Horse Eden Eventing Game
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Alpine Acres
08:00:13 Lily/Alpine
In the area where we are, it's lovely! But if you go just five minutes out of the area, it becomes a trash-filled chaotic mess xD
Angels angels
07:58:32 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Lily
Oh how fun! :3
Is it super pretty there?
Sorrelwood Acres
07:58:31 
Okay thank you
Alpine Acres
07:57:56 Lily/Alpine
Angel, I'm currently in Bangalore, India! Only for a few more days though, before returning home
Alpine Acres
07:57:21 Lily/Alpine
Beat me to it Angel lol xD
Alpine Acres
07:57:11 Lily/Alpine
Sorrelwood, you need to go into the section of the forum that you want to add your forum post to, and scroll down to the bottom of the page. There's a box where you can add your title and text :)
Angels angels
07:56:58 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Lily
Where do you live if you don't mind me asking? Lol
I am in Georgia in the US and it is almost 9:00
Angels angels
07:56:16 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Sorrelwood
Just go to the forums under Community > Forums
Click on the topic that is what your forum will be about then at the bottom there will be a text box to create a post
Alpine Acres
07:55:43 Lily/Alpine
18:25 :)
Angels angels
07:55:20 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Lol Lily
What time is it for you?
Alpine Acres
07:54:39 Lily/Alpine
Angel, it's evening for me lol
Sorrelwood Acres
07:54:31 
Can someone explain to me on how to make a forum?
Angels angels
07:48:11 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Chat is quiet this morning
KNN_Pride
07:20:09 Hunting
ZEZ
thank you! I was like, how am i supposed to do this on a computer
pandemoniu_m
07:19:27 pheezy
just like that: At. same with the dominant creme allele Ccr
ZequineZ
07:19:16 ZEZ - ZZ
I think you just type it as At but don’t quote me
KNN_Pride
07:18:07 Hunting
for the gene practice, how do we use the allele "At"? because the T is subscripted(I doubt thats the right word)
ZequineZ
07:17:08 ZEZ - ZZ
25% chance of silver my ass .-. 10 horses captured 1 is silver lol
Santana Rising
06:06:03 San
That's a lovely filly ajd there's never too many RbRbs in the game!
Seagrape Stables
05:48:01 Secret Capp
Oh gotta love questing wins LOL -HEE Click-

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Alpine Acres
08:00:13 Lily/Alpine
In the area where we are, it's lovely! But if you go just five minutes out of the area, it becomes a trash-filled chaotic mess xD
Angels angels
07:58:32 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Lily
Oh how fun! :3
Is it super pretty there?
Sorrelwood Acres
07:58:31 
Okay thank you
Alpine Acres
07:57:56 Lily/Alpine
Angel, I'm currently in Bangalore, India! Only for a few more days though, before returning home
Alpine Acres
07:57:21 Lily/Alpine
Beat me to it Angel lol xD
Alpine Acres
07:57:11 Lily/Alpine
Sorrelwood, you need to go into the section of the forum that you want to add your forum post to, and scroll down to the bottom of the page. There's a box where you can add your title and text :)
Angels angels
07:56:58 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Lily
Where do you live if you don't mind me asking? Lol
I am in Georgia in the US and it is almost 9:00
Angels angels
07:56:16 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Sorrelwood
Just go to the forums under Community > Forums
Click on the topic that is what your forum will be about then at the bottom there will be a text box to create a post
Alpine Acres
07:55:43 Lily/Alpine
18:25 :)
Angels angels
07:55:20 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Lol Lily
What time is it for you?
Alpine Acres
07:54:39 Lily/Alpine
Angel, it's evening for me lol
Sorrelwood Acres
07:54:31 
Can someone explain to me on how to make a forum?
Angels angels
07:48:11 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Chat is quiet this morning
KNN_Pride
07:20:09 Hunting
ZEZ
thank you! I was like, how am i supposed to do this on a computer
pandemoniu_m
07:19:27 pheezy
just like that: At. same with the dominant creme allele Ccr
ZequineZ
07:19:16 ZEZ - ZZ
I think you just type it as At but don’t quote me
KNN_Pride
07:18:07 Hunting
for the gene practice, how do we use the allele "At"? because the T is subscripted(I doubt thats the right word)
ZequineZ
07:17:08 ZEZ - ZZ
25% chance of silver my ass .-. 10 horses captured 1 is silver lol
Santana Rising
06:06:03 San
That's a lovely filly ajd there's never too many RbRbs in the game!
Seagrape Stables
05:48:01 Secret Capp
Oh gotta love questing wins LOL -HEE Click-

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Critique Please :) August 22, 2019 01:02 PM


TheTriggeredHipster
 
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Crystal Heart Estate said:


TheTriggeredHipster said:
What program do you have, Luxxy?

Ibis Paint X on Google Play


Well, first of all:
Huge congrats and kudos to you for doing some excellent work using a paint program. I was completely unable to tell that you hadn't been using professional grade editing software (like Photoshop). I am unfamiliar with that program, but I do have a couple edits for you to consider in your future works. :)

Things I like:

- Your cutting is clean
- Your hair is great, and has movement.
- Your composition is spot-on.
- You put out unique, quality work.

Things you might try:

- Try matching your horse to its background just a little more. Horse coats naturally reflect colored light around them. I achieve this using "Color Balance" in Photoshop, but there may be an alternative way to do this in your own program (look for words like "cool filter" or "color cast". For example, your gorgeous unicorn piece:

Before:
https://i.lensdump.com/i/itcKgM.jpg

After (changing color tones):
https://i.lensdump.com/i/itcrv2.jpg


- Try doing a bit of background blur, to bring focus to your subject. This will make them pop! I use "Lens Blur" in Photoshop, but you might have other blur filters in your program. Also - watch your lighting! In your four horse banner, you have one horse who's lighting is coming from the opposite direction of the others! (I have drawn in the light source with teal arrows)

An example of background blending (I don't have the layers of this one, and just did a VERY ROUGH edit for the blur as an example, lol), and arrows to show light source:

Before:
https://i.postimg.cc/zzgVGDhR/Untitled325.jpg

After:
https://i.lensdump.com/i/itcgV9.jpg



Overall, I like your work and I think the only thing I can critique are small edits to refine your work. It's difficult to teach good composition and creativity, so you are on the right path. I personally like your horse prep as it is. <3 Keep at it!

Edited at August 22, 2019 01:04 PM by TheTriggeredHipster
Critique Please :) August 22, 2019 03:11 PM


Unexpected Visitor
 
Posts: 1348
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*squeaks*
Thank you so much Trigg!! It means a lot to me to have such an amazing artist as yourself critique my art <3

You have really helped explain everything that I need to work on, I'll screenshot it and use it for future use :)

Again, thank you <33
Critique Please :) August 22, 2019 03:32 PM


TheTriggeredHipster
 
Posts: 927
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Crystal Heart Estate said:
*squeaks*
Thank you so much Trigg!! It means a lot to me to have such an amazing artist as yourself critique my art <3

You have really helped explain everything that I need to work on, I'll screenshot it and use it for future use :)

Again, thank you <33



<3 Don't hesitate to reach out. You're on the right track here!

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