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08:10:34 Snow❆Gem

@canter

Oh dear, what's the riders pay?

Canterwood Acres

08:01:16 Canter

1

08:00:15 Anna/Jewel

well what level rider has ur filly?

Canterwood Acres

07:58:48 Canter

ugh I don't have enough ebs to pay my riders but I need to train my futurity filly :'(

07:53:35 Anna/Jewel

Hiya

Silverspring Stables

07:52:40

Hi

07:50:59 Anna/Jewel

I have almost 40k which is my goal lol. I need 40k for something

Insignia Elites

07:50:29 Em

I will never complete this capture 3 PPP horses. xD It has been since capture day

07:49:41 Anna/Jewel

I added an alert

07:48:26 Anna/Jewel

Ugh I checked lol. Store waiting game? THis game isnt fun lol

Minerva

07:47:36 Min

Yeah looks like you get to play the store waiting game haha

07:46:59 Ana / Van

You can get them in the item store too

07:44:49 Anna/Jewel

Ugh I need a wormy apple for quest and nobody has them 4 sale

07:43:47 Anna/Jewel

How in the name of common sense am I supposed to captyre a horse with a W in dressage?

07:42:53 CƐ

Id use pattern passes em

Insignia Elites

07:41:56 Em

Best breed to capture a Sabino?

Minerva

07:39:11 Min

Soul Id find her a boy thats at least 212 week 3 and all up week 7

Bluebell Stables

07:36:35 Sweet Valley Side Ac

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Cute guy. APP rating but...good for a horse w wild parents

Bluebell Stables

07:32:35 Sweet Valley Side Ac

-HEE Click-

Ooo chocolate Palomino

Barbury Estates

07:30:33 Amelia

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holy cow I was not expecting that!

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08:10:34 Snow❆Gem

@canter

Oh dear, what's the riders pay?

Canterwood Acres

08:01:16 Canter

1

08:00:15 Anna/Jewel

well what level rider has ur filly?

Canterwood Acres

07:58:48 Canter

ugh I don't have enough ebs to pay my riders but I need to train my futurity filly :'(

07:53:35 Anna/Jewel

Hiya

Silverspring Stables

07:52:40

Hi

07:50:59 Anna/Jewel

I have almost 40k which is my goal lol. I need 40k for something

Insignia Elites

07:50:29 Em

I will never complete this capture 3 PPP horses. xD It has been since capture day

07:49:41 Anna/Jewel

I added an alert

07:48:26 Anna/Jewel

Ugh I checked lol. Store waiting game? THis game isnt fun lol

Minerva

07:47:36 Min

Yeah looks like you get to play the store waiting game haha

07:46:59 Ana / Van

You can get them in the item store too

07:44:49 Anna/Jewel

Ugh I need a wormy apple for quest and nobody has them 4 sale

07:43:47 Anna/Jewel

How in the name of common sense am I supposed to captyre a horse with a W in dressage?

07:42:53 CƐ

Id use pattern passes em

Insignia Elites

07:41:56 Em

Best breed to capture a Sabino?

Minerva

07:39:11 Min

Soul Id find her a boy thats at least 212 week 3 and all up week 7

Bluebell Stables

07:36:35 Sweet Valley Side Ac

-HEE Click-
Cute guy. APP rating but...good for a horse w wild parents

Bluebell Stables

07:32:35 Sweet Valley Side Ac

-HEE Click-

Ooo chocolate Palomino

Barbury Estates

07:30:33 Amelia

-HEE Click-
holy cow I was not expecting that!

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Constructive criticism please <3

August 30, 2019 09:25 PM

Jellos Warmbloods

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Ok. So your most recent piece is really nice. But the lighting is very, very, off. Your light source is coming from above, yet is far behind the horse.

So I went ahead and TRIED to explain the light and shadow directions via this lovely image.

https://imagizer.imageshack.com/img923/7227/CkJKRq.png

Constructive criticism please <3

August 30, 2019 09:30 PM

Sunset Grove Farm

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Thamks very much jello that's actually really helpful ^^

Since it's. A premade ill try and see what I can do

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August 30, 2019 09:38 PM

Jellos Warmbloods

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I figured color coding might make it easier to understand. XD

I'm awful at descriptive text.

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August 30, 2019 09:40 PM

Sunset Grove Farm

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It's very useful!

That stock was a pain to match but I wnayed to at least try and do my own lighting if that makes sense?

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August 31, 2019 05:10 AM

Sunset Grove Farm

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https://i.postimg.cc/y8tjj6Fb/Pics-Art-08-31-11-00-59.jpg

Revamped ^^

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August 31, 2019 06:31 AM

Sunset Grove Farm

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https://i.postimg.cc/MpgNsMNC/Untitled138.jpg

Recent avatar :D

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