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Horse Eden Eventing Game

Horse Eden Eventing Game

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Blueberry Ledge

06:48:02

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PON Embryo Auction for yr194.
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WEW
EWW
WWE

06:34:32 Blu

Tons of horses for sale!
WB, KNN, PON, ISH
RO Foals that are left will get FR.
Wc through Colors
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05:34:00

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Brindle stallion. Wild caught

05:09:57

04:47:05 Lillie

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200 eb rated Foals and geldings, SEE-PEE

04:36:20 ❀ coco

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Everything available for sensible offers if not already for sale.

04:34:56 Ally 💜

Wild EEE KNN mare
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01:31:50 ZEZ - ZZ

Massive mare clearout, PEEs and a WEP Brindle mare
16 hours to go
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01:09:03

Adventure Map in my shop!

Velstra

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December 19, 2019 05:47 PM

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December 19, 2019 05:55 PM

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Critiques or opinions definitely welcome. Advice highly appreciated and desired as well.

December 19, 2019 06:22 PM

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It looks nice. The only thing is it's hard to tell the neck and head apart. Other than that, I love it!

December 19, 2019 08:06 PM

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Overall, I really like this piece. It looks as though you used a very large brush. I would recommend that you use a smaller brush to do the small details like the eye, mane, shadowing, and highlighting. I think the main thing that would make your piece better is to really focus on shadowing and highlighting. Shadowing will held separate the head from the neck and stop them from blending together, like Nevermore stated.

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