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Wolf Dancer
11:53:30 Wolf Burger (Leg)
OMG I'm so excited about work tomorrow!
KPH Equestrian
11:53:04 Rapcoon | Jester
<3
Bluegrass Racing
11:51:37 Blue
oh so its host/server based, not when I tell it. Thank you Jester
KPH Equestrian
11:49:21 Rapcoon | Jester
it ends on the :10, so 9:50, 10:00, 10:10, etc
Bluegrass Racing
11:34:21 Blue
yeah got a two and a seven minute on my alt. Back to back 6's here
Glacier Bay Cove
11:33:59 Arctic Katz
Okay time to work on getting another barn, somehow
ZequineZ
11:32:27 ZEZ - ZZ
For me sometimes it’s 8 minutes, I wondered that too lol
Bluegrass Racing
11:25:50 Blue
how come the crafting time on bits is inconsistent? its either 1, 6, or 10 minutes. Majority of the time its 10 but happens enough for me to notice
Lambda Estates
11:24:17 Eps RID
I only had 30 stalls available after I finished breeding the SD.. I think I need a couple more barns 😅
Glacier Bay Cove
11:21:50 Arctic Katz
I apologize for the caps
MakeEm Fancy
11:21:34 Ally 💜
Geld or keep for quests?
-HEE Click-
Glacier Bay Cove
11:20:54 Arctic Katz
Hummer, I would
Hummingbird Meadows
11:20:32 Bird
I'm seriously ready to cut off contact with my brother after hearing this.
Hummingbird Meadows
11:20:09 Bird
It did deserve better. My mom says it is the girlfriend's fault, but I think my brother is just as much as fault since he is the one who started locking him in a room in the first place.
Glacier Bay Cove
11:19:17 Arctic Katz
SAY WHAT, now I am PISSED, the cat didn't deserve that, it deserves better
Hummingbird Meadows
11:17:53 Bird
I'm pissed. Earlier I mentioned that my brother broke up with his girlfriend and that my Mom was bringing his cat home so we could rehome it. Turns out the thing has been getting neglected. It was locked in a room with little food and water and no litter box.
Hyrule Camp
11:17:41 Ryan
RP anyone pm me
Glacier Bay Cove
11:17:23 Arctic Katz
Okay I will be saving up for the October capture party
Cadence Farms
11:16:44 evebot
This month, then October.
KPH Equestrian
11:16:17 Rapcoon | Jester
glacier
next one's in 2 weeks, the one after is in october :)

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Wolf Dancer
11:53:30 Wolf Burger (Leg)
OMG I'm so excited about work tomorrow!
KPH Equestrian
11:53:04 Rapcoon | Jester
<3
Bluegrass Racing
11:51:37 Blue
oh so its host/server based, not when I tell it. Thank you Jester
KPH Equestrian
11:49:21 Rapcoon | Jester
it ends on the :10, so 9:50, 10:00, 10:10, etc
Bluegrass Racing
11:34:21 Blue
yeah got a two and a seven minute on my alt. Back to back 6's here
Glacier Bay Cove
11:33:59 Arctic Katz
Okay time to work on getting another barn, somehow
ZequineZ
11:32:27 ZEZ - ZZ
For me sometimes it’s 8 minutes, I wondered that too lol
Bluegrass Racing
11:25:50 Blue
how come the crafting time on bits is inconsistent? its either 1, 6, or 10 minutes. Majority of the time its 10 but happens enough for me to notice
Lambda Estates
11:24:17 Eps RID
I only had 30 stalls available after I finished breeding the SD.. I think I need a couple more barns 😅
Glacier Bay Cove
11:21:50 Arctic Katz
I apologize for the caps
MakeEm Fancy
11:21:34 Ally 💜
Geld or keep for quests?
-HEE Click-
Glacier Bay Cove
11:20:54 Arctic Katz
Hummer, I would
Hummingbird Meadows
11:20:32 Bird
I'm seriously ready to cut off contact with my brother after hearing this.
Hummingbird Meadows
11:20:09 Bird
It did deserve better. My mom says it is the girlfriend's fault, but I think my brother is just as much as fault since he is the one who started locking him in a room in the first place.
Glacier Bay Cove
11:19:17 Arctic Katz
SAY WHAT, now I am PISSED, the cat didn't deserve that, it deserves better
Hummingbird Meadows
11:17:53 Bird
I'm pissed. Earlier I mentioned that my brother broke up with his girlfriend and that my Mom was bringing his cat home so we could rehome it. Turns out the thing has been getting neglected. It was locked in a room with little food and water and no litter box.
Hyrule Camp
11:17:41 Ryan
RP anyone pm me
Glacier Bay Cove
11:17:23 Arctic Katz
Okay I will be saving up for the October capture party
Cadence Farms
11:16:44 evebot
This month, then October.
KPH Equestrian
11:16:17 Rapcoon | Jester
glacier
next one's in 2 weeks, the one after is in october :)

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The Soul of Music April 18, 2021 10:06 AM


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Click Here for the Google doc
Chapters posted: 26 / 26

This book was self-published in Hungary, 7 years ago, when I was 17. The publisher has no problem with me translating it into English and sharing it online. That being said the translation is far from perfect, and there might be certain lines in there that work for me (because I see it in Hungarian also) but won't work for native English speakers. (I'd be more than happy if these were pointed out by the way.)

The book is more like a self-healing story than directed at the general public. It's also kind of like a diary from that time while I was writing. Many real life events are placed into it with a few twists. The story is about a 17 year-old girl, in high school, who has a fear of crowds and social anxiety. She's a gamer, spends most of her time alone trying to be as invisible as possible, until a certain person suddenly enters her life and turns it upside down. The book shows her struggle against her fears and emotions, with a touch of fantasy.

Since this is a completely finished work which is well in my past I am not looking for critisism of any kind. You're more than welcome to share your opinion though!

I will try my best to update regularly. I have to go through the translation one more time before posting to check for errors and to make the formatting in the Google doc. I will post here when a new chapter is up.


Edited at May 21, 2021 01:14 PM by HRS
The Soul of Music April 18, 2021 11:17 AM


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ooh just started reading and it looks awesome!
The Soul of Music April 18, 2021 12:23 PM


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Yay, I'm glad you like it! :D

Thistleberry Farm said:
ooh just started reading and it looks awesome!


The Soul of Music April 18, 2021 04:29 PM

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The Soul of Music April 18, 2021 06:17 PM


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Oh I love this! I've always enjoyed reading translated books, there's a certain cadence to them that's just different than books that were just written in plain English. This one is no exception, it's such a lovely read. Thanks for sharing! <3

Edited at April 18, 2021 06:17 PM by FirstLightFarms
The Soul of Music April 19, 2021 05:08 AM


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I'm happy to hear you like it ^^ Thank you for reading <3

FirstLightFarms said:
Oh I love this! I've always enjoyed reading translated books, there's a certain cadence to them that's just different than books that were just written in plain English. This one is no exception, it's such a lovely read. Thanks for sharing! <3


The Soul of Music April 19, 2021 05:31 AM


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I added 3 more chapters :D
The Soul of Music April 22, 2021 08:50 AM


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I added 2 more chapers.
The Soul of Music April 26, 2021 11:04 AM


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New chapters added.
At the time I was writing I didn't notice that the number 9 was skipped at numbering the chapters, and the book was published without a chapter 9 as well. So I kept this little twist here too. Don't worry, nothing is missing from the story, the only thing that was skipped is the chapter number.
The Soul of Music April 26, 2021 05:29 PM


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I really like how these plots are starting to get twisted around each other!

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