Horse Eden Eventing Game
Horse Eden Eventing Game


Year: 203   Season: Fall   
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Chimera Collector
02:00:16 
I mean if You're good, then there shouldn't be a problem
Thunderbolt Stables
01:59:07 Thunder
Thanks he's really sweet
Thunderbolt Stables
01:58:49 Thunder
If
Chimera Collector
01:58:44 
Ride*
Thunderbolt Stables
01:58:34 Thunder
I don't know of the owners will let me
Chimera Collector
01:58:31 
Thunder
Well thats rough
Hope you can rose him soon
Chimera Collector
01:57:48 
-HEE Click-
Its like Grey, but seal brown at the same time
Adorable
Thunderbolt Stables
01:56:58 Thunder
lol I volunteer at a riding school and I help bring horses back into the school. I really want to work with a horse called Cree but last time someone rode him they ended up on the ground I don't know what happened
MC Ace
01:56:50 McFossil
Welcome! Gotta keep it simple
Chimera Collector
01:55:44 
MC
Thanks! :D
Chimera Collector
01:55:16 
It flew just when I wanted to grab it
MC Ace
01:54:59 McFossil
Chimera
P rated show every 5 training's. E rated every 4 trainings. W rated every 3 trainings. Thereabouts anyway. Then if they not in the green and rank 12/11 I give them 2-3 trainings before I show again. If it's 10/9 I give them 2 trainings before showing again.
Chimera Collector
01:54:52 
Lowkey thats what I wanted to do
Thunderbolt Stables
01:53:16 Thunder
You should've grabbed it and ripped off it's wings
Chimera Collector
01:52:57 
Little one -> the horse
Thunderbolt Stables
01:52:23 Thunder
I'm guess heaps of horses
Chimera Collector
01:52:12 
Thunder
No I couldnt
IT flew on the horse's belly...
Poor little one was suffering
But if I could I would've given it a slow painful death
Chimera Collector
01:50:37 
MC
HOW? WHATS YOUR METHOD
HOW?
Im happy if I can get a 100k total
Thunderbolt Stables
01:50:12 Thunder
Did you kill it?
Chimera Collector
01:49:30 
Guys I was on a riding lesson on Sunday, and a fucking horsefly bit my knee. I wanted to swear at that monster, it was so painful

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Chimera Collector
02:00:16 
I mean if You're good, then there shouldn't be a problem
Thunderbolt Stables
01:59:07 Thunder
Thanks he's really sweet
Thunderbolt Stables
01:58:49 Thunder
If
Chimera Collector
01:58:44 
Ride*
Thunderbolt Stables
01:58:34 Thunder
I don't know of the owners will let me
Chimera Collector
01:58:31 
Thunder
Well thats rough
Hope you can rose him soon
Chimera Collector
01:57:48 
-HEE Click-
Its like Grey, but seal brown at the same time
Adorable
Thunderbolt Stables
01:56:58 Thunder
lol I volunteer at a riding school and I help bring horses back into the school. I really want to work with a horse called Cree but last time someone rode him they ended up on the ground I don't know what happened
MC Ace
01:56:50 McFossil
Welcome! Gotta keep it simple
Chimera Collector
01:55:44 
MC
Thanks! :D
Chimera Collector
01:55:16 
It flew just when I wanted to grab it
MC Ace
01:54:59 McFossil
Chimera
P rated show every 5 training's. E rated every 4 trainings. W rated every 3 trainings. Thereabouts anyway. Then if they not in the green and rank 12/11 I give them 2-3 trainings before I show again. If it's 10/9 I give them 2 trainings before showing again.
Chimera Collector
01:54:52 
Lowkey thats what I wanted to do
Thunderbolt Stables
01:53:16 Thunder
You should've grabbed it and ripped off it's wings
Chimera Collector
01:52:57 
Little one -> the horse
Thunderbolt Stables
01:52:23 Thunder
I'm guess heaps of horses
Chimera Collector
01:52:12 
Thunder
No I couldnt
IT flew on the horse's belly...
Poor little one was suffering
But if I could I would've given it a slow painful death
Chimera Collector
01:50:37 
MC
HOW? WHATS YOUR METHOD
HOW?
Im happy if I can get a 100k total
Thunderbolt Stables
01:50:12 Thunder
Did you kill it?
Chimera Collector
01:49:30 
Guys I was on a riding lesson on Sunday, and a fucking horsefly bit my knee. I wanted to swear at that monster, it was so painful

