Horse Eden Eventing Game
Horse Eden Eventing Game


Year: 192   Season: Fall   
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Vancouver
07:27:05 Ana / Van
Woops, turned*
Vancouver
07:26:26 Ana / Van
-HEE Click-
This one :P
Vancouver
07:25:43 Ana / Van
Min
I had a girl like that, she turnen out Average xD
DearBorn Ranch
07:12:13 Louise
that is always so sad lol
ArcticLights
07:12:03 Ceci / (Call me) AL
Or she will go all the way and be a sub
Minerva
07:10:59 Min
-HEE Click-

This pony has done 50 moves without spooking at least 3 times- watch her finally spook tomorrow and turn out Superb 🤣🤣
Hy Brasil
07:06:12 Croft
reroll on an all white sabino I like the frost in mane and tail! -HEE Click-
Embervale Acres
07:03:56 Solar Phoenix
Very nice!
Hy Brasil
06:58:05 Croft
his little brother coming up next month. They sure have badger face dialed in lol -HEE Click-
Angels angels
06:56:34 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Ohhh I love him *-*
Hy Brasil
06:55:57 Croft
this is her dad -HEE Click-
Hy Brasil
06:55:29 Croft
guess my freshman did not do too bad :)
Red Horizon Ranch
06:52:11 Red
Ohh yeah she’s gorgeous Rivercreek
Hy Brasil
06:50:56 Croft
nice color -HEE Click-
Rivercreek Ranch
06:45:11 
-HEE Click-
She's so pretty but her rating has me devestated :((
Tamarack Mountain
06:17:25 Opal
get good show geldings, breed very little only your best quality pairings
South Rock Valley
05:30:59 
hi! I'm a returning player with no memory if this game... if you have any tips for starting out or breeding my mail is open!!
Calela Eventing
05:19:07 Cali
I have an addiction for capturing Knaps, my poor capture passes are going down the drain
Golden Crest
04:30:26 | Eve
Adding on that obviously, the horse needs to be grey, that isn't what I mean <3
Golden Crest
04:29:52 | Eve
Do you need certain genes to get dapple grey or are some greys just shitheads with re rolls? Lol

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Vancouver
07:27:05 Ana / Van
Woops, turned*
Vancouver
07:26:26 Ana / Van
-HEE Click-
This one :P
Vancouver
07:25:43 Ana / Van
Min
I had a girl like that, she turnen out Average xD
DearBorn Ranch
07:12:13 Louise
that is always so sad lol
ArcticLights
07:12:03 Ceci / (Call me) AL
Or she will go all the way and be a sub
Minerva
07:10:59 Min
-HEE Click-

This pony has done 50 moves without spooking at least 3 times- watch her finally spook tomorrow and turn out Superb 🤣🤣
Hy Brasil
07:06:12 Croft
reroll on an all white sabino I like the frost in mane and tail! -HEE Click-
Embervale Acres
07:03:56 Solar Phoenix
Very nice!
Hy Brasil
06:58:05 Croft
his little brother coming up next month. They sure have badger face dialed in lol -HEE Click-
Angels angels
06:56:34 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Ohhh I love him *-*
Hy Brasil
06:55:57 Croft
this is her dad -HEE Click-
Hy Brasil
06:55:29 Croft
guess my freshman did not do too bad :)
Red Horizon Ranch
06:52:11 Red
Ohh yeah she’s gorgeous Rivercreek
Hy Brasil
06:50:56 Croft
nice color -HEE Click-
Rivercreek Ranch
06:45:11 
-HEE Click-
She's so pretty but her rating has me devestated :((
Tamarack Mountain
06:17:25 Opal
get good show geldings, breed very little only your best quality pairings
South Rock Valley
05:30:59 
hi! I'm a returning player with no memory if this game... if you have any tips for starting out or breeding my mail is open!!
Calela Eventing
05:19:07 Cali
I have an addiction for capturing Knaps, my poor capture passes are going down the drain
Golden Crest
04:30:26 | Eve
Adding on that obviously, the horse needs to be grey, that isn't what I mean <3
Golden Crest
04:29:52 | Eve
Do you need certain genes to get dapple grey or are some greys just shitheads with re rolls? Lol

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Critique on Latest Piece December 30, 2018 07:27 PM


Keeper of the Lost
 
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https://i.ibb.co/vLtNgVT/Roan-on-cliff.jpg

Just made this and looking for opinions on strong points & weak points. Maybe some suggestions on how to make a more realistic look?
Perhaps a price?

Quality is so bad now that I look at it.. Sorry about it looking blurry. Didn't look like that in PS.

Edited at December 30, 2018 07:28 PM by Keeper of the Lost
Critique on Latest Piece December 31, 2018 10:39 AM

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The biggest weakness I can see is the lack of shadows. Regardless of how cloudy a day is, there's going to be a bit of shadow under the horse. He also ought to have a bit of shade on his hooves and legs where they're going into the grass. From here, his hair looks nice, but the lack of shadows makes it so he doesn't really fit into the background. I would also recommend playing with the colors a bit to match him into the background better.
Critique on Latest Piece January 1, 2019 12:45 AM


Keeper of the Lost
 
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Very helpful, thank you. :)

This is my newest piece, where I used advice from people.
https://i.ibb.co/Y225XTV/Purple-Sky.jpg
Critique on Latest Piece January 1, 2019 01:04 PM

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This looks great! Here are a few of my critiques :)

- Pay attention to the lighting in the BG and on the horse. Right now the lighting does not match which is throwing the whole piece off. Since the lighting doesn't match, the shadow is very out of place. If you flipped the horse, made the shadow softer, moved it more under the horse and then lower the opacity on it, it would look much better and everything would fit in just a bit more ;)

- Don't be afraid to play around with Colour Balance. The BG has some intense purples and pinks but the horse is lacking that especially in the shadows of the horse (not the shadow on the ground) and in the markings.

- I'm not sure if you found the BG like this or not, but that left corner has a little too much contrast compared to the rest of the image. If you added that on a different layer, try lowering the opacity or choosing a different layer setting.

- Your mane and tail repainting looks great! However I would try adding more fly aways to give it a more natural, softer look.

Overall, great job! ;D

Edited at January 1, 2019 01:04 PM by Trinity Equine
Critique on Latest Piece January 1, 2019 01:31 PM


Tranquility
 
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Trinity Equine said:
This looks great! Here are a few of my critiques :)

- Pay attention to the lighting in the BG and on the horse. Right now the lighting does not match which is throwing the whole piece off. Since the lighting doesn't match, the shadow is very out of place. If you flipped the horse, made the shadow softer, moved it more under the horse and then lower the opacity on it, it would look much better and everything would fit in just a bit more ;)

- Don't be afraid to play around with Colour Balance. The BG has some intense purples and pinks but the horse is lacking that especially in the shadows of the horse (not the shadow on the ground) and in the markings.

- I'm not sure if you found the BG like this or not, but that left corner has a little too much contrast compared to the rest of the image. If you added that on a different layer, try lowering the opacity or choosing a different layer setting.

- Your mane and tail repainting looks great! However I would try adding more fly aways to give it a more natural, softer look.

Overall, great job! ;D


^^

I also think you hooves could use a little more grounding work. (if you know what I mean)
Critique on Latest Piece January 1, 2019 03:51 PM


Keeper of the Lost
 
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https://i.ibb.co/CH94GKx/Purple-Sky-edit-FINAL.jpg

I like this.. Thanks for the tips!

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