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Glacier Bay Farms
10:49:00 Arctic Cove Katz
I sent her a gift
All Breeds
10:48:37 Fawn
Please don't ask people to check their PMs in chat :)
Glacier Bay Farms
10:46:53 Arctic Cove Katz
Echo
Silver Melody Acres
10:41:58 Solar - KNNs
I'm wondering how this one will go lol
-HEE Click-
Spirtasi Whims
10:39:41 Tasi / Chat Killer
Thank you! I hope they go decently too
Honey
10:37:54 
Ooh exciting, Wolf!! Best of luck ⭐️
Wolf Dancer
10:37:32 Wolf Burger (Leg)
Not sure if it will be Filly or not but most likely >.>
Wolf Dancer
10:37:22 Wolf Burger (Leg)
It has a Sven xD
Massbay
10:36:55 MB
You need more than just prayers
Wolf Dancer
10:36:06 Wolf Burger (Leg)
Y'all I need prayers for this match
-HEE Click-
Silver Melody Acres
10:34:48 Solar - KNNs
ooh, he's a nice one

and MB, that looks good! a heart glass would work well, I think
Honey
10:31:43 
Ignore the fact I am useless at training but I am excited for this guy -HEE Click-
Massbay
10:29:10 MB
-HEE Click-

anyone have thoughts on this match? I may want to throw a heart glass at them.
fire
10:28:03 Tinky
Can’t wait till RO
Wolf Dancer
10:26:06 Wolf Burger (Leg)
Tomorrow at work should be chill since it's the ranch, and then birthday lunch should be yummy lol
Stormsong Manor
10:23:34 Ven
I expect my job to be low-key tomorrow, as it usually is all summer, but Link will be with me
Legacy Elm
10:21:09 Gabs
lowkey miss my old job for RO days
Wolf Dancer
10:19:09 Wolf Burger (Leg)
Tasi
Heck yeah!
Rose Trails Barn
10:15:11 Echo/ Eco Friendly
Never mind
Rose Trails Barn
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Glacier Bay Farms
10:49:00 Arctic Cove Katz
I sent her a gift
All Breeds
10:48:37 Fawn
Please don't ask people to check their PMs in chat :)
Glacier Bay Farms
10:46:53 Arctic Cove Katz
Echo
Silver Melody Acres
10:41:58 Solar - KNNs
I'm wondering how this one will go lol
-HEE Click-
Spirtasi Whims
10:39:41 Tasi / Chat Killer
Thank you! I hope they go decently too
Honey
10:37:54 
Ooh exciting, Wolf!! Best of luck ⭐️
Wolf Dancer
10:37:32 Wolf Burger (Leg)
Not sure if it will be Filly or not but most likely >.>
Wolf Dancer
10:37:22 Wolf Burger (Leg)
It has a Sven xD
Massbay
10:36:55 MB
You need more than just prayers
Wolf Dancer
10:36:06 Wolf Burger (Leg)
Y'all I need prayers for this match
-HEE Click-
Silver Melody Acres
10:34:48 Solar - KNNs
ooh, he's a nice one

and MB, that looks good! a heart glass would work well, I think
Honey
10:31:43 
Ignore the fact I am useless at training but I am excited for this guy -HEE Click-
Massbay
10:29:10 MB
-HEE Click-

anyone have thoughts on this match? I may want to throw a heart glass at them.
fire
10:28:03 Tinky
Can’t wait till RO
Wolf Dancer
10:26:06 Wolf Burger (Leg)
Tomorrow at work should be chill since it's the ranch, and then birthday lunch should be yummy lol
Stormsong Manor
10:23:34 Ven
I expect my job to be low-key tomorrow, as it usually is all summer, but Link will be with me
Legacy Elm
10:21:09 Gabs
lowkey miss my old job for RO days
Wolf Dancer
10:19:09 Wolf Burger (Leg)
Tasi
Heck yeah!
Rose Trails Barn
10:15:11 Echo/ Eco Friendly
Never mind
Rose Trails Barn
10:12:53 Echo/ Eco Friendly
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The Official Art Critique Forum June 29, 2021 08:08 PM


CC Knabbstruppers
 
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Thank you kindly, Gem! ^^
The Official Art Critique Forum July 16, 2021 09:57 AM


Tanglewood
 
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Aight, looking for critique on the piece in general, but specifically on the mane/tail (I tried a new technique for those.) I'm aware the background wasn't blurred out smoothly, that's just laziness on my part xD But otherwise, rip it to shreads! (Would love a good reflection/shadow tutorial if anyone has one.)
The Official Art Critique Forum July 21, 2021 02:41 PM


