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The Fallen Rulers

11:26:28 Storm|RID/SD Lord

In love

-HEE Click-

Boulder Creek

11:25:36

Potatoes - you've been told multiple times that you can't post for breeding or for sale horses in Main Chat. It has to go in Sales or take them off for breeding/sale

Fantasy Horses

11:21:22 Fantasy | Fanta

Ooh, you can get rusty bits and credits in hidden falls now?? I love it!

Wild_Potatoes

11:20:31

-HEE Click-
-HEE Click-
Which boy should I geld?

Transformers Acres

11:17:51 Geek, Eek

I'm tryna convince my mom to let me adopt retired police/K9 dogs when we move.

Rivercreek Ranch

11:16:31

well, this is something else.
-HEE Click-

Tobiano Lady

11:14:37 Tobi 👻

W/W/E: 1
E/W/W: 3

Teasing me with that WWW ;_;

Snitches' Stitches

11:09:21 Snitch

-HEE Click- I'm sorry but what on earth is up with your training??

Wraithcry Farm

11:01:50 Trigger 🐾

But I gotta go. Gotta get up early tomorrow

Wraithcry Farm

11:01:37 Trigger 🐾

He was at first. Now he loves them

Snitches' Stitches

10:57:05 Snitch

Trigger
lmao. What he doesn't know will only hurt your troublesome in-laws haha

Foggy Mtn PONs

10:56:28 Fog

Want me to take him out too because the heck you mean he was upset over chooks 😭

Foggy Mtn PONs

10:55:42 Fog

Yep line em all up!

Wraithcry Farm

10:54:41 Trigger 🐾

Fog not dog freaking iPhone autocorrect

Wraithcry Farm

10:54:14 Trigger 🐾

I think my husband might be more upset than when i brought the chickens home if I let dog do that.

Narran Park

10:52:06 Sting

Take my money Fog :D

Snitches' Stitches

10:51:41 Snitch

Ally
absolutely lovely names❤️❤️

Fog,
could I add my ex's parents? on the account that they didn't bother to ever make food I could eat whenever I visited them and I ended up getting very ill the last time I went

MakeEm Fancy

10:51:40 Ally 💜

Well I got to get off my baby woke up crying. Bye everyone ^.^

MakeEm Fancy

10:49:38 Ally 💜

I just snorted 🤣

Foggy Mtn PONs

10:48:58 Fog

I'll run them all over hahaha

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The Fallen Rulers

11:26:28 Storm|RID/SD Lord

In love

-HEE Click-

Boulder Creek

11:25:36

Potatoes - you've been told multiple times that you can't post for breeding or for sale horses in Main Chat. It has to go in Sales or take them off for breeding/sale

Fantasy Horses

11:21:22 Fantasy | Fanta

Ooh, you can get rusty bits and credits in hidden falls now?? I love it!

Wild_Potatoes

11:20:31

-HEE Click-
-HEE Click-
Which boy should I geld?

Transformers Acres

11:17:51 Geek, Eek

I'm tryna convince my mom to let me adopt retired police/K9 dogs when we move.

Rivercreek Ranch

11:16:31

well, this is something else.
-HEE Click-

Tobiano Lady

11:14:37 Tobi 👻

W/W/E: 1
E/W/W: 3

Teasing me with that WWW ;_;

Snitches' Stitches

11:09:21 Snitch

-HEE Click- I'm sorry but what on earth is up with your training??

Wraithcry Farm

11:01:50 Trigger 🐾

But I gotta go. Gotta get up early tomorrow

Wraithcry Farm

11:01:37 Trigger 🐾

He was at first. Now he loves them

Snitches' Stitches

10:57:05 Snitch

Trigger
lmao. What he doesn't know will only hurt your troublesome in-laws haha

Foggy Mtn PONs

10:56:28 Fog

Want me to take him out too because the heck you mean he was upset over chooks 😭

Foggy Mtn PONs

10:55:42 Fog

Yep line em all up!

Wraithcry Farm

10:54:41 Trigger 🐾

Fog not dog freaking iPhone autocorrect

Wraithcry Farm

10:54:14 Trigger 🐾

I think my husband might be more upset than when i brought the chickens home if I let dog do that.

Narran Park

10:52:06 Sting

Take my money Fog :D

Snitches' Stitches

10:51:41 Snitch

MakeEm Fancy

10:51:40 Ally 💜

Well I got to get off my baby woke up crying. Bye everyone ^.^

MakeEm Fancy

10:49:38 Ally 💜

I just snorted 🤣

Foggy Mtn PONs

10:48:58 Fog

I'll run them all over hahaha

*Foggy's Hit N Run Service*

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January 8, 2018 05:39 PM

Former Stable

Posts: 0
#106539
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Hey! I'm just wondering where I can improve my art :) I haven't been doing for that long so any any help is appreciated!

This is my most recent piece:

https://horseeden.com/horse.php?id=15154277

Thanks!

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January 8, 2018 05:49 PM

Wings Of Glory

Posts: 2670
#106543
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my only thing i have to say is that the background looks a bit too blurry but otherwise i love this piece

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January 8, 2018 10:58 PM

Casanova

Posts: 1522
#106696
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$Wings of Glory$ said:
my only thing i have to say is that the background looks a bit too blurry but otherwise i love this piece

Partly agree with this. Maybe try and make the horse clearer/sharper to match the little baby tree next to it? Overall a beautiful piece. Great work.

EDIT: Also, maybe try playing with the highlights on the horse? Just look at the light source.

Edited at January 8, 2018 11:02 PM by Oceane Elites

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January 8, 2018 11:07 PM

Former Stable

Posts: 0
#106698
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Oceane Elites said:

$Wings of Glory$ said:
my only thing i have to say is that the background looks a bit too blurry but otherwise i love this piece

Partly agree with this. Maybe try and make the horse clearer/sharper to match the little baby tree next to it? Overall a beautiful piece. Great work.

EDIT: Also, maybe try playing with the highlights on the horse? Just look at the light source.

Yeah good point! Im just starting to add highlights and lowlights into my manips now ao hopefully that will be fixed soon xD

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