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what wrong with my art? January 4, 2022 01:44 PM


Thistleberry Farm
 
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*sigh*.
so, pretty much since i joined HEE (a year and a bit ago now) ive been very interested in the gorgeous art here, and how its made! so i bought myself a couple programs, and tools, and started to learn.
i admit my art was disgusting in the beginning, but i thought i would have been getting better by now.
but judging on the interest my recent artwork has been getting, the prices people are paying for it, im not sure. am i really much better?
Or maybe its just not a style people on here like. Or maybe it actually just sucks and im looking at it through rose tinted glasses...
i was thinking about giving up, but i know that would ruin HEE for me, as art is my main source of income, as well as fun.
so, i just want some advice. what am i doing wrong? you could say anything from critiquing my actual art, to pricing help, to style changes, *anything* would help.
i just need clarification to see if its actually worth keeping going...
here are some recents <3
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what wrong with my art? January 4, 2022 01:44 PM


Thistleberry Farm
 
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also, if your wondering, i use affinity photo and my laptops touchpad for my art, i dont have an art tablet with me at the moment (though i do own one, its just in england)
what wrong with my art? January 4, 2022 01:55 PM


Pyramid Equestrian
 
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I am no artist, however I am a consumer of pretty arts. To me, your art is solid! There aren't any major errors in it, what's missing for me is body prep and style. If you look at tier 1 artists they body prep their horses so they look "smoother" and more perfect. Being able to paint manes and tails is also something I personally look for when looking for art.
I'd say if you enjoy it, than it's worth doing regardless of what money it's bringing in for you. And if you decide to give it up, there are plenty of other ways to make money on the game :)

Edited at January 4, 2022 01:55 PM by Pyramid Equestrian
what wrong with my art? January 4, 2022 02:01 PM


Thistleberry Farm
 
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thank you! yes, i know about the body prep...i do try it quite a few time, but it just never looks "right" in my opinion, but i hope ill get better with practice. And in regards to the mane and tail issue, yeah its been ah huge problemo for me since i started. with my shake hands its near impossible for me to do it on a touchpad...but as soon as my tablet comes back, i plan on retrying it!

Pyramid Equestrian said:
I am no artist, however I am a consumer of pretty arts. To me, your art is solid! There aren't any major errors in it, what's missing for me is body prep and style. If you look at tier 1 artists they body prep their horses so they look "smoother" and more perfect. Being able to paint manes and tails is also something I personally look for when looking for art.
I'd say if you enjoy it, than it's worth doing regardless of what money it's bringing in for you. And if you decide to give it up, there are plenty of other ways to make money on the game :)


what wrong with my art? January 4, 2022 02:05 PM


Versailles
 
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The tip I will add in to the above mentioned ones (body prep, etc.) would be to blur the more distant ranges of your backgrounds. It helps to provide depth, and make it a little less busy to look at. :)
what wrong with my art? January 4, 2022 02:12 PM


