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Tamarack Mountain
01:02:53 Opal
my internet has been out all week, just getting to see training today
Tamarack Mountain
01:01:54 Opal
thanks!
Eagle Creek
01:01:31 Eagle
Congrats 🎉
Eagle Creek
01:01:25 Eagle
Damn Opal
Tamarack Mountain
01:00:59 Opal
have a good feeling about him -HEE Click-
Mythological
12:53:42 Crowley
-HEE Click-
Eagle Creek
12:53:24 Eagle
Thank you <3
pandemoniu_m
12:52:57 pheezy
ugh stunning. she looks much better now
Eagle Creek
12:52:16 Eagle
Oo I like this
-HEE Click-
pandemoniu_m
12:52:06 pheezy
then i would say yes eagle, reroll.ost of the other ToTo patterns are much flashier in my opinion
Eagle Creek
12:49:50 Eagle
My favorite
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Thanks pheezy and I'm just looking for a really good ToTo pattern don't really care if her champagne changes
Circle Star RIDs
12:49:13 Granny C
I like the ones that are a 50-50 split for color and white.
pandemoniu_m
12:47:18 pheezy
-HEE Click-

this shows all the tobi patterns i believe. but rerolling her might change the type of champagne as well, no?
Embervale Acres
12:46:10 Solar Phoenix
I like that one with that sabino, but that's just my preference lol
Eagle Creek
12:45:11 Eagle
Is there *
Eagle Creek
12:44:09 Eagle
There there better ToTo patterns or is this one of the best?
Should I reroll or leave as is?
-HEE Click-
Silver Bird Stables
12:42:25 
The baby i was talking about yesterday is making improvements.
Embervale Acres
12:38:29 Solar Phoenix
Done Fawn :)
Valhalla Studs
12:37:20 Grace, Goose, Paris
Alyssa
Thank you, if only I knew who to breed her too lol
All Breeds
12:35:42 Fawn
Ooh gene test her Ember

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Tamarack Mountain
01:02:53 Opal
my internet has been out all week, just getting to see training today
Tamarack Mountain
01:01:54 Opal
thanks!
Eagle Creek
01:01:31 Eagle
Congrats 🎉
Eagle Creek
01:01:25 Eagle
Damn Opal
Tamarack Mountain
01:00:59 Opal
have a good feeling about him -HEE Click-
Mythological
12:53:42 Crowley
-HEE Click-
Eagle Creek
12:53:24 Eagle
Thank you <3
pandemoniu_m
12:52:57 pheezy
ugh stunning. she looks much better now
Eagle Creek
12:52:16 Eagle
Oo I like this
-HEE Click-
pandemoniu_m
12:52:06 pheezy
then i would say yes eagle, reroll.ost of the other ToTo patterns are much flashier in my opinion
Eagle Creek
12:49:50 Eagle
My favorite
-Click-
-Click-
Thanks pheezy and I'm just looking for a really good ToTo pattern don't really care if her champagne changes
Circle Star RIDs
12:49:13 Granny C
I like the ones that are a 50-50 split for color and white.
pandemoniu_m
12:47:18 pheezy
-HEE Click-

this shows all the tobi patterns i believe. but rerolling her might change the type of champagne as well, no?
Embervale Acres
12:46:10 Solar Phoenix
I like that one with that sabino, but that's just my preference lol
Eagle Creek
12:45:11 Eagle
Is there *
Eagle Creek
12:44:09 Eagle
There there better ToTo patterns or is this one of the best?
Should I reroll or leave as is?
-HEE Click-
Silver Bird Stables
12:42:25 
The baby i was talking about yesterday is making improvements.
Embervale Acres
12:38:29 Solar Phoenix
Done Fawn :)
Valhalla Studs
12:37:20 Grace, Goose, Paris
Alyssa
Thank you, if only I knew who to breed her too lol
All Breeds
12:35:42 Fawn
Ooh gene test her Ember

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Caals Writing a Book! October 7, 2024 12:05 PM


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An update! The past few months have been super busy, so I haven't made much progress. Instead, I've been really honing in the first few chapters until I am satisfied, with the amazing help of a group on Discord which is just writers and authors! There is now a new version (linked in the original post) and I would love the feedback compared to the original!
Caals Writing a Book! October 7, 2024 12:35 PM


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You're doing a great job and it is awesome that you found a community of authors & writers to discuss with!
My main advice is to just keep writing. The finished books you see on a shelf had a first draft that was nowhere near the final product - speaking from experience. ;)
Don't stress too much about getting things right. As long as you have the bones of the story in place, you are good.
First drafts are always messy, a little crazy, and very flawed. But getting to the end lets you see your project in whole - the full course of character arcs, story lines, themes, etc. The things that need fixing, the bumps in the flow, the scenes that need rewritten, will jump out at you on the read-through.
Caals Writing a Book! October 7, 2024 12:39 PM


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WildWillow said:
You're doing a great job and it is awesome that you found a community of authors & writers to discuss with!
My main advice is to just keep writing. The finished books you see on a shelf had a first draft that was nowhere near the final product - speaking from experience. ;)
Don't stress too much about getting things right. As long as you have the bones of the story in place, you are good.
First drafts are always messy, a little crazy, and very flawed. But getting to the end lets you see your project in whole - the full course of character arcs, story lines, themes, etc. The things that need fixing, the bumps in the flow, the scenes that need rewritten, will jump out at you on the read-through.


For sure! Personally, I think if I can tweak the first few chapters to be good, then the rest of it will follow so I have a base to go by. Thank you! I'll definitely follow that advice! (EDIT: Side account)

Edited at October 7, 2024 12:39 PM by Thornwood Manor

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