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Horse Eden Eventing Game

Year: 193 Season: Fall

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11:05:35 Ivy / poison ivy

Woo hoo!

Best trio ever right here

11:05:12 Lily/Alpine

Cali, it sure has! :D

11:05:08 Ivy / poison ivy

Loony

YOU WERENT ON XD

we still the twins dont worry

Party Trio

hello. are we talking about HEE? what other HEEs ARE THERE FOLKS

11:04:45 Win | Water

Cali, totally agreed.

Calela Eventing

11:04:16 Cali

Alpine! Trio has arrived

11:04:11 [1k+ brindles] Angel

Whoops set free thr brindle i bred. Oh well he was useless

Calela Eventing

11:03:53 Cali

Ivy!!
Best trio on HEE, not HEE, don’t get confused

11:03:34 Loony/Loony Tune

Ivy, How dare you leave me out :’’’’(

11:03:31 Lily/Alpine

heyyy Ivy!

11:03:26 [1k+ brindles] Angel

Sooty on a dark chestnut

11:03:09 Enoki | Maddie

-HEE Click-
Love this chestnut variation. Almost looks black! or is it a sooty pattern?

11:03:04 Loony/Loony Tune

Ivy nooooo, Please We will stop.. Right guys, Say sorry to Ivy everyone…

11:02:29 Ivy / poison ivy

TRIO

Unite!

This means me, cali, and lily/alpine for those of you who dont know

Glacier Bay Cove

11:01:51 Arctic Katz

Leaving the chat room

11:01:46 Ivy / poison ivy

yes but it's giving me a headache. it wouldn't be a permanent block.

11:01:45 Win | Water

Cali! Finally! Someone who agrees! And loony was saying that HEE was better than HEE

11:01:18 Win | Water

Ivy, but you understand its a joke, right.

Calela Eventing

11:01:08 Cali

Nuh-uh! HEE is wayyyyyy better than HEE or HEE

11:00:53 Ivy / poison ivy

loony

ive been known to do such things

11:00:49 Win | Water

Ivy. -- You're spoiling the fun.

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11:05:35 Ivy / poison ivy

Woo hoo!

Best trio ever right here

11:05:12 Lily/Alpine

Cali, it sure has! :D

11:05:08 Ivy / poison ivy

Loony

YOU WERENT ON XD

we still the twins dont worry

Party Trio

hello. are we talking about HEE? what other HEEs ARE THERE FOLKS

11:04:45 Win | Water

Cali, totally agreed.

Calela Eventing

11:04:16 Cali

Alpine! Trio has arrived

11:04:11 [1k+ brindles] Angel

Whoops set free thr brindle i bred. Oh well he was useless

Calela Eventing

11:03:53 Cali

Ivy!!
Best trio on HEE, not HEE, don’t get confused

11:03:34 Loony/Loony Tune

Ivy, How dare you leave me out :’’’’(

11:03:31 Lily/Alpine

heyyy Ivy!

11:03:26 [1k+ brindles] Angel

Sooty on a dark chestnut

11:03:09 Enoki | Maddie

-HEE Click-
Love this chestnut variation. Almost looks black! or is it a sooty pattern?

11:03:04 Loony/Loony Tune

Ivy nooooo, Please We will stop.. Right guys, Say sorry to Ivy everyone…

11:02:29 Ivy / poison ivy

TRIO

Unite!

This means me, cali, and lily/alpine for those of you who dont know

Glacier Bay Cove

11:01:51 Arctic Katz

Leaving the chat room

11:01:46 Ivy / poison ivy

yes but it's giving me a headache. it wouldn't be a permanent block.

11:01:45 Win | Water

Cali! Finally! Someone who agrees! And loony was saying that HEE was better than HEE

11:01:18 Win | Water

Ivy, but you understand its a joke, right.

Calela Eventing

11:01:08 Cali

Nuh-uh! HEE is wayyyyyy better than HEE or HEE

11:00:53 Ivy / poison ivy

loony

ive been known to do such things

11:00:49 Win | Water

Ivy. -- You're spoiling the fun.

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December 19, 2019 05:47 PM

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December 19, 2019 05:55 PM

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Critiques or opinions definitely welcome. Advice highly appreciated and desired as well.

December 19, 2019 06:22 PM

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It looks nice. The only thing is it's hard to tell the neck and head apart. Other than that, I love it!

December 19, 2019 08:06 PM

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Overall, I really like this piece. It looks as though you used a very large brush. I would recommend that you use a smaller brush to do the small details like the eye, mane, shadowing, and highlighting. I think the main thing that would make your piece better is to really focus on shadowing and highlighting. Shadowing will held separate the head from the neck and stop them from blending together, like Nevermore stated.

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