Horse Eden : Critique Please !

06:58:36 Bird

@Fantasty, did she just never take to it? Is she indoor only?

Fantasy Horses

06:57:51 Fantasy

Bird
We tried a harness with our bunny... Did not go well XD

Insignia Elites

06:57:43 Em

How is this match? Item? -HEE Click-

06:56:47 Bird

He wasn't a big fan of the harness, but tolerated it pretty well. He kept jumping as though trying to jump out of it.

06:55:41 Bird

I'll give him a hug on behalf of everyone! He's gotten a lot fluffier then when I first got him.

Angels angels

06:52:44 [1k+ brindles] Angel

Floof *-*

Fantasy Horses

06:52:25 Fantasy

Wolf
In return I'll send some ginger snaps that may or may not be made tonight XD

Imperial Warmbloods

06:52:13 Imp/Impie/Impy

~ Bird
He is so cute, oh my god *-*

Fantasy Horses

06:52:01 Fantasy

Bird
Adorable!

Wolf
Yes please lol

Wolf Dancer

06:51:59 Wolf Burger (Leg)

Hummer
Awww give Finley some scratches for me and a hug! Finley looks very huggable lol

Wolf Dancer

06:51:35 Wolf Burger (Leg)

Lol sending some over in about half a hour guys lol

06:50:35 Bird

Finley's first time in his harness!
-Click-

Fantasy Horses

06:49:43 Fantasy

Wolf
Ooh, I love zucchini bread!!

Angels angels

06:49:25 [1k+ brindles] Angel

Oooo yum
Share lol

Wolf Dancer

06:48:27 Wolf Burger (Leg)

Zucchini bread is in the oven! I'm so excited to eat the chocolate chip loaf one lol

06:39:02 Athena - AAs

Which is disheartening after being T2 at one point lol

06:38:32 Athena - AAs

Thanks <3
Not sure when or if I'll do manips again. I feel like I've kinda gone backwards. Not even T3 anymore

KPH Equestrian

06:23:45 Rapcoon | Jester

ooh that one's pretty too *-*

KPH Equestrian

06:23:22 Rapcoon | Jester

athena
so real x'D it's kinda like-
-YT Click-

06:21:28 Athena - AAs

This is my second favorite I think. Wraithcry has it
-Click-

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06:58:36 Bird

@Fantasty, did she just never take to it? Is she indoor only?

Fantasy Horses

06:57:51 Fantasy

Bird
We tried a harness with our bunny... Did not go well XD

Insignia Elites

06:57:43 Em

How is this match? Item? -HEE Click-

06:56:47 Bird

He wasn't a big fan of the harness, but tolerated it pretty well. He kept jumping as though trying to jump out of it.

06:55:41 Bird

I'll give him a hug on behalf of everyone! He's gotten a lot fluffier then when I first got him.

Angels angels

06:52:44 [1k+ brindles] Angel

Floof *-*

Fantasy Horses

06:52:25 Fantasy

Wolf
In return I'll send some ginger snaps that may or may not be made tonight XD

Imperial Warmbloods

06:52:13 Imp/Impie/Impy

~ Bird
He is so cute, oh my god *-*

Fantasy Horses

06:52:01 Fantasy

Bird
Adorable!

Wolf
Yes please lol

Wolf Dancer

06:51:59 Wolf Burger (Leg)

Hummer
Awww give Finley some scratches for me and a hug! Finley looks very huggable lol

Wolf Dancer

06:51:35 Wolf Burger (Leg)

Lol sending some over in about half a hour guys lol

06:50:35 Bird

Finley's first time in his harness!
-Click-

Fantasy Horses

06:49:43 Fantasy

Wolf
Ooh, I love zucchini bread!!

Angels angels

06:49:25 [1k+ brindles] Angel

Oooo yum
Share lol

Wolf Dancer

06:48:27 Wolf Burger (Leg)

Zucchini bread is in the oven! I'm so excited to eat the chocolate chip loaf one lol

06:39:02 Athena - AAs

Which is disheartening after being T2 at one point lol

06:38:32 Athena - AAs

Thanks <3
Not sure when or if I'll do manips again. I feel like I've kinda gone backwards. Not even T3 anymore

KPH Equestrian

06:23:45 Rapcoon | Jester

ooh that one's pretty too *-*

KPH Equestrian

06:23:22 Rapcoon | Jester

athena
so real x'D it's kinda like-
-YT Click-

06:21:28 Athena - AAs

This is my second favorite I think. Wraithcry has it
-Click-

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December 19, 2018 10:03 PM

Golden Hall Stables

Posts: 840
#282634
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I need help with the tail!

Any suggestions for how I can improve it are wanted!

https://i.postimg.cc/WbdJWz16/Arrogance-s-Pattern-Practice-HEE.jpg

December 19, 2018 10:15 PM

Charmed Acres

Posts: 2203
#282648
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Not a terrible start actually. It just needs more flow, smoothness, and to be darker. It should match the tone and shadows of the horse.

I'd suggest watching youtube videos, finding tutorials on DA, or just practicing until you find something that works for you.

December 20, 2018 06:02 AM

Former Stable

Posts: 0
#282742
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Edited at December 20, 2018 07:06 AM by The Noisy Fam.

December 20, 2018 10:18 AM

Sunset Grove Farm

Posts: 7336
#282822
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The horse it's self is amazing but I'm agreeing with charms point on the tail

As well as thst I suggest blurring some of the backeound ;)