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Wild_Potatoes
03:21:31 
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Just caught a KNN chimera 😍
Dash and Duchess
03:03:10 DD | ~Squizard~
peggy, XD that must've been a real confusing morning to wake up without any animals to care for lol!
Pegasus Lane
02:59:59 Peggy (or) Peg
I'm in Estonia!

It really is DD 😂😂 I woke up on the plane completely disoriented and got up to do the animals without thinking 😅
Elks
02:47:23 Elky
Cutie -HEE Click-
Minerva
02:46:20 Min
Im very jealous!!
Dash and Duchess
02:45:21 DD | ~Squizard~
Min, it is incredible! We've had an absolute blast!
Minerva
02:43:28 Min
Oooh nice! Italy is definitely on my list- its incredible apparently!
Dash and Duchess
02:42:46 DD | ~Squizard~
Min, right now I'm in italy lol :D
Minerva
02:41:54 Min
Lol what countries are you in?
Dash and Duchess
02:41:01 DD | ~Squizard~
peggy, same XD We passed the same basilica about 6 times trying figure out buses :') And i know your animals probably miss you too! it's so weird being pulled from your usual routine 😂
Pegasus Lane
02:37:15 Peggy (or) Peg
Thank you! I'm so far out of my element haha - took us 27 hours to get here and I miss all my animals 😂 Was so order going to bed last night and not going out to take care of them
Dash and Duchess
02:34:02 DD | ~Squizard~
peggy, that's so cool!! And yeah i definitely wish we had some family to help xD either way thank you! Hope your's is great too!
Pegasus Lane
02:26:08 Peggy (or) Peg
I also just got to Europe for the first time (since I was three) but thankfully we have family here to cart us around, haha. Good luck DD! Have a great trip
Dash and Duchess
02:22:56 DD | ~Squizard~
Gem, No problem lol! the advice has been super useful and everything's been amazing! (besides me and 4 friends realizing we can't navigate buses >.>) hope you have a good rest! Night'!
Gem
02:18:38 Gem
Oooo exciting!! I'm sorry, I saw that you replied to my post about Italy and then I totally forgot to respond XD
I am going to head to sleep but I hope everything is going amazingly!
Dash and Duchess
02:17:48 DD | ~Squizard~
Gem, lol XD I feel that, happens to me all the time :') I'm currently in europe so it's reasonable hours for me xD See ya later then! You should get some sleep lol XD
Gem
02:14:33 Gem
Hey DD!
I always feel bad when I pop in, get spotted, and then have to leave 😭
It's past 3am here loll
Dash and Duchess
02:13:29 DD | ~Squizard~
Heya gem!
Gold Oak Estate
02:10:34 Opal's SA - AA &
Have you gene tested her? I have a horse like her (diff base coat) and it looks like she has sooty and pangere. She's adorable!
Gem
02:10:15 Gem
Is dressage @Min ;)

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Wild_Potatoes
03:21:31 
-HEE Click-
Just caught a KNN chimera 😍
Dash and Duchess
03:03:10 DD | ~Squizard~
peggy, XD that must've been a real confusing morning to wake up without any animals to care for lol!
Pegasus Lane
02:59:59 Peggy (or) Peg
I'm in Estonia!

It really is DD 😂😂 I woke up on the plane completely disoriented and got up to do the animals without thinking 😅
Elks
02:47:23 Elky
Cutie -HEE Click-
Minerva
02:46:20 Min
Im very jealous!!
Dash and Duchess
02:45:21 DD | ~Squizard~
Min, it is incredible! We've had an absolute blast!
Minerva
02:43:28 Min
Oooh nice! Italy is definitely on my list- its incredible apparently!
Dash and Duchess
02:42:46 DD | ~Squizard~
Min, right now I'm in italy lol :D
Minerva
02:41:54 Min
Lol what countries are you in?
Dash and Duchess
02:41:01 DD | ~Squizard~
peggy, same XD We passed the same basilica about 6 times trying figure out buses :') And i know your animals probably miss you too! it's so weird being pulled from your usual routine 😂
Pegasus Lane
02:37:15 Peggy (or) Peg
Thank you! I'm so far out of my element haha - took us 27 hours to get here and I miss all my animals 😂 Was so order going to bed last night and not going out to take care of them
Dash and Duchess
02:34:02 DD | ~Squizard~
peggy, that's so cool!! And yeah i definitely wish we had some family to help xD either way thank you! Hope your's is great too!
Pegasus Lane
02:26:08 Peggy (or) Peg
I also just got to Europe for the first time (since I was three) but thankfully we have family here to cart us around, haha. Good luck DD! Have a great trip
Dash and Duchess
02:22:56 DD | ~Squizard~
Gem, No problem lol! the advice has been super useful and everything's been amazing! (besides me and 4 friends realizing we can't navigate buses >.>) hope you have a good rest! Night'!
Gem
02:18:38 Gem
Oooo exciting!! I'm sorry, I saw that you replied to my post about Italy and then I totally forgot to respond XD
I am going to head to sleep but I hope everything is going amazingly!
Dash and Duchess
02:17:48 DD | ~Squizard~
Gem, lol XD I feel that, happens to me all the time :') I'm currently in europe so it's reasonable hours for me xD See ya later then! You should get some sleep lol XD
Gem
02:14:33 Gem
Hey DD!
I always feel bad when I pop in, get spotted, and then have to leave 😭
It's past 3am here loll
Dash and Duchess
02:13:29 DD | ~Squizard~
Heya gem!
Gold Oak Estate
02:10:34 Opal's SA - AA &
Have you gene tested her? I have a horse like her (diff base coat) and it looks like she has sooty and pangere. She's adorable!
Gem
02:10:15 Gem
Is dressage @Min ;)

