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Oak valley said:
Wouldn't mind some critique on this one please :)
Very pretty piece Oak! I feel like their is a lot of smudging going on, on the coat. Instead of smudging coats try blurring the coat. When you blur it it doesn't take different parts of the coat color anywhere. I also notice some extra white pieces around the head and down the neck, not sure if it is part of the piece or you forgot to erase it. Hope this helps. :) |
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Snowmass Horses said:
Oak valley said:
Wouldn't mind some critique on this one please :)
Very pretty piece Oak! I feel like their is a lot of smudging going on, on the coat. Instead of smudging coats try blurring the coat. When you blur it it doesn't take different parts of the coat color anywhere. I also notice some extra white pieces around the head and down the neck, not sure if it is part of the piece or you forgot to erase it. Hope this helps. :)
Agreed ^^
The one thing that gets me off about the piece is that there is a lot going on with the ground. It just seems like a big blob. Otherwise, great piece! |
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Snowmass Horses said:
Oak valley said:
Wouldn't mind some critique on this one please :)
Very pretty piece Oak! I feel like their is a lot of smudging going on, on the coat. Instead of smudging coats try blurring the coat. When you blur it it doesn't take different parts of the coat color anywhere. I also notice some extra white pieces around the head and down the neck, not sure if it is part of the piece or you forgot to erase it. Hope this helps. :)
XD I over blurred if that's a thing. Andvyeah I see the white now, oops lol |
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I am looking for some strong critique on this piece, not offensive but very strongly worded, I am trying out different styles and I am just taking a go at this one Also, it will be in my premade shop, how much should it cost? |
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Moonglade Manor said:
I am looking for some strong critique on this piece, not offensive but very strongly worded, I am trying out different styles and I am just taking a go at this one Also, it will be in my premade shop, how much should it cost?
You're on the right track your lighting is pretty good but the mane and tail just don't fit. If you look on deviant art there are great mane and tail tutorials and I think Jello has one or two. The halter kinda throws me off Not being rude but it doesn't look like it belongs on the horse. Smudge your horse just a tiny bit and add yellow maybe slight green to a color change on it and poof I also have the way I do manes and tails broken down feel free to pm me if you need it or can't find jellos |
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I'd appreciate some critique on these :)  |
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Me and Cali did this together and are looking for some pricing help for its auction |
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What can I do to improve? |
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I made a thing...and don't know how to feel about it. Any ideas for auction pricing? |
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Looking for critiques and pricing, newest at the bottom. |
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