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Tema Farms
10:32:20 Tema
How`s this for an idea? Stable Subscription/ Auction Alert
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Rose Trails Barn
10:30:58 Echo/ Eco Friendly
Plastered
Rose Trails Barn
10:30:32 Echo/ Eco Friendly
Maybe plastere0 cement?
Rose Trails Barn
10:30:17 Echo/ Eco Friendly
Shes cute..
Silent Moon
10:29:03 
Morning chat, if it is morning.. Should I rename her?
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Rose Trails Barn
10:26:50 Echo/ Eco Friendly
I was specifically looking for a good color that would go with him because I can't make up my mind.
Rose Trails Barn
10:26:00 Echo/ Eco Friendly
Nemi
Alright
xA Million Thoughts
10:25:14 ⚜️.MT.
I know she was a 1-4 but I think she looks better without the varnish.
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Motonemi
10:23:16 AL, mum to Nemi
Echo, if you want colourful foals from him you should pair him with mares that are genetested and have multiple genes they have 2 copies of
Nippy Equine
10:22:51 Nippy/Nipple
Oooh. hows his personality?
Greenheart Stables
10:22:35 Gren|Grenlin|Snek
@Nippy
Enchi Desert Ghost
Telepath
10:22:12 Tele
Echo
If you want a colorful horse, any horse with tons of genetics would be good
Rose Trails Barn
10:22:09 Echo/ Eco Friendly
A lot*
Rose Trails Barn
10:21:44 Echo/ Eco Friendly
Theres alit of horses that are colorful tele
Nippy Equine
10:21:42 Nippy/Nipple
Love him, Gren. What morph(s)?
Telepath
10:21:23 Tele
Echo
Anyone colorful
Greenheart Stables
10:21:18 Gren|Grenlin|Snek
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Look at the gorgeous boy I just got! He's the last one to my little collection of Pythons
Rose Trails Barn
10:19:40 Echo/ Eco Friendly
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Who would he be a good pair up with (color specifically)
Motonemi
10:17:18 AL, mum to Nemi
LBs seem to be a rating/training/production mix that none of us understand
Garnet Stud
10:11:22 Phan
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very tired of this mare throwing WWWs and not getting any LBs lol

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Tema Farms
10:32:20 Tema
How`s this for an idea? Stable Subscription/ Auction Alert
-HEE Click-
Rose Trails Barn
10:30:58 Echo/ Eco Friendly
Plastered
Rose Trails Barn
10:30:32 Echo/ Eco Friendly
Maybe plastere0 cement?
Rose Trails Barn
10:30:17 Echo/ Eco Friendly
Shes cute..
Silent Moon
10:29:03 
Morning chat, if it is morning.. Should I rename her?
-HEE Click-
Rose Trails Barn
10:26:50 Echo/ Eco Friendly
I was specifically looking for a good color that would go with him because I can't make up my mind.
Rose Trails Barn
10:26:00 Echo/ Eco Friendly
Nemi
Alright
xA Million Thoughts
10:25:14 ⚜️.MT.
I know she was a 1-4 but I think she looks better without the varnish.
-HEE Click-
Motonemi
10:23:16 AL, mum to Nemi
Echo, if you want colourful foals from him you should pair him with mares that are genetested and have multiple genes they have 2 copies of
Nippy Equine
10:22:51 Nippy/Nipple
Oooh. hows his personality?
Greenheart Stables
10:22:35 Gren|Grenlin|Snek
@Nippy
Enchi Desert Ghost
Telepath
10:22:12 Tele
Echo
If you want a colorful horse, any horse with tons of genetics would be good
Rose Trails Barn
10:22:09 Echo/ Eco Friendly
A lot*
Rose Trails Barn
10:21:44 Echo/ Eco Friendly
Theres alit of horses that are colorful tele
Nippy Equine
10:21:42 Nippy/Nipple
Love him, Gren. What morph(s)?
Telepath
10:21:23 Tele
Echo
Anyone colorful
Greenheart Stables
10:21:18 Gren|Grenlin|Snek
-Click-
Look at the gorgeous boy I just got! He's the last one to my little collection of Pythons
Rose Trails Barn
10:19:40 Echo/ Eco Friendly
-HEE Click-
Who would he be a good pair up with (color specifically)
Motonemi
10:17:18 AL, mum to Nemi
LBs seem to be a rating/training/production mix that none of us understand
Garnet Stud
10:11:22 Phan
-HEE Click-
very tired of this mare throwing WWWs and not getting any LBs lol

