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 Dash and Duchess
10:48:10 DD (#2)
Ally, aww rescue babies are so sweet!!
MakeEm Fancy
10:47:20 Ally πŸ’œ
I tried arting and got mad lol so better than me
Glacier Bay Cove
10:45:31 Arctic Katz
I couldn't figure out how to work with the mane and tail, so I left them natural
Glacier Bay Cove
10:43:43 Arctic Katz
It's not fancy but it looks good, I think
MakeEm Fancy
10:42:16 Ally πŸ’œ
Oh I like that!
Glacier Bay Cove
10:41:52 Arctic Katz
Ally
-Click-
Glacier Bay Cove
10:39:37 Arctic Katz
If anyone wants to take a look
MakeEm Fancy
10:38:58 Ally πŸ’œ
Although if dachshunds werent as stubborn and hardheaded as they are I might own one lol I did buy my mom one and she still has him
DarkAngel713
10:38:42 Knightie's SA
-HEE Click-
Glacier Bay Cove
10:37:34 Arctic Katz
Just posted it in my art gallery
Glacier Bay Cove
10:37:16 Arctic Katz
-Click-
HICKORY HILL STABLES
10:35:12 
Very pretty dash too bad she doesn't have a white spotted rump like it like an Appaloosa that would make her perfect but she's pretty either way I like her color
MakeEm Fancy
10:35:08 Ally πŸ’œ
Im just a rescue dog girly Γ°ΕΈΛœβ€š I never stick to just one breed lol I have 3 mutt babies Γ°ΕΈΒ₯ΒΊ
Dash and Duchess
10:33:23 DD (#2)
Ally, same here! I think I'm a lab girl now xD they're just such amazing dogs!
Dark Dream Appaloosa
10:32:01 Moon|Appaloosa Hoard
I feel like she could have potential lol
-HEE Click-
MakeEm Fancy
10:31:28 Ally πŸ’œ
He is my first lab and I absolutely love him. Im sure he is probably mixed with something but he is the best @DD
Dash and Duchess
10:30:43 DD (#2)
Ally, they're so silly lol, but we love em xD
Wynn Talli
10:30:41 Jokers Hideyrock
Ooo I love blankets
Idle Lane Farms
10:30:28 Mera
Eight rerolls later I got a blanket lol
Dark Shadows Estate
10:30:16 Bazz
I probably should not have participated in the capture party

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 Dash and Duchess
10:48:10 DD (#2)
Ally, aww rescue babies are so sweet!!
MakeEm Fancy
10:47:20 Ally πŸ’œ
I tried arting and got mad lol so better than me
Glacier Bay Cove
10:45:31 Arctic Katz
I couldn't figure out how to work with the mane and tail, so I left them natural
Glacier Bay Cove
10:43:43 Arctic Katz
It's not fancy but it looks good, I think
MakeEm Fancy
10:42:16 Ally πŸ’œ
Oh I like that!
Glacier Bay Cove
10:41:52 Arctic Katz
Ally
-Click-
Glacier Bay Cove
10:39:37 Arctic Katz
If anyone wants to take a look
MakeEm Fancy
10:38:58 Ally πŸ’œ
Although if dachshunds werent as stubborn and hardheaded as they are I might own one lol I did buy my mom one and she still has him
DarkAngel713
10:38:42 Knightie's SA
-HEE Click-
Glacier Bay Cove
10:37:34 Arctic Katz
Just posted it in my art gallery
Glacier Bay Cove
10:37:16 Arctic Katz
-Click-
HICKORY HILL STABLES
10:35:12 
Very pretty dash too bad she doesn't have a white spotted rump like it like an Appaloosa that would make her perfect but she's pretty either way I like her color
MakeEm Fancy
10:35:08 Ally πŸ’œ
Im just a rescue dog girly Γ°ΕΈΛœβ€š I never stick to just one breed lol I have 3 mutt babies Γ°ΕΈΒ₯ΒΊ
Dash and Duchess
10:33:23 DD (#2)
Ally, same here! I think I'm a lab girl now xD they're just such amazing dogs!
Dark Dream Appaloosa
10:32:01 Moon|Appaloosa Hoard
I feel like she could have potential lol
-HEE Click-
MakeEm Fancy
10:31:28 Ally πŸ’œ
He is my first lab and I absolutely love him. Im sure he is probably mixed with something but he is the best @DD
Dash and Duchess
10:30:43 DD (#2)
Ally, they're so silly lol, but we love em xD
Wynn Talli
10:30:41 Jokers Hideyrock
Ooo I love blankets
Idle Lane Farms
10:30:28 Mera
Eight rerolls later I got a blanket lol
Dark Shadows Estate
10:30:16 Bazz
I probably should not have participated in the capture party

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Caals Writing a Book! October 7, 2024 12:05 PM


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An update! The past few months have been super busy, so I haven't made much progress. Instead, I've been really honing in the first few chapters until I am satisfied, with the amazing help of a group on Discord which is just writers and authors! There is now a new version (linked in the original post) and I would love the feedback compared to the original!
Caals Writing a Book! October 7, 2024 12:35 PM


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You're doing a great job and it is awesome that you found a community of authors & writers to discuss with!
My main advice is to just keep writing. The finished books you see on a shelf had a first draft that was nowhere near the final product - speaking from experience. ;)
Don't stress too much about getting things right. As long as you have the bones of the story in place, you are good.
First drafts are always messy, a little crazy, and very flawed. But getting to the end lets you see your project in whole - the full course of character arcs, story lines, themes, etc. The things that need fixing, the bumps in the flow, the scenes that need rewritten, will jump out at you on the read-through.
Caals Writing a Book! October 7, 2024 12:39 PM


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WildWillow said:
You're doing a great job and it is awesome that you found a community of authors & writers to discuss with!
My main advice is to just keep writing. The finished books you see on a shelf had a first draft that was nowhere near the final product - speaking from experience. ;)
Don't stress too much about getting things right. As long as you have the bones of the story in place, you are good.
First drafts are always messy, a little crazy, and very flawed. But getting to the end lets you see your project in whole - the full course of character arcs, story lines, themes, etc. The things that need fixing, the bumps in the flow, the scenes that need rewritten, will jump out at you on the read-through.


For sure! Personally, I think if I can tweak the first few chapters to be good, then the rest of it will follow so I have a base to go by. Thank you! I'll definitely follow that advice! (EDIT: Side account)

Edited at October 7, 2024 12:39 PM by Thornwood Manor

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