Horse Eden Eventing Game
Horse Eden Eventing Game


Year: 193   Season: Fall   
$: 0
Forecast: Breezy and Pleasant
Forecast:
Sun 10:55am  
Stables Online:  101 
Chatbox
Rising Stars Stable
09:53:29 Willow ~ AA Breeder
I'm making sure they meant to
Kingswood Elite
09:52:56 ghost
Woahh congrats willow, lucky!
Rising Stars Stable
09:52:28 Willow ~ AA Breeder
someone just gave me 70k
Glacier Bay Cove
09:50:24 Arctic Katz
I was just surprised
Glacier Bay Cove
09:50:09 Arctic Katz
It's not a big deal
Glacier Bay Cove
09:49:40 Arctic Katz
No
Minerva
09:48:41 Min
Did you already log in earlier?
Glacier Bay Cove
09:48:11 Arctic Katz
Huh, first day without a sign in bonus, weird
Minerva
09:48:01 Min
It's a shame she's got such an ugly pattern on her, but I'm not going to be rerolling lol
Rising Stars Stable
09:46:34 Willow ~ AA Breeder
Min
Ooh, that's my favorite color
Minerva
09:45:38 Min
-HEE Click-

Ooooh
Santana Rising
09:41:51 San
gold embryo tokens are a godsend, Willow! xD
Santana Rising
09:41:01 San
I need to name my two EEE - W freshies. I don't test anything without a name!
ArcticLights
09:40:07 Ceci / (Call me) AL
Friendly reminder about our trivia at 1pm today :)
Rising Stars Stable
09:39:56 Willow ~ AA Breeder
Alrighty, time to save an extra 60k, XD
Minerva
09:39:39 Min
-HEE Click-

Ooh fingers crossed for his bravery to come out nicely
Alpine Acres
09:38:45 Lily/Alpine
Definitely Willow :)
Ravenwood Farm
09:38:37 
I would, she has a good track record
Santana Rising
09:38:16 San
who not? I just remembered to pull the last batch of embryos for some of my retiring girls. No idea when I will use those.
Rising Stars Stable
09:36:37 Willow ~ AA Breeder
-HEE Click-
Do y'all think it's a good idea for me to pull embryos next RO?

You must be a registered member for more
than 1 day before you can use our chatbox.



Rules   Hide
You are in: Main Chat
View Sales Chat
Quests
Horse Eden Eventing Game
Chatbox
Rising Stars Stable
09:53:29 Willow ~ AA Breeder
I'm making sure they meant to
Kingswood Elite
09:52:56 ghost
Woahh congrats willow, lucky!
Rising Stars Stable
09:52:28 Willow ~ AA Breeder
someone just gave me 70k
Glacier Bay Cove
09:50:24 Arctic Katz
I was just surprised
Glacier Bay Cove
09:50:09 Arctic Katz
It's not a big deal
Glacier Bay Cove
09:49:40 Arctic Katz
No
Minerva
09:48:41 Min
Did you already log in earlier?
Glacier Bay Cove
09:48:11 Arctic Katz
Huh, first day without a sign in bonus, weird
Minerva
09:48:01 Min
It's a shame she's got such an ugly pattern on her, but I'm not going to be rerolling lol
Rising Stars Stable
09:46:34 Willow ~ AA Breeder
Min
Ooh, that's my favorite color
Minerva
09:45:38 Min
-HEE Click-

Ooooh
Santana Rising
09:41:51 San
gold embryo tokens are a godsend, Willow! xD
Santana Rising
09:41:01 San
I need to name my two EEE - W freshies. I don't test anything without a name!
ArcticLights
09:40:07 Ceci / (Call me) AL
Friendly reminder about our trivia at 1pm today :)
Rising Stars Stable
09:39:56 Willow ~ AA Breeder
Alrighty, time to save an extra 60k, XD
Minerva
09:39:39 Min
-HEE Click-

Ooh fingers crossed for his bravery to come out nicely
Alpine Acres
09:38:45 Lily/Alpine
Definitely Willow :)
Ravenwood Farm
09:38:37 
I would, she has a good track record
Santana Rising
09:38:16 San
who not? I just remembered to pull the last batch of embryos for some of my retiring girls. No idea when I will use those.
Rising Stars Stable
09:36:37 Willow ~ AA Breeder
-HEE Click-
Do y'all think it's a good idea for me to pull embryos next RO?

