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WWW WB 1/154 up for stud
5k, no breeding requirements
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Port Royal Equines
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EWE broods for 6k! Last call.
Wolf Dancer
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Dash Warmbloods
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Upgrades for sale. Pm me
Centura stable
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Final hour to get your hands on some amazing horse including an EEP gelding and some EWE mares/fillys!
Kiwi Mountains
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Young WWW WB mare colourful girl. CrCr Rn Dd Toto Sbsb
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11:26:12 Asher
Selling 6 month upgrades for 325k pm to claim also check out my art shop
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Centura stable
10:56:13 Centura
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EWW stallion straws in store on LB
Carmack Stables
10:26:58 Carjack
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WWWs with prl! Ones an apricot producer!
All start at 1k

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The End
02:21:48 Ender
multiple WW+ mares available for brood/embryo next month
Includes WWW producers
-HEE Click-
Jazz Fingers
01:57:21 
Auction, Includes:
EWW Mares, WWW Stallions, PWW Chimera
-HEE Click-

Horses for sale: (Offers Welcome <3)
-HEE Click-

WWW WB 1/154 up for stud
5k, no breeding requirements
-HEE Click-
Port Royal Equines
01:47:39 ISO Brave EWW ISH
-HEE Click-
EWE broods for 6k! Last call.
Wolf Dancer
01:19:42 Wolf Burger (Leg)
:)
-HEE Click-
Dash Warmbloods
12:11:48 
Upgrades for sale. Pm me
Centura stable
12:07:16 Centura
-HEE Click-
Final hour to get your hands on some amazing horse including an EEP gelding and some EWE mares/fillys!
Kiwi Mountains
11:31:36 Kiwi
-HEE Click-
Young WWW WB mare colourful girl. CrCr Rn Dd Toto Sbsb
QualitySH
11:26:12 Asher
Selling 6 month upgrades for 325k pm to claim also check out my art shop
-HEE Click-
Centura stable
10:56:13 Centura
-HEE Click-
EWW stallion straws in store on LB
Carmack Stables
10:26:58 Carjack
-HEE Click-
Lots of Xs
WWWs with prl! Ones an apricot producer!
All start at 1k

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than 1 day before you can use our chatbox.






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Caals Writing a Book! October 7, 2024 12:05 PM


Caaldir Equestrian
 
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An update! The past few months have been super busy, so I haven't made much progress. Instead, I've been really honing in the first few chapters until I am satisfied, with the amazing help of a group on Discord which is just writers and authors! There is now a new version (linked in the original post) and I would love the feedback compared to the original!
Caals Writing a Book! October 7, 2024 12:35 PM


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You're doing a great job and it is awesome that you found a community of authors & writers to discuss with!
My main advice is to just keep writing. The finished books you see on a shelf had a first draft that was nowhere near the final product - speaking from experience. ;)
Don't stress too much about getting things right. As long as you have the bones of the story in place, you are good.
First drafts are always messy, a little crazy, and very flawed. But getting to the end lets you see your project in whole - the full course of character arcs, story lines, themes, etc. The things that need fixing, the bumps in the flow, the scenes that need rewritten, will jump out at you on the read-through.
Caals Writing a Book! October 7, 2024 12:39 PM


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WildWillow said:
You're doing a great job and it is awesome that you found a community of authors & writers to discuss with!
My main advice is to just keep writing. The finished books you see on a shelf had a first draft that was nowhere near the final product - speaking from experience. ;)
Don't stress too much about getting things right. As long as you have the bones of the story in place, you are good.
First drafts are always messy, a little crazy, and very flawed. But getting to the end lets you see your project in whole - the full course of character arcs, story lines, themes, etc. The things that need fixing, the bumps in the flow, the scenes that need rewritten, will jump out at you on the read-through.


For sure! Personally, I think if I can tweak the first few chapters to be good, then the rest of it will follow so I have a base to go by. Thank you! I'll definitely follow that advice! (EDIT: Side account)

Edited at October 7, 2024 12:39 PM by Thornwood Manor

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