CC Knabbstruppers
 
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I need some serious help with this guy! I need to add splashes to him, around the front legs and bubble under the water to show he's moving, but I'm at a loss as to how I might do that! Any help is greatly appreciated! ^^

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The Official Art Critique Forum July 27, 2021 07:44 PM

Former Stable
 
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This is sick. I love the idea.
My trouble with this piece is the horse is very detailed the background is even moreso, so my eyes do not get drawn to the horse because the background is too bright and the horse is too dark. You can blur the background to bring the horse more the foreground.
Amazing job on the detail, especially the underwater part and the face - looks REALLY good
As far as getting it to look dynamic, add streaks of bubbles in a downward motion (like this: https://dissolve.com/video/Underwater-splash-bubbles-slow-royalty-free-stock-video-footage/001-D26-9-733) and more air bubbles around the back end of the horse. Adding whiter splashes and ripples near the contact points of water can help and here are some brushes you can download if you have PS: https://www.brusheezy.com/brushes/57610-free-splash-photoshop-brushes
Hope this helps

CC Knabbstruppers said:
I need some serious help with this guy! I need to add splashes to him, around the front legs and bubble under the water to show he's moving, but I'm at a loss as to how I might do that! Any help is greatly appreciated! ^^

ante-hamersmit-0n-Aqtb7-FL-0-unsplash.png




Edited at July 27, 2021 07:46 PM by Timber Canyon
The Official Art Critique Forum July 27, 2021 08:10 PM


CC Knabbstruppers
 
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Timber Canyon said:
This is sick. I love the idea.
My trouble with this piece is the horse is very detailed the background is even moreso, so my eyes do not get drawn to the horse because the background is too bright and the horse is too dark. You can blur the background to bring the horse more the foreground.
Amazing job on the detail, especially the underwater part and the face - looks REALLY good
As far as getting it to look dynamic, add streaks of bubbles in a downward motion (like this: https://dissolve.com/video/Underwater-splash-bubbles-slow-royalty-free-stock-video-footage/001-D26-9-733) and more air bubbles around the back end of the horse. Adding whiter splashes and ripples near the contact points of water can help and here are some brushes you can download if you have PS: https://www.brusheezy.com/brushes/57610-free-splash-photoshop-brushes
Hope this helps

CC Knabbstruppers said:
I need some serious help with this guy! I need to add splashes to him, around the front legs and bubble under the water to show he's moving, but I'm at a loss as to how I might do that! Any help is greatly appreciated! ^^

ante-hamersmit-0n-Aqtb7-FL-0-unsplash.png





Thank you so much Timbie! X3

Also, I'll go ahead and chuck the finished product in as well: Did a bit of blurring in that background, but I feel like it's still too much. ^^'

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Edited at July 27, 2021 08:22 PM by CC Knabbstruppers
The Official Art Critique Forum July 28, 2021 02:34 PM

Former Stable
 
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The only stock I used for this piece was lineart for the horse. Everything else is hand painted. With that being said, tear it apart. Tell me what's ugly, what's pretty, and what can be improved upon.
The Official Art Critique Forum July 28, 2021 06:06 PM


Tranquility
 
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Rip it apart!! I can change anything. I kinda feel like something is off with the bg though. Yes. I know it's really red. For some reason, it didn't look that red at all before I saved it so I'll go back and change it.

Edited at July 28, 2021 06:07 PM by Yellowtail Ranch
The Official Art Critique Forum July 28, 2021 06:22 PM

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Yellowtail Ranch said:
Rip it apart!! I can change anything. I kinda feel like something is off with the bg though. Yes. I know it's really red. For some reason, it didn't look that red at all before I saved it so I'll go back and change it.


On the sand you can see that there is a shadow, but the horse doesn't have a shadow. I'd start by adding that :) You could also add a touch of shadowing under the mane, to give it more depth. The horse itself looks nice. The pinkish sand actually looks quite nice, I would just add a light source, whether that be finding a stock image of a sunset and adding that in or making your own, it would add more life into the piece.
The Official Art Critique Forum August 3, 2021 10:33 AM


Trillium Acres
 
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Screen-Shot-2021-08-03-at-11-13-48-AM.pngAny critiques on this are appreciated! Its obviously not finished, and I need to fix the hooves, but other than that I'm curious as to what I can do to make this better:) This is my first time doing art in about a year and a half lol

Edited at August 3, 2021 10:39 AM by Trillium Acres
The Official Art Critique Forum August 3, 2021 10:42 AM

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Critique on this, please! I painted the pattern myself :)

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