Horse Eden : Art feedback

11:32:05 Walker

Angel,
some things are also easier for me in person (also an ADHD haver) and I really enjoy going to class and school now, I also have a PTSD diagnosis so I just reallyyy needed that stepping stone! It was very intimidating for me to attend classes in person at first

Angels angels

11:29:23 [1k+ brindles] Angel

Walker
Same, but I do better in person because of my ADHD
I also just really enjoy going to class and school in general. I just wish I didn't have to commute 50+ minutes each way lol

11:27:36 Walker

Angel,
I also started out remote in college, it really helped my confidence to start out that way.

Alpine Acres

11:27:24 Lily/Alpine

Angel
ahh, I'm dropping history next year thankfully, as I'm also not great at it due to not being interested in the subject. I'm also going to have to get an in-person tutor for next year's additional language, which is like my worst fear lol

Angels angels

11:25:22 [1k+ brindles] Angel

Lily
I took my first few semesters in college online, it wasn't bad until I got to the history classes (my worst subject) then I had to take those in person and I had to switch to fully in person for the higher level classes and the labs

11:25:15 Walker

Alpine,
the remote school fatigue is reaaal!

and

it was SUPER rough!! I was very very easily confused

Sweet Valley

11:24:36 Anna/Jewel

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Ever wondered how silk was made?

Glacier Bay Cove

11:24:35 Arctic Katz

To start with

Angels angels

11:24:22 [1k+ brindles] Angel

Walker
Good, I had a horrible professor the first time and had to drop it because I had like a 50 and was not even halfway through the semester. When I retook it the professor was amazing and I think I got an A

Glacier Bay Cove

11:24:22 Arctic Katz

Next serious goal, 4 more 100 stall barns

Alpine Acres

11:24:13 Lily/Alpine

Walker
oof, that's really rough 😭

11:23:55 Walker

Anna,
I was homeschooled k-12, got my high school equivalency diploma through adult ed before I went to college

11:23:26 Walker

Angel,
I think I will have a professor I've had before who is veryyy good!

Alpine Acres

11:23:15 Lily/Alpine

Angel
ahh I envy you

Sweet Valley

11:23:04 Anna/Jewel

I'm homeschool

11:22:57 Walker

Alpine,
I also took general chemistry 1 with a concussion which helped -100% looool. I just barely passed

Alpine Acres

11:22:52 Lily/Alpine

Walker
thanks, I've been online for 5 years so it's not like I'm not used to it but it's been a bit more difficult lately, what with travelling the world + depression xD

Angels angels

11:22:30 [1k+ brindles] Angel

I am done with my maths thankfully lol algebras were easy, precalc not that bad, but calculous? geezus make sure you have a very good teacher

11:22:11 Walker

Bye Win!

Alpine Acres

11:21:55 Lily/Alpine

Walker
I'm exactly the same, just always struggled and stressed xD

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11:32:05 Walker

Angels angels

11:29:23 [1k+ brindles] Angel

Walker
Same, but I do better in person because of my ADHD
I also just really enjoy going to class and school in general. I just wish I didn't have to commute 50+ minutes each way lol

11:27:36 Walker

Angel,
I also started out remote in college, it really helped my confidence to start out that way.

Alpine Acres

11:27:24 Lily/Alpine

Angels angels

11:25:22 [1k+ brindles] Angel

11:25:15 Walker

Alpine,
the remote school fatigue is reaaal!

and

it was SUPER rough!! I was very very easily confused

Sweet Valley

11:24:36 Anna/Jewel

-Click-

Ever wondered how silk was made?

Glacier Bay Cove

11:24:35 Arctic Katz

To start with

Angels angels

11:24:22 [1k+ brindles] Angel

Glacier Bay Cove

11:24:22 Arctic Katz

Next serious goal, 4 more 100 stall barns

Alpine Acres

11:24:13 Lily/Alpine

Walker
oof, that's really rough 😭

11:23:55 Walker

Anna,
I was homeschooled k-12, got my high school equivalency diploma through adult ed before I went to college

11:23:26 Walker

Angel,
I think I will have a professor I've had before who is veryyy good!

Alpine Acres

11:23:15 Lily/Alpine

Angel
ahh I envy you

Sweet Valley

11:23:04 Anna/Jewel

I'm homeschool

11:22:57 Walker

Alpine,
I also took general chemistry 1 with a concussion which helped -100% looool. I just barely passed

Alpine Acres

11:22:52 Lily/Alpine

Walker
thanks, I've been online for 5 years so it's not like I'm not used to it but it's been a bit more difficult lately, what with travelling the world + depression xD

Angels angels

11:22:30 [1k+ brindles] Angel

I am done with my maths thankfully lol algebras were easy, precalc not that bad, but calculous? geezus make sure you have a very good teacher

11:22:11 Walker

Bye Win!

Alpine Acres

11:21:55 Lily/Alpine

Walker
I'm exactly the same, just always struggled and stressed xD

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July 31, 2018 09:12 PM

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I need some feedback on how this looks so far before I do the tail

https://image.ibb.co/mEVRyz/Untitled59_4.jpg

July 31, 2018 09:14 PM

Former Stable

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The mane is nice, But the markings look very unrealistic. So does the way the hooves sink into the flowers.

July 31, 2018 09:14 PM

Wildwood Stables

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looks good but maybe try to make the horse look like its standing in the grass not in front of it

July 31, 2018 09:15 PM

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Celestial Estates said:
The mane is nice, But the markings look very unrealistic. So does the way the hooves sink into the flowers.

How do you think I could fix that? I used the lasso tool on ibis paint X for the markings

July 31, 2018 09:16 PM

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How do you think I could fix it?

Wildwood Stables said:
looks good but maybe try to make the horse look like its standing in the grass not in front of it

July 31, 2018 09:34 PM

Jellos Warmbloods

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The manes color is nice, but the shape strongly reminds me of a mullet.

I would really study the mechanics of hair. They bend and wave. I would also suggest adding different length strands. Right now they all appear the same length, which is what is causing the mullet appearence.

July 31, 2018 09:42 PM

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Jellos Warmbloods said:
The manes color is nice, but the shape strongly reminds me of a mullet.

I would really study the mechanics of hair. They bend and wave. I would also suggest adding different length strands. Right now they all appear the same length, which is what is causing the mullet appearence.

Ok thank you for the feedback also do you know how I could fix the leg markings and the feet in the flowers

July 31, 2018 09:46 PM

Jellos Warmbloods

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You need to add some shadowing to the legs.

as far as the ground connection, think of walking through a field of flowers. How would they break up your leg profile?

Would it be a straight line? How high do flowers go up ones leg?

Also dont forget to add a shadow. It's sunny outside.

July 31, 2018 10:44 PM