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Crestwood Eq.
01:53:30 Ivy / poison ivy
oof
Foal Me Once Farms
01:53:24 Roan🦋⃤
My cousin has upwards of 16 dogs. . Most also being inbred or super mutts.
I personally wouldn't be able to handle anything over 5, beings I do foster for my local shelter.
Crescent Estate
01:52:50 River / Crescent
I'm allergic to dogs :')
Crestwood Eq.
01:52:35 Ivy / poison ivy
I have 2. A sheepadoodle and a german shepherd
Pinewood Equestrain
01:52:07 Pine(Also Sunset+Oak
I have 2 as well. That is a lot. I have a purebred german shepherd and a lab mix
Foal Me Once Farms
01:50:34 Roan🦋⃤
~Sunni

35?
Holy smokes!
I have 2, a purebred German shepherd and a purebred Burnese. .
35 is far too many.
Crestwood Eq.
01:50:29 Ivy / poison ivy
Sunni

lol
Crestwood Eq.
01:50:18 Ivy / poison ivy
sunni

the mail i sent you is so random lmfao
Sunni
01:50:11 Sunni bunny
Ivy ouch I hate headache.
Also if I disappear it's because am at the doctor with my nana.
I am having a panic attack driving her car XD.
Crestwood Eq.
01:49:40 Ivy / poison ivy
River

Ghost just said she does too!
Sunni
01:49:36 Sunni bunny
Roan, my husband mother has over 35 dogs.
Most of them inbred
Angels angels
01:49:34 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Lol My manager does too
Crescent Estate
01:48:39 River / Crescent
Ivy
I have a headache too :00
Foal Me Once Farms
01:47:53 Roan🦋⃤
I've just got to name a horse after Ozzy Osbourne, RIP king.
Crestwood Eq.
01:47:45 Ivy / poison ivy
Sunni

I'm good! Except for a splitting headache
Foal Me Once Farms
01:47:06 Roan🦋⃤
~Sunni,
Me too, haha!
Sunni
01:46:43 Sunni bunny
How are you?
Sunni
01:46:37 Sunni bunny
Hi ivy,
Sunni
01:46:28 Sunni bunny
Roan I love it!
I say that every time my husband mother comes over.
Niallator Acres
01:46:22 Ivy - Niallator side
Sunni!

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Crestwood Eq.
01:53:30 Ivy / poison ivy
oof
Foal Me Once Farms
01:53:24 Roan🦋⃤
My cousin has upwards of 16 dogs. . Most also being inbred or super mutts.
I personally wouldn't be able to handle anything over 5, beings I do foster for my local shelter.
Crescent Estate
01:52:50 River / Crescent
I'm allergic to dogs :')
Crestwood Eq.
01:52:35 Ivy / poison ivy
I have 2. A sheepadoodle and a german shepherd
Pinewood Equestrain
01:52:07 Pine(Also Sunset+Oak
I have 2 as well. That is a lot. I have a purebred german shepherd and a lab mix
Foal Me Once Farms
01:50:34 Roan🦋⃤
~Sunni

35?
Holy smokes!
I have 2, a purebred German shepherd and a purebred Burnese. .
35 is far too many.
Crestwood Eq.
01:50:29 Ivy / poison ivy
Sunni

lol
Crestwood Eq.
01:50:18 Ivy / poison ivy
sunni

the mail i sent you is so random lmfao
Sunni
01:50:11 Sunni bunny
Ivy ouch I hate headache.
Also if I disappear it's because am at the doctor with my nana.
I am having a panic attack driving her car XD.
Crestwood Eq.
01:49:40 Ivy / poison ivy
River

Ghost just said she does too!
Sunni
01:49:36 Sunni bunny
Roan, my husband mother has over 35 dogs.
Most of them inbred
Angels angels
01:49:34 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Lol My manager does too
Crescent Estate
01:48:39 River / Crescent
Ivy
I have a headache too :00
Foal Me Once Farms
01:47:53 Roan🦋⃤
I've just got to name a horse after Ozzy Osbourne, RIP king.
Crestwood Eq.
01:47:45 Ivy / poison ivy
Sunni

