting for your style.

I do see a few things that I think if you worked on could very much improve the overall results in the image.

The first thing i noticed, is that while blended together very well, the head and neck are a bit small for the rest of the body, and the neck ties in unusually high. Ideally the neck should join the body more towards the midpoint of the upper chest. I see you have drawn in a bit of a "y" shaped shadow here. I would of joined the neck at the low point of that y.

The horse also seems to be lacking pastern length and the hoofs are at a slightly unique shape and angle. I understand that most of this was probably drawn on, so a brush up on hoof shape and lower leg anatomy will probably help here.

And the very final thing i noticed is that overall lack of ground shadowing. Horses cast shadows, and the help greatly in the appearence of "grounding" the horse in the image. With such an overcast lighting, you wont have a harsh dark ground shadow, but there would still be a shadow. :)

Overall you're headed in a great direction and the piece ties together well.

In need of some criticism!! August 19, 2020 12:29 PM


Solasta Farms
 
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Jellos Warmbloods said:

I think overall you did really nice with this. I love the color scheme you used, the pose you created is attractive, and I find your mane and tail technique very fitting for your style.

I do see a few things that I think if you worked on could very much improve the overall results in the image.

The first thing i noticed, is that while blended together very well, the head and neck are a bit small for the rest of the body, and the neck ties in unusually high. Ideally the neck should join the body more towards the midpoint of the upper chest. I see you have drawn in a bit of a "y" shaped shadow here. I would of joined the neck at the low point of that y.

The horse also seems to be lacking pastern length and the hoofs are at a slightly unique shape and angle. I understand that most of this was probably drawn on, so a brush up on hoof shape and lower leg anatomy will probably help here.

And the very final thing i noticed is that overall lack of ground shadowing. Horses cast shadows, and the help greatly in the appearence of "grounding" the horse in the image. With such an overcast lighting, you wont have a harsh dark ground shadow, but there would still be a shadow. :)

Overall you're headed in a great direction and the piece ties together well.



Thank you so much for this lovely advice! I definitely see what you're saying!

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