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The Official Art Critique Forum August 18, 2020 06:13 PM


CC Knabbstruppers
 
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Gem said:
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I think this may be one of your best pieces yet! Super cool piece, love the atmosphere. Yeah, shadows would be my main critique. Shadow of the horse on the ground. Shadow of the collar on the horse. Shadow of the necklace on the collar and horse. I can tell that you used an effect on the horse that replicated the horse somewhat in yellow and blue. I don't feel this really fits the piece but I understand if you are unable to undo it. Lastly, take a look at the face. Currently, there are two semi random lighter splotches. Take a look at some photos of horses and see if you can get the correct facial shadows and highlights. Good luck!


Awesome! Thank you so much! I'll definitely be keeping those in mind! :D
The Official Art Critique Forum August 19, 2020 03:32 AM

Former Stable
 
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FOXy.jpg THoughts?
for my horse :D
tried a different style on the mane
also my first time recolouring how did you go?
The Official Art Critique Forum August 19, 2020 05:01 AM


Gem

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@Jumper
I think that went amazing!!!! Beautiful job!! Just a few things to touch up. First, there is a random white spot on the (viewer's right, horse's left) front leg. See if you can color over it or erase it depending on what it is ;D
Second, I like that you tried to give the horse a shadow. That's really important. The issue is with the type of lighting in the background image, the shadow would be less defined and more underneath the horse (a dark blob, almost). I don't feel like the horse and the fox quite have the same lighting. The fox seems much lighter compared to the horse. Lastly, add at least a reflection to the eye. Horse's eyes are not entirely black. Like human eyes, they have a strip of color (the iris) which would be a great addition to this piece. For the reflection, I reccomend a very small (1 px MAX) white brush and just due a teeny tiny little squiggle towards the top of the eye. Would totally steal this piece if I could. Hope this helps!
The Official Art Critique Forum August 19, 2020 05:09 AM

Former Stable
 
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oooh I didn't see that random white dot
(face plant)
ok ill change the shadow and I realise now how bright the fox is lol
I also think the horse needs to be darker am I right? or is that just me
The Official Art Critique Forum August 19, 2020 12:39 PM


CC Knabbstruppers
 
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Any help? I feel like this one is off, but I'm not sure what. Would like some critique before I delete the .PDF XD
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The Official Art Critique Forum August 19, 2020 04:53 PM


Gem

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@Jumper
Lol! The brightness of the horse really depends on taste. If you're going for a more realistic piece, then yes the horse should be darker. In my opinion, it's current flightless does work and helps the horse to stand out really nicely.
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The Official Art Critique Forum August 19, 2020 05:04 PM


CC Knabbstruppers
 
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Here, this should work! I finished by the way. XD
Foggy's Comm (Full Size)
The Official Art Critique Forum August 19, 2020 05:05 PM

Former Stable
 
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CC Mustangs said:
Here, this should work! I finished by the way. XD
Foggy's Comm (Full Size)


Wow, this looks amazing!!
The Official Art Critique Forum August 19, 2020 05:07 PM


CC Knabbstruppers
 
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Thank you, Royal! ^^
The Official Art Critique Forum August 19, 2020 05:14 PM


Gem

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@CC
Definitely going to second Royal on this one. That piece is amazing!!! Just a couple tiny things to touch up. First off, looking at the back legs. I would recommend adding some sort of splash just to add movement and realism. Second, the front (viewer's right, horse's left) hoof. I think you may have tried to make it partially underwater but I'm my opinion, realistically, it would be fully out of water and fully visible. Keep up the wonderful work!!

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