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Art critique July 3, 2018 04:14 AM

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I was looking for someone opinions on my art
I currently charge 8k for a horse avatar do you think that price is right or should I change it

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https://i.imgur.com/KRwOGTn.jpg

I look forward to hearing your suggestions
Art critique July 3, 2018 08:58 AM


WildWillow
 
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Hi Kiralee!

Personally, I would cut out the horse a bit neater. There seems to be a few sharp edges on the back and belly. This can be fixed by taking your time while cutting out the horse and smoothing out any rough edges with the eraser tool. Also in the areas where you are having a yellow/orange lighting on the horse (feathers on legs, mane and tail), I would give a purple hue to make it seem like the horse is actually in the background. Also where the legs meet the grass, taking a smudging tool on a low power and smudging the bottoms of the legs would make it look like they naturally transition into the grass. Also on the mane and tail, I would take a purplish black color and redraw the mane and tail. It looks as though you only cut out the mane and tail and didn't redraw any of it.
That being said, I really like how you gave the body of the horse a purple hue! And I also really like how the photo and horse are lighted.
However, if your light is coming from behind the horse, the horse should have a shadow underneath and in front of it.

For now, I would stick with your pricing. As you improve, you should certainly raise your prices!

I hope this helps!
WildWillow
Art critique July 6, 2018 07:17 AM

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WildWillow said:
Hi Kiralee!
Personally, I would cut out the horse a bit neater. There seems to be a few sharp edges on the back and belly. This can be fixed by taking your time while cutting out the horse and smoothing out any rough edges with the eraser tool. Also in the areas where you are having a yellow/orange lighting on the horse (feathers on legs, mane and tail), I would give a purple hue to make it seem like the horse is actually in the background. Also where the legs meet the grass, taking a smudging tool on a low power and smudging the bottoms of the legs would make it look like they naturally transition into the grass. Also on the mane and tail, I would take a purplish black color and redraw the mane and tail. It looks as though you only cut out the mane and tail and didn't redraw any of it.That being said, I really like how you gave the body of the horse a purple hue! And I also really like how the photo and horse are lighted.However, if your light is coming from behind the horse, the horse should have a shadow underneath and in front of it.
For now, I would stick with your pricing. As you improve, you should certainly raise your prices!
I hope this helps!WildWillow














Thanks I didn’t redraw the mane/tail as I cannot at the moment Something I am working on

https://i.imgur.com/oHcNVYN.jpg

Here is another example

Edited at July 6, 2018 07:18 AM by Kirralee stud farm
Art critique July 6, 2018 02:25 PM


WildWillow
 
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Hi again Kirralee!

The mane and tail on your newer piece is very good! If you are able too, on the edges of your mane I would take a blur tool or a smudge tool on a low power and go over the edges a bit. It would help make your mane and tail flow nicely.
Your horse looks a bit small compared to the background. Choosing a background that has a wider area will help your horse fit in well.
I'm unsure if you added the white markings but it looks like you did. I would go over them with a smudge tool to make it look like it is actually part of the coat rather than sitting on top.
Also, the horse's front hoof seems a bit squished. If it had to be cut that way from the stock, I would recommend either redrawing the hoof or taking parts of the other hooves to blend together to form a new one. Also, I would recommend taking a smudge tool and going over the very bottoms of the hooves so they look as though they are truly on the ground.
The last thing I would like to point out is the flower in the mane. The flower is very sharp while the horse is blurred. To fix this, you could either blur the flower or sharpen the horse.

Other than that, I can tell a huge improvement between the previous one and your most recent one!
Art critique July 7, 2018 05:02 AM

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https://i.imgur.com/Bb5U16R.jpg



My first attempt at drawing a mane and tail

Edited at July 7, 2018 06:01 AM by Kirralee stud farm
Art critique July 7, 2018 06:47 AM

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Definitely better then me I’ll say that right now 😂😂
Art critique July 17, 2018 06:20 AM

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https://s15.postimg.cc/m3duz3gpn/7_AD34_FA6-1_E59-40_FF-_BA15-67938431_DCF1.jpg

First line art

Edited at July 17, 2018 06:20 AM by Kirralee stud farm

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