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Horse Eden Eventing Game

Horse Eden Eventing Game

Year: 193 Season: Spring

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02:08:06

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Hello Handsome

Gold Oak Estate

01:40:34 Opal's SA - AA &

Now you're pretty
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01:30:17 Lily/Alpine

Nice catch Lo!

Willow Wood Stable

01:21:01 Lo 🌙

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Keeping solely for the dapples lol

Willow Wood Stable

01:18:02 Lo 🌙

Hello???

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01:10:22 Gemstone

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Ok Slay

Willow Wood Stable

01:02:50 Lo 🌙

Finally debuting Princeton lmao. Haven't been on lately.

Sunni

12:51:13 Sunni bunny

Wild that's a pretty decent catch right there.

12:39:12

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Woah

12:39:10

The dapples are so pretty on the dunskin
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12:38:35 CƐ

Fair enough

12:37:09 Lily/Alpine

Cozmic
I name my mares after mythological goddesses and everyone else just gets a name that fits whatever mood I'm in that day xD

12:36:03 CƐ

Lilly, most of my horses are either their ID numbers or something Silly Lol

12:35:21 Lily/Alpine

Cozmic
loll, I hate naming horses because I'm so indecisive xD

12:34:03 CƐ

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Naming skills 0/10 ;)

12:33:26 Lily/Alpine

Witchy
I'll drive by your stable with him if he keeps up with his current behaviour xD

12:32:38 Rapcoon | Jester

just a few xD

Nightfall Dressage

12:31:45 Witchy

Lily
I'll steal him from you lol I need to add more boys to my string

Lucky

12:29:59 luvky

kph
that might be a couple capture passes XD

12:28:51 Lily/Alpine

-12500 in profits today, if he keeps up with this it's the glue factory -_-
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02:08:06

-HEE Click-
Hello Handsome

Gold Oak Estate

01:40:34 Opal's SA - AA &

Now you're pretty
-HEE Click-

01:30:17 Lily/Alpine

Nice catch Lo!

Willow Wood Stable

01:21:01 Lo 🌙

-HEE Click-

Keeping solely for the dapples lol

Willow Wood Stable

01:18:02 Lo 🌙

Hello???

-HEE Click-

01:10:22 Gemstone

-HEE Click-
Ok Slay

Willow Wood Stable

01:02:50 Lo 🌙

Finally debuting Princeton lmao. Haven't been on lately.

Sunni

12:51:13 Sunni bunny

Wild that's a pretty decent catch right there.

12:39:12

-HEE Click-
Woah

12:39:10

The dapples are so pretty on the dunskin
-HEE Click-

12:38:35 CƐ

Fair enough

12:37:09 Lily/Alpine

Cozmic
I name my mares after mythological goddesses and everyone else just gets a name that fits whatever mood I'm in that day xD

12:36:03 CƐ

Lilly, most of my horses are either their ID numbers or something Silly Lol

12:35:21 Lily/Alpine

Cozmic
loll, I hate naming horses because I'm so indecisive xD

12:34:03 CƐ

-HEE Click-
Naming skills 0/10 ;)

12:33:26 Lily/Alpine

Witchy
I'll drive by your stable with him if he keeps up with his current behaviour xD

12:32:38 Rapcoon | Jester

just a few xD

Nightfall Dressage

12:31:45 Witchy

Lily
I'll steal him from you lol I need to add more boys to my string

Lucky

12:29:59 luvky

kph
that might be a couple capture passes XD

12:28:51 Lily/Alpine

-12500 in profits today, if he keeps up with this it's the glue factory -_-
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December 19, 2019 05:47 PM

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December 19, 2019 05:55 PM

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Critiques or opinions definitely welcome. Advice highly appreciated and desired as well.

December 19, 2019 06:22 PM

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It looks nice. The only thing is it's hard to tell the neck and head apart. Other than that, I love it!

December 19, 2019 08:06 PM

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Overall, I really like this piece. It looks as though you used a very large brush. I would recommend that you use a smaller brush to do the small details like the eye, mane, shadowing, and highlighting. I think the main thing that would make your piece better is to really focus on shadowing and highlighting. Shadowing will held separate the head from the neck and stop them from blending together, like Nevermore stated.

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