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Shop clearout!
Horse Haven Stables
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WWW ISH Mare for sale! Will take offers on her so please PM me! Also open to trades! Really just need her gone!
Idle Lane Farms
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ISO 50 pack of rerolls please pm me
hookfang
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Good PWW WB stallion for sale. 20k - has produced WC foals just not a good match for my current mares
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Verdant Acres
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ISO: 3 mnth upgrade!
Lunar Wilds
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ISO good brood are match for my WWW AA Stud

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Port Royal Equines
02:39:11 Lvl 6+ Gelds 4 Sale
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Proven Seal Brown ABLB WWW Sire.

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Proven Silver Grullo LB WWW Sire.

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Proven Grullo WWW Sire.


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EEE+ Broodmares at 4k. Bravery mares included! Some are W producers.
Birthday Girl
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And then she will be gone for free range sorry for the duplicates
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Constructive Criticism January 8, 2018 05:39 PM

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Hey! I'm just wondering where I can improve my art :) I haven't been doing for that long so any any help is appreciated!
This is my most recent piece:

https://horseeden.com/horse.php?id=15154277

Thanks!
Constructive Criticism January 8, 2018 05:49 PM


Wings Of Glory
 
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my only thing i have to say is that the background looks a bit too blurry but otherwise i love this piece
Constructive Criticism January 8, 2018 10:58 PM


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$Wings of Glory$ said:
my only thing i have to say is that the background looks a bit too blurry but otherwise i love this piece


Partly agree with this. Maybe try and make the horse clearer/sharper to match the little baby tree next to it? Overall a beautiful piece. Great work.

EDIT: Also, maybe try playing with the highlights on the horse? Just look at the light source.

Edited at January 8, 2018 11:02 PM by Oceane Elites
Constructive Criticism January 8, 2018 11:07 PM

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Oceane Elites said:


$Wings of Glory$ said:
my only thing i have to say is that the background looks a bit too blurry but otherwise i love this piece


Partly agree with this. Maybe try and make the horse clearer/sharper to match the little baby tree next to it? Overall a beautiful piece. Great work.

EDIT: Also, maybe try playing with the highlights on the horse? Just look at the light source.


Yeah good point! I’m just starting to add highlights and lowlights into my manips now ao hopefully that will be fixed soon xD

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