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The Butterfly Garden
06:41:53 
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Amazing horses starting at 100, today in the last day to bid on them. Auction ends at 9 and all will be released. Snag them while you can, my loss is your gain
DragonFyre Estate
06:30:57 Whip
WWW AA stallion. Consistent AALB landing stud out of ABLB and LB stock. No sabino and no roan.
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WWW AA mare. Has not been prioritized and is going to waste here.
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EWW TB mare. Consistent EEE producer when not matched and prioritized.
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Make offers before I start FRing on RO. PM me to discuss.
Fluffy's Cosy Home
06:15:14 Fluffy
Auction:
*World Class
*PEE combo
*Brindle
*Chimera
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I have:
*WWW/WW Straws
*Studs
*Items in my store
*Decors
*Sale horses
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Samson Stables
03:55:11 
*buckskin roan, not bay roan.
Samson Stables
03:54:42 
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White (DNAed bay roan) EEE 15k
Palais de Lys
02:47:16 
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EEE RID filly 20k.
Namerik Stables
02:09:47 Rose
shoot sorry thought i was in main cha
Namerik Stables
02:08:58 Rose
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Woo-hoo my first EEE capture
Gem
01:47:33 Tier 1 Artist
ISO art feedback <3
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School of Versailles
01:10:09 Bijou
Blue Ribbon Bidders!
The auction has started!
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The Butterfly Garden
06:41:53 
-HEE Click-
Amazing horses starting at 100, today in the last day to bid on them. Auction ends at 9 and all will be released. Snag them while you can, my loss is your gain
DragonFyre Estate
06:30:57 Whip
WWW AA stallion. Consistent AALB landing stud out of ABLB and LB stock. No sabino and no roan.
-HEE Click-
WWW AA mare. Has not been prioritized and is going to waste here.
-HEE Click-
EWW TB mare. Consistent EEE producer when not matched and prioritized.
-HEE Click-
Make offers before I start FRing on RO. PM me to discuss.
Fluffy's Cosy Home
06:15:14 Fluffy
Auction:
*World Class
*PEE combo
*Brindle
*Chimera
-HEE Click-

I have:
*WWW/WW Straws
*Studs
*Items in my store
*Decors
*Sale horses
-HEE Click-
Samson Stables
03:55:11 
*buckskin roan, not bay roan.
Samson Stables
03:54:42 
-HEE Click-

White (DNAed bay roan) EEE 15k
Palais de Lys
02:47:16 
-HEE Click-
EEE RID filly 20k.
Namerik Stables
02:09:47 Rose
shoot sorry thought i was in main cha
Namerik Stables
02:08:58 Rose
-HEE Click-
Woo-hoo my first EEE capture
Gem
01:47:33 Tier 1 Artist
ISO art feedback <3
-HEE Click-
School of Versailles
01:10:09 Bijou
Blue Ribbon Bidders!
The auction has started!
-HEE Click-


let me know if there is anything i can help you with!
Best!

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Critique July 31, 2018 01:01 AM

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https://s20.postimg.cc/q4cmq04nx/EC613344-_A996-4_F85-_B5_DD-7_B923095_A187.png
Wondering what I could do next time to improve.
I know the markings could use some work on the edges to make them a bit more realistic, but other thoughts?
Critique July 31, 2018 01:03 AM

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Try making the edges of the hooves disappear into the grass. Right now, it looks like the horse is trotting on grass patterned concrete.
Critique July 31, 2018 01:13 AM

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Alright, is this any better?
https://s20.postimg.cc/fpbk1n34d/3_ECD0_EC1-_B3_AF-4_F07-9_C9_B-_A5_D2652_E3_E9_C.png
Critique July 31, 2018 04:08 AM

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RavenHale said:
Alright, is this any better?
https://s20.postimg.cc/fpbk1n34d/3_ECD0_EC1-_B3_AF-4_F07-9_C9_B-_A5_D2652_E3_E9_C.png


Yes it looks more like the the horse is part of the image
Critique July 31, 2018 04:25 AM


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You could make the hair that you have drawn on thinner so they look more natural, in the tail especially they are quite thick and they don’t taper at the end like normal hair does.

Still a very good piece though :)
Critique July 31, 2018 09:20 AM

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After you finish the markings, use the smudging tool at about 50% with a small soft brush (around 2px) then go along the side of the marking pulling in an out slightly. It will make the marking look more blended into the horse instead of a sudden stop/beginning. Also the mane by the cheek looks short, I'd suggest making it slightly longer. Other than that, very nice :D

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