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MakeEm Fancy
02:17:45 Ally ๐Ÿ’œ
Thank you! Its her last year so hopefully she gives me something good lol
Abstract Dunes
02:17:06 Abs
Ooh nice match. Good luck!
MakeEm Fancy
02:16:33 Ally ๐Ÿ’œ
+Sven
-HEE Click-
Crestwood Equestrian
02:15:58 Ivy
i'll be back guys
Crestwood Equestrian
02:14:42 Ivy
hi lynx
Abstract Dunes
02:14:34 Abs
He is great but my luck is always pretty hit/miss with color and strength.
Embervale Acres
02:14:28 Solar Phoenix
congrats on that pretty girl! :D
MakeEm Fancy
02:14:14 Ally ๐Ÿ’œ
Im using him for the first time RO and im nervous lol
Willowwood Stable
02:13:29 Lo
Abs lovely job!
Abstract Dunes
02:13:19 Abs
She throws the pertiest babies with Rathloriel.
MakeEm Fancy
02:13:02 Ally ๐Ÿ’œ
Oh very pretty! Abs
Abstract Dunes
02:12:23 Abs
*swoon* -HEE Click-
MakeEm Fancy
02:00:18 Ally ๐Ÿ’œ
Oh cool! I grew up with a lhasa apso maltese mix. She was pretty old when she passed
Arrowood Estate
01:59:33 Ven | X
Both breeds can live long lives, so I'm optimistic for another four or five years with him
Arrowood Estate
01:58:49 Ven | X
Bichon sire x lhasa apso dam
MakeEm Fancy
01:57:55 Ally ๐Ÿ’œ
What breed is Thor again? @Ven
MakeEm Fancy
01:48:47 Ally ๐Ÿ’œ
Two groomers near me said they wouldn't take her because of liability reasons. The place that will take her said I would have to sign a senior liability form
Stormsong Manor
01:46:19 Ven
He's eleven and healthy but I still get stressed over him being stressed lol
Stormsong Manor
01:46:01 Ven
Same with Thor lol. He needs a fresh cut for summer
MakeEm Fancy
01:45:49 Ally ๐Ÿ’œ
Oh no! Smores is definitely healthy and not passing away anytime soon she just needs her nails done and a good bath.

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MakeEm Fancy
02:17:45 Ally ๐Ÿ’œ
Thank you! Its her last year so hopefully she gives me something good lol
Abstract Dunes
02:17:06 Abs
Ooh nice match. Good luck!
MakeEm Fancy
02:16:33 Ally ๐Ÿ’œ
+Sven
-HEE Click-
Crestwood Equestrian
02:15:58 Ivy
i'll be back guys
Crestwood Equestrian
02:14:42 Ivy
hi lynx
Abstract Dunes
02:14:34 Abs
He is great but my luck is always pretty hit/miss with color and strength.
Embervale Acres
02:14:28 Solar Phoenix
congrats on that pretty girl! :D
MakeEm Fancy
02:14:14 Ally ๐Ÿ’œ
Im using him for the first time RO and im nervous lol
Willowwood Stable
02:13:29 Lo
Abs lovely job!
Abstract Dunes
02:13:19 Abs
She throws the pertiest babies with Rathloriel.
MakeEm Fancy
02:13:02 Ally ๐Ÿ’œ
Oh very pretty! Abs
Abstract Dunes
02:12:23 Abs
*swoon* -HEE Click-
MakeEm Fancy
02:00:18 Ally ๐Ÿ’œ
Oh cool! I grew up with a lhasa apso maltese mix. She was pretty old when she passed
Arrowood Estate
01:59:33 Ven | X
Both breeds can live long lives, so I'm optimistic for another four or five years with him
Arrowood Estate
01:58:49 Ven | X
Bichon sire x lhasa apso dam
MakeEm Fancy
01:57:55 Ally ๐Ÿ’œ
What breed is Thor again? @Ven
MakeEm Fancy
01:48:47 Ally ๐Ÿ’œ
Two groomers near me said they wouldn't take her because of liability reasons. The place that will take her said I would have to sign a senior liability form
Stormsong Manor
01:46:19 Ven
He's eleven and healthy but I still get stressed over him being stressed lol
Stormsong Manor
01:46:01 Ven
Same with Thor lol. He needs a fresh cut for summer
MakeEm Fancy
01:45:49 Ally ๐Ÿ’œ
Oh no! Smores is definitely healthy and not passing away anytime soon she just needs her nails done and a good bath.

