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Bamboozled Ranch
09:54:17 
-HEE Click-
EEE-WWW X and TB for sale! Beautiful colors and most mares are unbred! I'm willing to consider offers, especially if you're interested in multiple.
Willow Kiss Stables
08:31:07 Hannah
Multiple WWWs for sale!

-HEE Click-
Port Royal Equines
08:29:25 ISO Brave EWW ISH
-HEE Click-
Eagles Peak
08:25:37 
Colored WWW SHLB Studs for breeding: -HEE Click-

EEW Combo Broods: -HEE Click-

Affordable Dressage & Jumping Shows: -HEE Click-
Gem
07:25:09 Tier 1 Artist
New lil OC painting slot <3
-HEE Click-
Whispering Wood Barn
07:21:57 ~Whispy~
Y204 WWW TB & SH Embryos ♡
-HEE Click-
Lucky Strides
06:50:47 Luck
Anyone have a cheap W XC mare I can use for a quest?
Pecan Pie
06:48:11 
Want to Rp? Pm me! Please be willing to play male*
Haunui Lakes
06:39:57 Carmack ^.^
-HEE Click-

All must go! Loads of WBs. All start at 5k inc WWWs
Whitewolf
06:13:27 Fang
5x WWW producing mare has her second embryo left for next year - asking 150k.
-HEE Click-
4x WWW producer has both embryos available for July at 120k each
-HEE Click-
Pm me to claim either <3 embryos may be held

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Critique And Pricing Help February 7, 2019 07:53 AM


Golden Hall Stables
 
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I would like some critique on my two most recent pieces. This includes techniques, lighting, price, etc. Anything is helpful.
I am currently asking for 40k for these, is that too much or just right?
#1
https://i.postimg.cc/NjGTX7qZ/Fire-Foot-Avatar.png
#2
https://i.postimg.cc/W3Jws5XR/Zipzuka-s-Commission.png


Edited at February 11, 2019 08:49 AM by Golden Hall Stables
Critique And Pricing Help February 7, 2019 06:17 PM

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I think you're really talented! That being said, the horses are really big compared to the backgrounds, I'm not sure if that's something you're going for. In addition, I'd work on connecting the feet to the ground. The flames on the first one's feet in particular look a bit off and aren't giving off the light I'd expect them to.
Critique And Pricing Help February 8, 2019 09:09 AM


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The horses are big in the background because they are cut into horse avatars. I didn't have them that big initially.
Critique And Pricing Help February 11, 2019 05:20 PM


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Does anyone else have any more critique?
Critique And Pricing Help February 13, 2019 05:05 AM

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(Still in love with the piece you did for me by the way!)

I noticed this while looking through your art, and the three things I'm really picking up on is the grounding, the mane and tail, and sometimes the coat

With the grounding, I just feel like the hooves always look like they're floating a bit? Like what White Crown said, they look disconnected and feel very different from the rest of the piece. Maybe try shading the hooves a bit on the front more? Or erasing parts to make it look like things are in front of the horse. Also, with the flames, maybe add a glow on the ground directly underneath the flames to make it more connected.

The mane and tail sometimes look very solid. Like the entire thing is just a block of hair and drawing, and highlighting and shading? It just seems very strange to me at times, especially in brighter lighting in some pieces. Try adding some fly-aways or trying to make larger chunks of hair fall away from the general shape. I noticed this mostly in the tails, by the way.

With the coat, it looks over-smudged sometimes. I do that when I do art, and I just do the smudging on another layer, then turn the opacity of that layer specifically down so the coat underneath shines through a bit more.

I know this was long, and I'm sorry, but I just had to (I still adore your art by the way. The way you do patterns and markings is incredible!)
Critique And Pricing Help February 13, 2019 07:54 AM


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