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Horse Eden Eventing Game

Horse Eden Eventing Game

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Calela Eventing

03:53:59 Cali

Alpine!!

03:52:56 Lily/Alpine

Cali!

03:52:40 Lily/Alpine

ooo I like this one
-HEE Click-

Calela Eventing

03:46:58 Cali

MINE!!
*charges*
Why is she soooooo pretty arghhh

Maple Tree Eventing

03:46:04 Lydia <3

HAHA

*very discreetly tucks her away in my pocket*

Calela Eventing

03:45:06 Cali

Lydia
Jaw literally dropped, if you ever want to sell her...

Maple Tree Eventing

03:43:46 Lydia <3

-HEE Click-

rip to the rating but ooft that colourrr

Calela Eventing

03:34:52 Cali

Green,
Found it!

Greenheart Stables

03:33:50 Green|Gren|Grenlin

@Cali
I have no idea, somewere in the game guide I think it mentions it

Calela Eventing

03:30:27 Cali

Green
Oh, okay thanks. And how many do you need before going to the next level?

Greenheart Stables

03:28:44 Green|Gren|Grenlin

The ribbons earned

Calela Eventing

03:27:09 Cali

question,
what decides on when you move up to the next level? Like from Bronze Schooling medal to Silver Schooling Medal?
Is it winnings?

03:21:00

Amb either way both are new, both are ugly

03:18:10

-HEE Click-
Woah so basic but pretty

03:17:48 Amb

No, it's a different pattern altogether

Calela Eventing

03:17:20 Cali

I mean, that pattern on that coat colour does look kinda gross but im pretty sure it's a different pattern

03:17:01

It is, it’s just not roan like checkers. It’s also still ugly

03:16:28 Amb

That's not the same pattern

03:15:35

-HEE Click-
Unfortunately I hate it to

karma

03:14:37

Aw I like the pattern too

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Calela Eventing

03:53:59 Cali

Alpine!!

03:52:56 Lily/Alpine

Cali!

03:52:40 Lily/Alpine

ooo I like this one
-HEE Click-

Calela Eventing

03:46:58 Cali

MINE!!
*charges*
Why is she soooooo pretty arghhh

Maple Tree Eventing

03:46:04 Lydia <3

HAHA

*very discreetly tucks her away in my pocket*

Calela Eventing

03:45:06 Cali

Lydia
Jaw literally dropped, if you ever want to sell her...

Maple Tree Eventing

03:43:46 Lydia <3

-HEE Click-

rip to the rating but ooft that colourrr

Calela Eventing

03:34:52 Cali

Green,
Found it!

Greenheart Stables

03:33:50 Green|Gren|Grenlin

@Cali
I have no idea, somewere in the game guide I think it mentions it

Calela Eventing

03:30:27 Cali

Green
Oh, okay thanks. And how many do you need before going to the next level?

Greenheart Stables

03:28:44 Green|Gren|Grenlin

The ribbons earned

Calela Eventing

03:27:09 Cali

question,
what decides on when you move up to the next level? Like from Bronze Schooling medal to Silver Schooling Medal?
Is it winnings?

03:21:00

Amb either way both are new, both are ugly

03:18:10

-HEE Click-
Woah so basic but pretty

03:17:48 Amb

No, it's a different pattern altogether

Calela Eventing

03:17:20 Cali

I mean, that pattern on that coat colour does look kinda gross but im pretty sure it's a different pattern

03:17:01

It is, it’s just not roan like checkers. It’s also still ugly

03:16:28 Amb

That's not the same pattern

03:15:35

-HEE Click-
Unfortunately I hate it to

karma

03:14:37

Aw I like the pattern too

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November 21, 2017 11:01 PM

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http://funkyimg.com/i/2zyRe.jpg

I want to know how to improve my art further :3 Please critique!

November 22, 2017 11:54 AM

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OMG!! Love It!

November 22, 2017 04:31 PM

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Why would you need to inprove you are SO good!!

November 22, 2017 04:36 PM

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The Wild Child said:
OMG!! Love It!

Rosiebud said:
Why would you need to inprove you are SO good!!

Thanks <3

November 22, 2017 04:36 PM

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how do you make art?

November 22, 2017 04:38 PM

Andraste Equine

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Only thing I really noticed is that the horse needs some more red/orange/yellow midtones which you can adjust in Colour Balance. Just the slightest bit makes the horse seem more like it belongs. Nice work though :)

November 22, 2017 04:53 PM

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Arven Equine said:
Only thing I really noticed is that the horse needs some more red/orange/yellow midtones which you can adjust in Colour Balance. Just the slightest bit makes the horse seem more like it belongs. Nice work though :)

I was wondering what was missing! Something seemed a little out of place but I couldn't seem to find what. Thanks :)

November 22, 2017 05:23 PM

Hollow Tree Acres

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I agree with the color balance part, but I'd also fix the mane a bit. The hair width looks a bit large to me. Other than that, looks great! :)

November 22, 2017 05:25 PM

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I am no artist but maybe make the credits stand out less. Yes, make them readable but maybe for that piece make them grey or put them in the sky. Just an opinion. :)

November 22, 2017 09:03 PM

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I feel like the tail needs to be moe flowing and spread out more. But other than that it looks great!

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