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Critiques and tips wanted please! August 8, 2017 03:32 PM


The Lady of Fangorn
 
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https://s1.postimg.org/50ixwuf1b/Dimrilldalebigoriginalnoname.jpg
Just finished this piece. Creds are in upper left-hand corner. Any advice on how to improve is greatly appreciated!

Edited at August 8, 2017 03:34 PM by Dimrill Dale
Critiques and tips wanted please! August 8, 2017 03:34 PM


Casanova
 
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Beautiful Piece! I would recommend making the credits a little bigger though. Maybe you could touch up the tail and mane a little, and add water splashes and reflections?
Critiques and tips wanted please! August 8, 2017 03:35 PM


The Lady of Fangorn
 
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Thanks! Just enlarged them. How would you recommend doing splashes and mane&tails?
Critiques and tips wanted please! August 8, 2017 03:36 PM


The Lady of Fangorn
 
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I use pixlr for all the manips I do
Critiques and tips wanted please! August 8, 2017 03:38 PM

Former Stable
 
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Its so beautiful, Dim! <3
Critiques and tips wanted please! August 8, 2017 03:40 PM


The Lady of Fangorn
 
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Thanks Wolfie!
Critiques and tips wanted please! August 8, 2017 03:40 PM


Casanova
 
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I'm not fimiliar with pixlr so I'm afraid I wouldn't be much help. Sorry!
Critiques and tips wanted please! August 8, 2017 03:43 PM


The Lady of Fangorn
 
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That's OK! Thanks! I'm gonna go try something now..BRB
Critiques and tips wanted please! August 8, 2017 03:43 PM


The Lady of Fangorn
 
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Where's your avvie, Wolfie?
Critiques and tips wanted please! August 8, 2017 04:04 PM


Sagamore Farms
 
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I don't really know how to use whatever program you are using, but I know that all of these things can be done on GIMP, which is another free program.
Background
- Make sure to slightly blur the sky and top half of the background (not the ground) as it gives it the focused on the horse effect, and makes the images look much nicer
- Splashes where the horses are need to be added. You can find plenty of pre cut splashes on deviantart that are ready to use
- Relflections of the horses on the water needs to be added. All you have to do is double the horse layer, position it on the water, and then smudge, blur, and lower the opacity until it looks natural.
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Lighting
- I would reccomend choosing your stock images according to your background or the their way around, especially when you are just starting out. The lighting in his image is coming from the top right corner, which would mean that shine on the brown horse would be mostly on the side that's not showing, on the top of its butt, and a little bit on his belly from the reflection on the water. The paint horse should then have more shine on the side that's showing, where in this image, he has no shine there. If you were more experienced, I might give you a way to paint shine on, but since you are a beginner, I'd stick to simply choosing images wisely.
Horse Bodies
I would do a teeney but if smudging in these horses bodies, to give them a more painted look. PLEASE don't succumb to the newbie tendency to over smudge ( I try to save people from that phase, as I myself went through that for a long while)
You also want to make sure that the horse looks like it fits in the image. Currently it looks like two horses were cut out of an image and pasted on another. To change that, you should work on hue changing, and stuff like that. I'm sure you can find a tutorial on how to do that online. :)
I would also recommend painting in the horses eyes, to do this, zoom in, take a color, use a 1px brush, and paint a curved line along the bottom of the eye, then take a white 1px brush, and put a little dot on the top corner.
Manes and Tails
-Mane and tail on the paint look pretty okay, but the black one needs some work. Go for a 1px brush one 100% smudge mode, and paint the mane that way. Thing about direction of the wind, and make sure to give the hairs movement.
There's a few other things that could be fixed, but that should be the basis of it. Good for you for asking for critiques by the way. It's the only way to learn! Good luck! <3


Edited at August 8, 2017 04:11 PM by Sagamore Farms

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