I'm good! Except for a splitting headache
Foal Me Once Farms
01:47:06 Roan🦋⃤
~Sunni,
Me too, haha!
Sunni
01:46:43 Sunni bunny
How are you?
Sunni
01:46:37 Sunni bunny
Hi ivy,
Sunni
01:46:28 Sunni bunny
Roan I love it!
I say that every time my husband mother comes over.
Niallator Acres
01:46:22 Ivy - Niallator side
Sunni!

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Critique on Latest Piece December 30, 2018 07:27 PM


Keeper of the Lost
 
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https://i.ibb.co/vLtNgVT/Roan-on-cliff.jpg

Just made this and looking for opinions on strong points & weak points. Maybe some suggestions on how to make a more realistic look?
Perhaps a price?

Quality is so bad now that I look at it.. Sorry about it looking blurry. Didn't look like that in PS.

Edited at December 30, 2018 07:28 PM by Keeper of the Lost
Critique on Latest Piece December 31, 2018 10:39 AM

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The biggest weakness I can see is the lack of shadows. Regardless of how cloudy a day is, there's going to be a bit of shadow under the horse. He also ought to have a bit of shade on his hooves and legs where they're going into the grass. From here, his hair looks nice, but the lack of shadows makes it so he doesn't really fit into the background. I would also recommend playing with the colors a bit to match him into the background better.
Critique on Latest Piece January 1, 2019 12:45 AM


Keeper of the Lost
 
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Very helpful, thank you. :)

This is my newest piece, where I used advice from people.
https://i.ibb.co/Y225XTV/Purple-Sky.jpg
Critique on Latest Piece January 1, 2019 01:04 PM

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This looks great! Here are a few of my critiques :)

- Pay attention to the lighting in the BG and on the horse. Right now the lighting does not match which is throwing the whole piece off. Since the lighting doesn't match, the shadow is very out of place. If you flipped the horse, made the shadow softer, moved it more under the horse and then lower the opacity on it, it would look much better and everything would fit in just a bit more ;)

- Don't be afraid to play around with Colour Balance. The BG has some intense purples and pinks but the horse is lacking that especially in the shadows of the horse (not the shadow on the ground) and in the markings.

- I'm not sure if you found the BG like this or not, but that left corner has a little too much contrast compared to the rest of the image. If you added that on a different layer, try lowering the opacity or choosing a different layer setting.

- Your mane and tail repainting looks great! However I would try adding more fly aways to give it a more natural, softer look.

Overall, great job! ;D

Edited at January 1, 2019 01:04 PM by Trinity Equine
Critique on Latest Piece January 1, 2019 01:31 PM


Tranquility
 
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Trinity Equine said:
This looks great! Here are a few of my critiques :)

- Pay attention to the lighting in the BG and on the horse. Right now the lighting does not match which is throwing the whole piece off. Since the lighting doesn't match, the shadow is very out of place. If you flipped the horse, made the shadow softer, moved it more under the horse and then lower the opacity on it, it would look much better and everything would fit in just a bit more ;)

- Don't be afraid to play around with Colour Balance. The BG has some intense purples and pinks but the horse is lacking that especially in the shadows of the horse (not the shadow on the ground) and in the markings.

- I'm not sure if you found the BG like this or not, but that left corner has a little too much contrast compared to the rest of the image. If you added that on a different layer, try lowering the opacity or choosing a different layer setting.

- Your mane and tail repainting looks great! However I would try adding more fly aways to give it a more natural, softer look.

Overall, great job! ;D


^^

I also think you hooves could use a little more grounding work. (if you know what I mean)
Critique on Latest Piece January 1, 2019 03:51 PM


Keeper of the Lost
 
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https://i.ibb.co/CH94GKx/Purple-Sky-edit-FINAL.jpg

I like this.. Thanks for the tips!

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