You must be a registered member for more
than 1 day before you can use our chatbox.






Refresh


Forums

→ Horse Eden is a fun game! Sign Up Now!

My Subscriptions
My Bookmarks
My Topics
Latest Topics
Following

Forums > Art Shops > Art Help
   1 

Looking for heavy critique! February 22, 2021 11:12 AM


Cherry River Elites
 
Posts: 1000
#855977
Give Award
I need some hard critique on this. Two different wing colors as well, completely insignificant, ignore that. Be as harsh as you need to, I feel like I could improve a lot. This is actually my best art yet, but you're probably super bored with all my rambling on by now, so I'll shut up and let the masters work their critique magic.
IMG-0274.png
IMG-0275.png
Looking for heavy critique! February 22, 2021 11:19 AM

Former Stable
 
Posts: 0
#855982
Give Award
Honestly the biggest thing for me is just how pixelated it looks, I would try using smaller brush sizes so it doesn't look as blocky. I think you were trying to do a braided mane and tail but the tail is very thin. The pink nose is also darker than it needs to be.
The definition on the chest is great though but I would try and carry that through the rest of the horse more, especially on the dark sections on the legs.
Looking for heavy critique! February 22, 2021 12:53 PM


Florestä
 
Posts: 3457
#856035
Give Award
I think it looks really good. Would definitely buy.
Looking for heavy critique! February 22, 2021 01:02 PM


Thistleberry Farm
 
Posts: 4433
#856040
Give Award
i think the definition on the chest is good. but with the legs you need to finish them way more smoothly, makin sure to rub out any bits coming off the legs, and maybe smudge the dark layers on the legs so they blend with the buckskin color of the horse, because at the moment they look very abrupt and not right.
with the hair you attemted to do braids, and honestly you shouldnt have. it looks odd and pixelated, a bit like dreadlocks. i would have done the hair either long, flowy and dark, or short but smooth. the pink snip on the nose is too pink, try softening that.
now with the wings. honestly, they arent that great. along the tops of them need to be more swooshy and curved, more angelic. the tip bits of them look to pixelated an round, like you have just done them with a mouse. try smudging them (use a low strenght smudge) to create a better effect.
Looking for heavy critique! February 22, 2021 01:10 PM


Cherry River Elites
 
Posts: 1000
#856046
Give Award
White Hills- Thanks. I was actually using the smallest brushes possible, because I suck at resizing, so I was using a 500x500 canvas. But I'll definitely work on more definition on the legs.
Sage Brush Stables- I love you <3
Olive Tree Equine- Dang :'). What do you mean by 'bits coming off the legs'? The braids were actually supposed to look like that, but if I were trying to do nicer braids, I'd use a better brush. I also thought the pink looked off- just wasn't sure why. I meant to make the wings look slightly twisted. But I'll definitely use those tips for other wings I make.
Thanks everyone!
Looking for heavy critique! February 22, 2021 01:18 PM


Thistleberry Farm
 
Posts: 4433
#856048
Give Award
sorry to be so harsh XD i meant for example the front left leg, there are bis where you have repainted it darker where you havent rubbed it all out so there are small pixels coming off the leg in places.
Looking for heavy critique! February 22, 2021 01:22 PM


Cherry River Elites
 
Posts: 1000
#856052
Give Award
Ah, I see that now. Thank you!
Looking for heavy critique! February 22, 2021 01:27 PM


TenaciTea
 
Posts: 1929
#856058
Give Award
My main thing with this is the wings.
If you look at bird wings, they aren't completely straight.
When I draw wings (that aren't super anatomically correct) I do two gentle curves basically going on the opposite directions.
Ignore that this is a completely different art style than what you're working with xD
amberchampagnefewspot.jpg
If you look at the wings on this, you see that they're not straight, and it makes the horse look more like it's in motion. If you wanted the wings to look more level to the ground, you could decrease the angle/curve of the wings.
Looking for heavy critique! February 23, 2021 01:03 AM


Azrail Elites
 
Posts: 844
#856374
Give Award
What program do you use?
Looking for heavy critique! February 23, 2021 07:55 AM


Cherry River Elites
 
Posts: 1000
#856463
Give Award
Procreate

Forums > Art Shops > Art Help
   1 

Refresh