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MakeEm Fancy
02:28:38 Ally 💜
Ohh you are onto something 😆 I will make a mental note of that
Angels angels
02:27:51 [1k+ brindles] Angel
-HEE Click-
I have been trying to figure that out for her too BB lol
Embervale Acres
02:27:43 Solar Phoenix
absolutely perfect name XD

he needs art with a sponge trying to clean up his spots lmao
gone with the wind
02:26:59 
-HEE Click- phew.... 25k wasnt a waste! grandson to kratos
Beltane Eventers
02:26:44 Bel - BB
Who do I throw her to for a 2nd embryo 🤔
-HEE Click-
MakeEm Fancy
02:22:43 Ally 💜
Giggling at his name 😅😭
-HEE Click-
Angels angels
02:20:18 [1k+ brindles] Angel
-HEE Click-
-HEE Click-
These are my only keepers from last RO and they weren't huge matches. Didn't even pay for the straws lol
gone with the wind
02:19:22 
-HEE Click- ok.... i think his momma likes my boys, this is his half sister
MakeEm Fancy
02:19:15 Ally 💜
I hope so. We will see
Embervale Acres
02:18:30 Solar Phoenix
had to get onto this account XD

I bred my second WWW last RO, from one of my main matches lol
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hopefully their week 7s do wonderfully, Ally!
gone with the wind
02:17:57 
-HEE Click- i did get him though
gone with the wind
02:16:48 
i got a bunch of SD babies last RO, it was depressing
Silver Melody Acres
02:16:31 Solar - KNNs
I've had semi-decent luck with matches, though this past RO really did not like my SH/ISH account
MakeEm Fancy
02:15:46 Ally 💜
I love him lol
MakeEm Fancy
02:15:13 Ally 💜
And this was my random last RO
-HEE Click-
Silver Melody Acres
02:14:56 Solar - KNNs
oh, he's so gorgeous with those eyes and spots!
Angels angels
02:14:19 [1k+ brindles] Angel
I have four accounts but the other three aren't super serious.

For me it seems like the better higher matches do the worst and my mid matches do best
MakeEm Fancy
02:14:07 Ally 💜
This was my random this RO
-HEE Click-

And my filly sven gave me a EEE
Silver Melody Acres
02:12:57 Solar - KNNs
I have three right now, but I think that's my hard limit - even my two main ones get to be a lot of eaten up time and expense XD
Insignia Elites
02:12:36 Em
The harder I try to match the worst the outcome lol. I got my first WWW with a random match and what seems like luck

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MakeEm Fancy
02:28:38 Ally 💜
Ohh you are onto something 😆 I will make a mental note of that
Angels angels
02:27:51 [1k+ brindles] Angel
-HEE Click-
I have been trying to figure that out for her too BB lol
Embervale Acres
02:27:43 Solar Phoenix
absolutely perfect name XD

he needs art with a sponge trying to clean up his spots lmao
gone with the wind
02:26:59 
-HEE Click- phew.... 25k wasnt a waste! grandson to kratos
Beltane Eventers
02:26:44 Bel - BB
Who do I throw her to for a 2nd embryo 🤔
-HEE Click-
MakeEm Fancy
02:22:43 Ally 💜
Giggling at his name 😅😭
-HEE Click-
Angels angels
02:20:18 [1k+ brindles] Angel
-HEE Click-
-HEE Click-
These are my only keepers from last RO and they weren't huge matches. Didn't even pay for the straws lol
gone with the wind
02:19:22 
-HEE Click- ok.... i think his momma likes my boys, this is his half sister
MakeEm Fancy
02:19:15 Ally 💜
I hope so. We will see
Embervale Acres
02:18:30 Solar Phoenix
had to get onto this account XD

I bred my second WWW last RO, from one of my main matches lol
-HEE Click-

hopefully their week 7s do wonderfully, Ally!
gone with the wind
02:17:57 
-HEE Click- i did get him though
gone with the wind
02:16:48 
i got a bunch of SD babies last RO, it was depressing
Silver Melody Acres
02:16:31 Solar - KNNs
I've had semi-decent luck with matches, though this past RO really did not like my SH/ISH account
MakeEm Fancy
02:15:46 Ally 💜
I love him lol
MakeEm Fancy
02:15:13 Ally 💜
And this was my random last RO
-HEE Click-
Silver Melody Acres
02:14:56 Solar - KNNs
oh, he's so gorgeous with those eyes and spots!
Angels angels
02:14:19 [1k+ brindles] Angel
I have four accounts but the other three aren't super serious.

For me it seems like the better higher matches do the worst and my mid matches do best
MakeEm Fancy
02:14:07 Ally 💜
This was my random this RO
-HEE Click-

And my filly sven gave me a EEE
Silver Melody Acres
02:12:57 Solar - KNNs
I have three right now, but I think that's my hard limit - even my two main ones get to be a lot of eaten up time and expense XD
Insignia Elites
02:12:36 Em
The harder I try to match the worst the outcome lol. I got my first WWW with a random match and what seems like luck

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I'm Writing a Thing December 18, 2020 04:39 PM


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Pandora Creek said:

If the other workers are acting like this is normal and she's surprised maybe make this her first week on the job? Also if there's an elevator but no warning not to take it maybe taking the elevator is a test for people? Also how does the murderer leave if the body slumps right as it opens on the third floor?

Some of your word choices made me have to reread the sentence but it's pretty good. "too-late paramedics" feels particularly clumsy in the sentence.



The idea is that she's kind of isolated from what's going on (doesn't really pay much attention to the news, etc) and the behavior that's been spreading has been kind of normalized violence, justified by "laziness". She's not aware of it. I haven't figured out much of her backstory yet, but the fact that using elevators is generally frowned on (and in her place of work, responsible resource use is especially important) might contribute to why she hasn't witnessed this before.
And I never said which floor the elevator started from xD
Yep! This is only a first draft, I'll look into changing that sentence.

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