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Podere 211
02:54:48 Sue
search horses page also repeats results
Emmas Eventers
02:44:03 
Auctions broken too, says there are 58 horses lol
Legacy Leagues
02:07:09 Alyssa (Future Vet)
Oh... My horse sale page is definitely broken. It lists the same horse like 5 times.
Vancouver
01:51:09 Ana / Van
Bazz
Yeah
N E V E R M O R E
01:49:53 Sarah | Grey
-HEE Click- cute frame i got plus he is all e
Dark Shadows Estate
01:45:02 Bazz
It's about 4.15 that we can train correct?
Legacy Leagues
01:40:29 Alyssa (Future Vet)
Bazz
Amen to that
Lunalovegood
01:40:09 Loony :)
Oh and Bignus bluey= Blue Diamond
Lunalovegood
01:39:35 Loony :)
Bignus
Soo there is this wish list thing and Bluey said she could help so I’m not sure if she is doing it or someone else ( but i guess it will be bluey)
Dark Shadows Estate
01:37:21 Bazz
Loony, I used to get jealous of peoples art but now I don't really - I like my EBs more than art these days haha
Bingus Acres
01:37:14 Bin/Bingus
Ooh, who from Loony?
Lunalovegood
01:36:25 Loony :)
I know guys but I love the art

I’m getting my 1st piece soon (Very excited)
Swirly's stable
01:35:35 Swirly
Loony
Barns aren't that bad, fill them with some show horses and earn the ebs back

Bingus
Fingers crossed! 🤞
Bingus Acres
01:34:29 Bin/Bingus
Swirly, she bumped her dam up to #27 ABLB so I'm really hoping she's just holding out on me lol

Loony, barns are a great investment!
Lunalovegood
01:34:20 Loony :)
Alyssa yeah but I get really jealous of people’s art
Dark Shadows Estate
01:33:57 Bazz
Loony, I like having majority on the same pay day - that way it is only one big blow at the start of the week and then I make the EBs back from showing lol
Lunalovegood
01:33:44 Loony :)
Bazz
I’ll take him if he doesn’t behave
Legacy Leagues
01:33:39 Alyssa (Future Vet)
Loony
Barns isn't a bad investment though
Lunalovegood
01:32:51 Loony :)
Bignus
Don’t make me jealous I won a 400k giveaway last month and I spent it all on barns :(
I knew I should have saved some for art…
Swirly's stable
01:32:28 Swirly
Bingus
That mare should be a little more grateful if she has Mana arts lol

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Podere 211
02:54:48 Sue
search horses page also repeats results
Emmas Eventers
02:44:03 
Auctions broken too, says there are 58 horses lol
Legacy Leagues
02:07:09 Alyssa (Future Vet)
Oh... My horse sale page is definitely broken. It lists the same horse like 5 times.
Vancouver
01:51:09 Ana / Van
Bazz
Yeah
N E V E R M O R E
01:49:53 Sarah | Grey
-HEE Click- cute frame i got plus he is all e
Dark Shadows Estate
01:45:02 Bazz
It's about 4.15 that we can train correct?
Legacy Leagues
01:40:29 Alyssa (Future Vet)
Bazz
Amen to that
Lunalovegood
01:40:09 Loony :)
Oh and Bignus bluey= Blue Diamond
Lunalovegood
01:39:35 Loony :)
Bignus
Soo there is this wish list thing and Bluey said she could help so I’m not sure if she is doing it or someone else ( but i guess it will be bluey)
Dark Shadows Estate
01:37:21 Bazz
Loony, I used to get jealous of peoples art but now I don't really - I like my EBs more than art these days haha
Bingus Acres
01:37:14 Bin/Bingus
Ooh, who from Loony?
Lunalovegood
01:36:25 Loony :)
I know guys but I love the art

I’m getting my 1st piece soon (Very excited)
Swirly's stable
01:35:35 Swirly
Loony
Barns aren't that bad, fill them with some show horses and earn the ebs back

Bingus
Fingers crossed! 🤞
Bingus Acres
01:34:29 Bin/Bingus
Swirly, she bumped her dam up to #27 ABLB so I'm really hoping she's just holding out on me lol

Loony, barns are a great investment!
Lunalovegood
01:34:20 Loony :)
Alyssa yeah but I get really jealous of people’s art
Dark Shadows Estate
01:33:57 Bazz
Loony, I like having majority on the same pay day - that way it is only one big blow at the start of the week and then I make the EBs back from showing lol
Lunalovegood
01:33:44 Loony :)
Bazz
I’ll take him if he doesn’t behave
Legacy Leagues
01:33:39 Alyssa (Future Vet)
Loony
Barns isn't a bad investment though
Lunalovegood
01:32:51 Loony :)
Bignus
Don’t make me jealous I won a 400k giveaway last month and I spent it all on barns :(
I knew I should have saved some for art…
Swirly's stable
01:32:28 Swirly
Bingus
That mare should be a little more grateful if she has Mana arts lol

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Caals Writing a Book! October 7, 2024 12:05 PM


Caaldir Equestrian
 
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An update! The past few months have been super busy, so I haven't made much progress. Instead, I've been really honing in the first few chapters until I am satisfied, with the amazing help of a group on Discord which is just writers and authors! There is now a new version (linked in the original post) and I would love the feedback compared to the original!
Caals Writing a Book! October 7, 2024 12:35 PM


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You're doing a great job and it is awesome that you found a community of authors & writers to discuss with!
My main advice is to just keep writing. The finished books you see on a shelf had a first draft that was nowhere near the final product - speaking from experience. ;)
Don't stress too much about getting things right. As long as you have the bones of the story in place, you are good.
First drafts are always messy, a little crazy, and very flawed. But getting to the end lets you see your project in whole - the full course of character arcs, story lines, themes, etc. The things that need fixing, the bumps in the flow, the scenes that need rewritten, will jump out at you on the read-through.
Caals Writing a Book! October 7, 2024 12:39 PM


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WildWillow said:
You're doing a great job and it is awesome that you found a community of authors & writers to discuss with!
My main advice is to just keep writing. The finished books you see on a shelf had a first draft that was nowhere near the final product - speaking from experience. ;)
Don't stress too much about getting things right. As long as you have the bones of the story in place, you are good.
First drafts are always messy, a little crazy, and very flawed. But getting to the end lets you see your project in whole - the full course of character arcs, story lines, themes, etc. The things that need fixing, the bumps in the flow, the scenes that need rewritten, will jump out at you on the read-through.


For sure! Personally, I think if I can tweak the first few chapters to be good, then the rest of it will follow so I have a base to go by. Thank you! I'll definitely follow that advice! (EDIT: Side account)

Edited at October 7, 2024 12:39 PM by Thornwood Manor

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