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BlueBirdFalls
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VS Haven
Freshman Stud
I have High hopes for him!
Stud fee: 0$ for testing
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Sweet Valley
02:24:56 I Buy Brindles!!!!!!
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Super low, low, low discount prices for a limited time only until August 7th
Fluffy's Cosy Home
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I have:
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*Studs
*Items in my store
*Decors
*Sale horses
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The Lazy Ninja
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WEE mare frost appy 15k obo
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Painted Performance
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Selling my gelding army. All EEE blankets & pearls
Gem
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Art rumble auction!! Bigsby - T1 winner <3
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W SD boys for auction - RID and KNN, all disciplines. Some LB or previously LB! Plus some great color to add to your SD lines ^^
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God is Mighty Stable
02:16:19 Willow ~ KNN Breeder
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WWW possible KNN colts
Could also be WWE, WEE, EEE, EEP
10k
Disney Acres
02:14:19 
WWW TB with Tobi multiple LB 1 million
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Metla
02:14:15 
Horses for sale

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Blueberry Ledge
02:10:01 
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Rares up for auction!
Brindles
Chimera
Peacock
Manchado
Sootys

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BlueBirdFalls
02:33:32 Blu
VS Haven
Freshman Stud
I have High hopes for him!
Stud fee: 0$ for testing
-HEE Click-
Sweet Valley
02:24:56 I Buy Brindles!!!!!!
-HEE Click-

Super low, low, low discount prices for a limited time only until August 7th
Fluffy's Cosy Home
02:19:24 Fluffy
I have:
*WWW/WW Straws
*Studs
*Items in my store
*Decors
*Sale horses
-HEE Click-
The Lazy Ninja
02:18:18 Jessie
WEE mare frost appy 15k obo
-HEE Click-
Painted Performance
02:16:56 
-HEE Click-
Selling my gelding army. All EEE blankets & pearls
Gem
02:16:45 Tier 1 Artist
Art rumble auction!! Bigsby - T1 winner <3
-HEE Click-

W SD boys for auction - RID and KNN, all disciplines. Some LB or previously LB! Plus some great color to add to your SD lines ^^
-HEE Click-
God is Mighty Stable
02:16:19 Willow ~ KNN Breeder
-HEE Click-
WWW possible KNN colts
Could also be WWE, WEE, EEE, EEP
10k
Disney Acres
02:14:19 
WWW TB with Tobi multiple LB 1 million
-HEE Click-
Metla
02:14:15 
Horses for sale

-HEE Click-
Blueberry Ledge
02:10:01 
-HEE Click-

Rares up for auction!
Brindles
Chimera
Peacock
Manchado
Sootys

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Critique March 25, 2019 02:45 PM


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Would love some critique on my most recent pieces.

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https://i.lensdump.com/i/WEW5xx.jpg

https://i.lensdump.com/i/WTfdVT.jpg

Also I currently have my prices set at 35k for a horse avatar, just wanted to know if you guys think thats too high.

Thanks.

Edited at March 25, 2019 03:02 PM by Zephyr Elites
Critique March 25, 2019 02:58 PM

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Hmm I can't see anything that I personally think could be improved , very pretty art though! :)
Critique March 26, 2019 12:43 PM

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For the first one, the horse looks like it's in blue or white light, while the background would be giving off orange/red light. The horse is also pretty light for the darkness of the background.
For the second one, I would work on adding shading to the mane and tail, because they don't look connected to the rest of the horse. I would also work on where shadows would be cast based on where the light is coming from.
Critique March 29, 2019 04:30 PM


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I think the prices are fine. Keep practising and getting better!♡
Critique April 5, 2019 12:51 AM

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Personally, I feel like the patterns on the first are too bright for the overall tone and lighting.The muzzle is also slightly blurred. I do love the movement of the tail on the second, very natural.

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