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Bermuda Triangle
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Well bred EEE-EWW plus a www mare!

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Glacier Bay Cove
12:57:48 Arctic Katz
Should I attempt to sell my horse straws, if anyone is interested in them
Bioshock Manor
12:52:37 Storm
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Svenned ABLB x LB color TB mare. EWW producer.
ShiningStar Stables
12:52:03 Chey / Star
WWW SHLB+ABLB stallion for sale. Prices negotiable
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WWW producing WWW TB Mare for offers
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Silver + Tobi EWW TB mare for offers
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Purestables
12:48:58 
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Sunni
12:35:41 Sunni bunny
Needed a stud black chestnut with a E but preferably a W bravery rating.
Angels angels
12:17:40 Will Buy Brindles!!
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EEE fillies, EWE combo Mares, PWW combo mare
PPP-PEE geldings
200-40k

All are of various breeds and colors will accept any offers on any just pm me!
Fluffy's Cosy Home
12:17:36 Fluffy
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*World Class
*PEE combo
*Brindle
*Chimera
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I have:
*WWW/WW Straws
*Studs
*Items in my store
*Decors
*Sale horses
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Sweet Valley
12:17:32 I Buy Brindles!!!!!!
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Breedable Adopt Shop; Cheap Prices!
Green River Stables
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Bermuda Triangle
01:01:23 Lost
Auction ends today!!
Well bred EEE-EWW plus a www mare!

-HEE Click-
Glacier Bay Cove
12:57:48 Arctic Katz
Should I attempt to sell my horse straws, if anyone is interested in them
Bioshock Manor
12:52:37 Storm
-HEE Click-

Svenned ABLB x LB color TB mare. EWW producer.
ShiningStar Stables
12:52:03 Chey / Star
WWW SHLB+ABLB stallion for sale. Prices negotiable
-HEE Click-
WWW producing WWW TB Mare for offers
-HEE Click-
Silver + Tobi EWW TB mare for offers
-HEE Click-
Purestables
12:48:58 
ISO -HEE Click-
Sunni
12:35:41 Sunni bunny
Needed a stud black chestnut with a E but preferably a W bravery rating.
Angels angels
12:17:40 Will Buy Brindles!!
-HEE Click-
EEE fillies, EWE combo Mares, PWW combo mare
PPP-PEE geldings
200-40k

All are of various breeds and colors will accept any offers on any just pm me!
Fluffy's Cosy Home
12:17:36 Fluffy
Auction:
*World Class
*PEE combo
*Brindle
*Chimera
-HEE Click-

I have:
*WWW/WW Straws
*Studs
*Items in my store
*Decors
*Sale horses
-HEE Click-

Sweet Valley
12:17:32 I Buy Brindles!!!!!!
-HEE Click-

Breedable Adopt Shop; Cheap Prices!
Green River Stables
12:16:15 
ISO
Someone who does pallets

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Sunset Palimino Criticism welcome September 14, 2019 01:43 PM


Toxic Carnage
 
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https://i.postimg.cc/PJ5pddQh/Untitled4-1.jpg

This is my latest piece. Tell me what you think how much it could go for and what I can do better please ^^
Sunset Palimino Criticism welcome September 14, 2019 02:41 PM


Jellos Warmbloods
 
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This looks very nice. But this is not a Palomino, and in fact a champagne. You can tell by the pink muzzle. :)

I think you did an awesome job on the cut out as well as the pose placement and proportion to the background.
The tail looks really nice as well.

A few things stick out to me as places that could use some improvement. First being the mane.
The top looks really nice, but the bottom is kind of blunt. Like someone just cut it with scissors.
In order to correct this, i would draw on some more flyaways / wisps at the bottom to give the mane a more natural appearance.

The second thing i think could use some adjustment is the ground connection. The area where the horse is placed would be a hard wet sand. Yet the feet just kind of disappear. In this situation the feet wouldn't sink in very much and should be mostly visible. I dont think you can correct that in this piece, as youve already erased a good portion.

Next would be a shadow. Even in dim lighting, a shadow is always cast. There are very few instances where a shadow isn't present.

I think if you start by studying and correcting this few fundamental things, your art will really take a step into the next level and you can start focusing on learning lighting. :)

Good luck!
Sunset Palimino Criticism welcome September 15, 2019 08:14 PM


Chidori
 
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These videos made by Amanda can help :)

https://m.youtube.com/channel/UCBja60SdRTmGBaypsBgyowg
Sunset Palimino Criticism welcome September 16, 2019 06:25 AM


Toxic Carnage
 
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Thanks guys! Im always looking for where I can improve ^^

Edited at September 16, 2019 06:25 AM by AnimeAcres

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