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Portrait Paints Stud
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Sunni
You really should find other ways to amuse yourself
Sunni
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Pretty good other than massive back pain.
Glacier Bay Cove
09:27:45 Arctic Katz
How have you been doing
Glacier Bay Cove
09:20:44 Arctic Katz
Been busy bouncing back and forth between HEE and working on art projects
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Hi cove what's up?
Glacier Bay Cove
09:08:34 Arctic Katz
Good night, Gem
Gemstone Stable
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Good night everyone!
Glacier Bay Cove
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Desserts for a future trivia category
Thunder~Country
09:03:11 
I need to clean up my barns but I feel like a hoarder cause everytime I go im gonna free it cause it sucks then I go nvm it's cute keep idk what to do lol
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Insignia Elites
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-HEE Click-
Gemstone Stable
08:45:37 Snow❆Gem
@piper

LMAO If I wasn't such an introvert and broke, maybe...
Snow Stable
08:39:43 Snow❆Gem
@bird

LMAO Wouldn't be good enough to catch a trespasser though. >.>
Riverchase Castle
08:38:23 Piper
Snow, I totally would wear it.
Hummingbird Meadows
08:34:34 Bird
@Snow gem, that way your eyes can be your own camera!
Snow Stable
08:32:26 Snow❆Gem
Love Amazon! lol
Looking up game cameras and it offers, QuikCamo 3D Leafy Hooded 1/4 Zip Pullover Top. Great idea! New fashion statement for only $70! LMAO (I don't hunt.)

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Eclair
08:29:10 
Pragma
AD it is then
Pragma
08:27:58 Prag/Liz
Up to you Eclair. SD level up faster and make money faster, but then they reach level ten faster. AD take longer to be ready to show, but you can show them in every discipline, so they often make you more money in the long run.
Eclair
08:24:50 
Chat, I need help. SD or AD gelds?
Glacier Bay Cove
08:24:40 Arctic Katz
Nice, Sunny

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Portrait Paints Stud
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Sunni
You really should find other ways to amuse yourself
Sunni
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Pretty good other than massive back pain.
Glacier Bay Cove
09:27:45 Arctic Katz
How have you been doing
Glacier Bay Cove
09:20:44 Arctic Katz
Been busy bouncing back and forth between HEE and working on art projects
Sunni
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Hi cove what's up?
Glacier Bay Cove
09:08:34 Arctic Katz
Good night, Gem
Gemstone Stable
09:07:51 Snow❆Gem
Good night everyone!
Glacier Bay Cove
09:05:57 Arctic Katz
Desserts for a future trivia category
Thunder~Country
09:03:11 
I need to clean up my barns but I feel like a hoarder cause everytime I go im gonna free it cause it sucks then I go nvm it's cute keep idk what to do lol
Storm Racers
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Howdy chat
Insignia Elites
08:51:44 Em
Finally got a WWE instead of a EWW :D
-HEE Click-
Gemstone Stable
08:45:37 Snow❆Gem
@piper

LMAO If I wasn't such an introvert and broke, maybe...
Snow Stable
08:39:43 Snow❆Gem
@bird

LMAO Wouldn't be good enough to catch a trespasser though. >.>
Riverchase Castle
08:38:23 Piper
Snow, I totally would wear it.
Hummingbird Meadows
08:34:34 Bird
@Snow gem, that way your eyes can be your own camera!
Snow Stable
08:32:26 Snow❆Gem
Love Amazon! lol
Looking up game cameras and it offers, QuikCamo 3D Leafy Hooded 1/4 Zip Pullover Top. Great idea! New fashion statement for only $70! LMAO (I don't hunt.)

-Click-
Eclair
08:29:10 
Pragma
AD it is then
Pragma
08:27:58 Prag/Liz
Up to you Eclair. SD level up faster and make money faster, but then they reach level ten faster. AD take longer to be ready to show, but you can show them in every discipline, so they often make you more money in the long run.
Eclair
08:24:50 
Chat, I need help. SD or AD gelds?
Glacier Bay Cove
08:24:40 Arctic Katz
Nice, Sunny

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In need of some criticism!! August 19, 2020 12:42 AM


Solasta Farms
 
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Hi friends, I just recently tried photo manipulation for the first time and would like to know what everyone thinks! I do notice some minor technical mistakes that were ignored because I was too tired (lol.) I would love some advice on coat recoloring and manes/tails especially!
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Just for context, the head and neck belonged to a bay horse and the body belonged to a grey. They were spliced together and recolored!

Edited at August 19, 2020 12:44 AM by Rose-Moor Stables
In need of some criticism!! August 19, 2020 09:01 AM


Jellos Warmbloods
 
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I think overall you did really nice with this. I love the color scheme you used, the pose you created is attractive, and I find your mane and tail technique very fitting for your style.

I do see a few things that I think if you worked on could very much improve the overall results in the image.

The first thing i noticed, is that while blended together very well, the head and neck are a bit small for the rest of the body, and the neck ties in unusually high. Ideally the neck should join the body more towards the midpoint of the upper chest. I see you have drawn in a bit of a "y" shaped shadow here. I would of joined the neck at the low point of that y.

The horse also seems to be lacking pastern length and the hoofs are at a slightly unique shape and angle. I understand that most of this was probably drawn on, so a brush up on hoof shape and lower leg anatomy will probably help here.

And the very final thing i noticed is that overall lack of ground shadowing. Horses cast shadows, and the help greatly in the appearence of "grounding" the horse in the image. With such an overcast lighting, you wont have a harsh dark ground shadow, but there would still be a shadow. :)

Overall you're headed in a great direction and the piece ties together well.

In need of some criticism!! August 19, 2020 12:29 PM


Solasta Farms
 
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Jellos Warmbloods said:

I think overall you did really nice with this. I love the color scheme you used, the pose you created is attractive, and I find your mane and tail technique very fitting for your style.

I do see a few things that I think if you worked on could very much improve the overall results in the image.

The first thing i noticed, is that while blended together very well, the head and neck are a bit small for the rest of the body, and the neck ties in unusually high. Ideally the neck should join the body more towards the midpoint of the upper chest. I see you have drawn in a bit of a "y" shaped shadow here. I would of joined the neck at the low point of that y.

The horse also seems to be lacking pastern length and the hoofs are at a slightly unique shape and angle. I understand that most of this was probably drawn on, so a brush up on hoof shape and lower leg anatomy will probably help here.

And the very final thing i noticed is that overall lack of ground shadowing. Horses cast shadows, and the help greatly in the appearence of "grounding" the horse in the image. With such an overcast lighting, you wont have a harsh dark ground shadow, but there would still be a shadow. :)

Overall you're headed in a great direction and the piece ties together well.



Thank you so much for this lovely advice! I definitely see what you're saying!

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