Tranquility
 
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Body prep is a big one Thistle, and while yours isnt bad by any means, it could definitely use improving and that small improvement could make a huge difference! Look around at other artists body prep styles and change them to make them your own, or adopt somebody elses. For example, when I was trying to change my body prep, I studied Jello's, Mandu's, and WildWillow's pieces ALOT! Then I would go back to my art and molded it to fit my art program and desired style. It is still changing and evolving.
..
Hair is another thing that can be studied and evolved. And I used to set aside practice pieces or challenging stock that I knew were probably not going to be good anyways and experimented with them.
..
Another aspect is fantasy and orignal ideas, and while you are by no means copying artists, I dont see much fantasy ideas going on. Currently, alot of what is hot on the art market is fantasy pieces. If your not comfortable with that, its not what makes or breaks an artist. I never did fantasy up until very recently.
..
And something I am going to brag on you for is your very fine ability to fit the horse into the bg, making it look like the horse is really there! That takes talent and can be one of the most challenging and crucial aspects of manips.
..
And to hopefully give you inspiration, my art went from this, to this. It takes time to develop! My first piece was made at least 3 RL years ago. And now I am a tier 1 artist! (not a good one, but thats besides the point XD)
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Hope that helped!
what wrong with my art? January 4, 2022 02:12 PM


Thistleberry Farm
 
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thank you, ill try that out <3

Versailles said:
The tip I will add in to the above mentioned ones (body prep, etc.) would be to blur the more distant ranges of your backgrounds. It helps to provide depth, and make it a little less busy to look at. :)


what wrong with my art? January 4, 2022 02:16 PM


Thistleberry Farm
 
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thank you so much for all the tips <3
i do want to try fantasy peices in the future, but i feel like that needs to come after i work on my body prep, because i think if i did my more realism style of art with a fantasy peice, it would look odd in my opinion.
but its definitely something i want to try out soon.
thank you!

Tranquility said:
Body prep is a big one Thistle, and while yours isnt bad by any means, it could definitely use improving and that small improvement could make a huge difference! Look around at other artists body prep styles and change them to make them your own, or adopt somebody elses. For example, when I was trying to change my body prep, I studied Jello's, Mandu's, and WildWillow's pieces ALOT! Then I would go back to my art and molded it to fit my art program and desired style. It is still changing and evolving.
..
Hair is another thing that can be studied and evolved. And I used to set aside practice pieces or challenging stock that I knew were probably not going to be good anyways and experimented with them.
..
Another aspect is fantasy and orignal ideas, and while you are by no means copying artists, I dont see much fantasy ideas going on. Currently, alot of what is hot on the art market is fantasy pieces. If your not comfortable with that, its not what makes or breaks an artist. I never did fantasy up until very recently.
..
And something I am going to brag on you for is your very fine ability to fit the horse into the bg, making it look like the horse is really there! That takes talent and can be one of the most challenging and crucial aspects of manips.
..
And to hopefully give you inspiration, my art went from this, to this. It takes time to develop! My first piece was made at least 3 RL years ago. And now I am a tier 1 artist! (not a good one, but thats besides the point XD)
..
Hope that helped!


what wrong with my art? January 4, 2022 02:35 PM


WildWillow
 
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Hi Thistleberry!

As others have pointed out, body prep is a big thing. Another thing I noticed right away is a lack of shadow on the ground. Think of where your light source is coming from, and where the shadow from your horse would be. This sounds like a super small detail but it can help a piece a lot!
There are a lot of artists that do not redraw the entire mane and tail. Try to find your own mane & tail style that works for you! If you do want to take another jab at doing mane and tail, I have a tutorial where I detail how I do mine. I also use Affinity Photo and have really shaky hands. Try out the stablizer setting on the brushes to see if that helps you out! I use it when my hands are pretty bad.

A huge thing I think you have going for you is setting the horse into the background. That's one thing that trips a lot of people up and you have it down! So congrats! :)

Art is a process and that unfortunately comes with its ups and downs. I second Yellowtail on studying other artists and then looking at your own pieces. Being a self critic (while also being kind to yourself) can be difficult, but can really fuel progress.
Don't be afraid to experiment! That is how I really developed my style.

And since Yellowtail shared her first piece, here's mine!
This coming summer will mark the beginning of my 5th year of doing art.
what wrong with my art? January 4, 2022 02:41 PM


Thistleberry Farm
 
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thank yiu willow, that really helped <3
its nice to see people saying good things about my horse and background blending, as thats something ive been woriking on very hard.
thanks for all the advice and critique!

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