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Guard Horseman Gang
02:29:23 Chaos, GHG
Arctic don't you breed white Knn?
Rose Trails Barn
02:24:55 Echo/ Eco Friendly
Anyone heard of the lays bacon grilled cheese lays
Gaelic Gladiacres
02:24:17 Gladius
min - honestly same it's why I can't bear to mass FR xD
Glacier Bay Farms
02:24:08 Arctic Cove Katz
Trying to work on my bravery horse army
Minerva
02:22:59 Min
Oooh nice Ally!!
Wisteria Run Farm
02:22:44 Solar/Ria
oh, and a cutie, too!
MakeEm Fancy
02:22:13 Ally 💜
Actually completed the W capture quest
-HEE Click-
Ravenwood Farm
02:21:12 Raven
Lmao Min that hits way too close to home
Wisteria Run Farm
02:20:56 Solar/Ria
I think I need to do some serious cleanup and sorting before I do any mass bravery breeding again XD
Minerva
02:20:41 Min
Ahh but what if *that* baby would have been hit by such wonderful RF it tops all the LBs xD For real though the FOMO gets me bad. Thank you for reminding me I've still got a load of WEE and WWE combo girls to mass breed too
Gaelic Gladiacres
02:19:15 Gladius
I mean...is it entirely plausible to just. Not. breed every horse in the stable xD (lightheartedly)
Minerva
02:19:13 Min
I've nearly used up my WWE/W boys' live covers and I think I might just pack it in after that. I would like to make sure I've got at least a vague idea of what I'm doing tomorrow with matches before I go to bed
Ravenwood Farm
02:18:01 Raven
Ugh the braves. I'm still not done. I'm such a snail
Minerva
02:17:10 Min
These braves are determined to be EPS combos.... In the bin with you xD
Dayseeker
02:16:47 Ly/Lyra
Echo
ive had a similar quest but never color and breed specific…thats crazy
Vancouver
02:16:06 Ana / Van
Oh
Wait I did not read properly, nevermind, haven't seen that one either
Gaelic Gladiacres
02:15:53 Gladius
is that basically "capture a WWW"? x-x geeze
Wolf Dancer
02:15:52 Wolf Burger (Leg)
Me neither lol I've never seen a capture a WWW quest though either so there is that xD
Vancouver
02:15:26 Ana / Van
Min
It's new
MakeEm Fancy
02:15:25 Ally 💜
Me either

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Guard Horseman Gang
02:29:23 Chaos, GHG
Arctic don't you breed white Knn?
Rose Trails Barn
02:24:55 Echo/ Eco Friendly
Anyone heard of the lays bacon grilled cheese lays
Gaelic Gladiacres
02:24:17 Gladius
min - honestly same it's why I can't bear to mass FR xD
Glacier Bay Farms
02:24:08 Arctic Cove Katz
Trying to work on my bravery horse army
Minerva
02:22:59 Min
Oooh nice Ally!!
Wisteria Run Farm
02:22:44 Solar/Ria
oh, and a cutie, too!
MakeEm Fancy
02:22:13 Ally 💜
Actually completed the W capture quest
-HEE Click-
Ravenwood Farm
02:21:12 Raven
Lmao Min that hits way too close to home
Wisteria Run Farm
02:20:56 Solar/Ria
I think I need to do some serious cleanup and sorting before I do any mass bravery breeding again XD
Minerva
02:20:41 Min
Ahh but what if *that* baby would have been hit by such wonderful RF it tops all the LBs xD For real though the FOMO gets me bad. Thank you for reminding me I've still got a load of WEE and WWE combo girls to mass breed too
Gaelic Gladiacres
02:19:15 Gladius
I mean...is it entirely plausible to just. Not. breed every horse in the stable xD (lightheartedly)
Minerva
02:19:13 Min
I've nearly used up my WWE/W boys' live covers and I think I might just pack it in after that. I would like to make sure I've got at least a vague idea of what I'm doing tomorrow with matches before I go to bed
Ravenwood Farm
02:18:01 Raven
Ugh the braves. I'm still not done. I'm such a snail
Minerva
02:17:10 Min
These braves are determined to be EPS combos.... In the bin with you xD
Dayseeker
02:16:47 Ly/Lyra
Echo
ive had a similar quest but never color and breed specific…thats crazy
Vancouver
02:16:06 Ana / Van
Oh
Wait I did not read properly, nevermind, haven't seen that one either
Gaelic Gladiacres
02:15:53 Gladius
is that basically "capture a WWW"? x-x geeze
Wolf Dancer
02:15:52 Wolf Burger (Leg)
Me neither lol I've never seen a capture a WWW quest though either so there is that xD
Vancouver
02:15:26 Ana / Van
Min
It's new
MakeEm Fancy
02:15:25 Ally 💜
Me either

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Photo critiques? June 27, 2022 07:57 PM

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(Added shadow; Thanks Brook xD)
So this is my favorite piece that I have done. I am currently a T3 artist and this is my first piece that I have painted on (war paint), done a proper mane for, and tried to make the horse blend with its surroundings (which not gonna lie is quite nice imo.) But I feel like there's just something missing. I hope you guys can help me figure it out. Critiques on the piece in general are obviously appreciated.

Edited at June 27, 2022 08:11 PM by Araminta Farms
Photo critiques? June 27, 2022 08:04 PM


Brook Mill Dressage
 
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I'm not an artist. I have ZERO art abilities. I just thought I'd get that out of the way ;)
I think adding the shadow of the horse would really help so that it look more planted (I think). I hope this helps? Just the first think that came to me! Otherwise, it's quite good and the mane is quite nice :)
Photo critiques? June 27, 2022 08:07 PM

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I actually forgot the shadow. *facepalm* I just went in to fix it, posting the edited version now since adding a shadow is very easy lol

Brook Mill Dressage said:
I'm not an artist. I have ZERO art abilities. I just thought I'd get that out of the way ;)
I think adding the shadow of the horse would really help so that it look more planted (I think). I hope this helps? Just the first think that came to me! Otherwise, it's quite good and the mane is quite nice :)


Photo critiques? June 27, 2022 08:12 PM

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There is potential here! The horse is the size of a titan right now. It is much too big for the background. The shadow you added does not line up with the horse either, and it's a little sharp for such chill lighting in my opinion. There are details lost by the smudging on the horse that you could definitely benefit from drawing back in. Those are the main things throwing the piece off, plus poor grounding.
Photo critiques? June 27, 2022 11:52 PM

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One thing that may help is adding highlight! If the sun is shining in front of the horse (causing the shadow to go behind him) Then you could add a highlight where the sun would hit the horse directly like his mane, top of face/ears, front of the legs(ish) and upper back!
Photo critiques? June 28, 2022 09:49 AM


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Additionally please use a more readable size and font for the credits - thanks ;)

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