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Glacier Bay Farms
09:28:23 Arctic Cove Katz
Is it a covered deck, Ven
Glacier Bay Farms
09:27:59 Arctic Cove Katz
I can’t wait to display it once I finish working on it
Rose Trails Barn
09:26:58 Echo/ Eco Friendly
Thats so mean. How dare you clouds
Stormsong Manor
09:26:19 Ven
No freaking lie it started raining as I'm playing this. I'm outside on the deck. Love it
Stormsong Manor
09:20:57 Ven
My stable name comes from LoZ: OoT's Song of Storms. Here's a really fun version of it

-YT Click-
Glacier Bay Farms
09:19:10 Arctic Cove Katz
Ven, your stable name is giving me an idea for my next art project
Swank Plateau
09:18:44 Swanky
Thanks Ven! She is so purdy, so shiny *.*
Rose Trails Barn
09:17:54 Echo/ Eco Friendly
Cute Ven
Katz
Thank you doll!
Stormsong Manor
09:16:43 Ven
My sven this month could have been worse, I did end up with a pretty WWE filly, but I'm trying again in August
Stormsong Manor
09:16:17 Ven
Yeah it is, Swanky. Congrats!
Glacier Bay Farms
09:16:05 Arctic Cove Katz
Dang, she is GORGEOUS, Echo
And you can steal all of my pickles, Ari
Swank Plateau
09:15:37 Swanky
But when a sven pays off, its a very rewarding feeling. Love this little dude.
-HEE Click-
The Joker
09:13:46 Ari <3
crushing my dreams :')

how are you, Tasi?
Spirtasi Whims
09:13:01 Tasi / Chat Killer
Ari im pretty sure you aren't gonna make it as a pickle bandit
Rose Trails Barn
09:12:50 Echo/ Eco Friendly
-HEE Click- currently my 2nd favorite Arabian
The Joker
09:12:46 Ari <3
Because I love pickles and I would happily snatch them like a cartoon bandit
Rose Trails Barn
09:11:56 Echo/ Eco Friendly
Why the pickle bandit..? 😰
The Joker
09:11:31 Ari <3
I wanna be known as the pickle bandit of HEE
Glacier Bay Farms
09:11:15 Arctic Cove Katz
That sounds like a great goal to work on

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Glacier Bay Farms
09:28:23 Arctic Cove Katz
Is it a covered deck, Ven
Glacier Bay Farms
09:27:59 Arctic Cove Katz
I can’t wait to display it once I finish working on it
Rose Trails Barn
09:26:58 Echo/ Eco Friendly
Thats so mean. How dare you clouds
Stormsong Manor
09:26:19 Ven
No freaking lie it started raining as I'm playing this. I'm outside on the deck. Love it
Stormsong Manor
09:20:57 Ven
My stable name comes from LoZ: OoT's Song of Storms. Here's a really fun version of it

-YT Click-
Glacier Bay Farms
09:19:10 Arctic Cove Katz
Ven, your stable name is giving me an idea for my next art project
Swank Plateau
09:18:44 Swanky
Thanks Ven! She is so purdy, so shiny *.*
Rose Trails Barn
09:17:54 Echo/ Eco Friendly
Cute Ven
Katz
Thank you doll!
Stormsong Manor
09:16:43 Ven
My sven this month could have been worse, I did end up with a pretty WWE filly, but I'm trying again in August
Stormsong Manor
09:16:17 Ven
Yeah it is, Swanky. Congrats!
Glacier Bay Farms
09:16:05 Arctic Cove Katz
Dang, she is GORGEOUS, Echo
And you can steal all of my pickles, Ari
Swank Plateau
09:15:37 Swanky
But when a sven pays off, its a very rewarding feeling. Love this little dude.
-HEE Click-
The Joker
09:13:46 Ari <3
crushing my dreams :')

how are you, Tasi?
Spirtasi Whims
09:13:01 Tasi / Chat Killer
Ari im pretty sure you aren't gonna make it as a pickle bandit
Rose Trails Barn
09:12:50 Echo/ Eco Friendly
-HEE Click- currently my 2nd favorite Arabian
The Joker
09:12:46 Ari <3
Because I love pickles and I would happily snatch them like a cartoon bandit
Rose Trails Barn
09:11:56 Echo/ Eco Friendly
Why the pickle bandit..? 😰
The Joker
09:11:31 Ari <3
I wanna be known as the pickle bandit of HEE
Glacier Bay Farms
09:11:15 Arctic Cove Katz
That sounds like a great goal to work on

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The Official Art Critique Forum July 3, 2020 04:36 PM


Trillium Acres
 
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Hey guys! Thoughts on this/how should I improve/pricing? I've been working on this for about four hours. My first *real* attempt on hair.
*This is a GIANT file. Please click*

Edited at July 3, 2020 04:37 PM by Trillium Acres
The Official Art Critique Forum July 3, 2020 04:51 PM


Raindrop Ridge
 
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The three hooves in the air just don't look quite right
The Official Art Critique Forum July 3, 2020 04:55 PM


Everglade Equestrian
 
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try putting the tail behind the horse layer? it doesn't look very natural the way its positioned maybe inch it up a bit too

Edited at July 3, 2020 04:56 PM by Everglade Equestrian
The Official Art Critique Forum July 3, 2020 05:07 PM


Gem

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I have to disagree with Raindrop but I do agree with Everglade. The current tail position is a tad low. The tail and ma e themselves look wonderful for your first time! I love this piece. My biggest recommendation would be to take a look at lighting. The light source is from the left side of the background image so you need to make sure the lighting on the horse matches this. The horse's hindquarters fit well but the front half appears to be lit differently. Pricing I'd say 30-45 k <3
The Official Art Critique Forum July 3, 2020 05:24 PM


Trillium Acres
 
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Gem said:
I have to disagree with Raindrop but I do agree with Everglade. The current tail position is a tad low. The tail and ma e themselves look wonderful for your first time! I love this piece. My biggest recommendation would be to take a look at lighting. The light source is from the left side of the background image so you need to make sure the lighting on the horse matches this. The horse's hindquarters fit well but the front half appears to be lit differently. Pricing I'd say 30-45 k <3


Thank you! <3
The tail was base off of the original photo. That is exactly where the tail was before... Should I leave it or move?
The Official Art Critique Forum July 3, 2020 05:32 PM


Gem

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You don't necessarily need to move it just add a little more hair higher up
The Official Art Critique Forum July 3, 2020 05:35 PM


Trillium Acres
 
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Gem said:
You don't necessarily need to move it just add a little more hair higher up


Aha! Yes. That looks much better. Thank you <3
The Official Art Critique Forum July 3, 2020 05:35 PM


Gem

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No problem! Glad I could help <3
The Official Art Critique Forum July 3, 2020 05:42 PM

Former Stable
 
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somewhat old, but first time I did a draft horse
thoughts?
just meant to be a small bust, neck up instead of shoulders
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I do cats more; I don't do coloring beyond the eyes (occasional nose and/or paws) unless it's a trade/comm so all I have is sketches like this
this is one I'm not sure about
The Official Art Critique Forum July 4, 2020 03:58 PM


Gem

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Would love some tips, contest entry

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