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Midsummer Meadows
01:10:44 
ah probably because HEE doesn't want. anyone to slander horses
Gypsy Family Farm
01:08:22 
As I also discover that you can't say the name of another horse game or chat dumps your post.
Elysium Opalus
01:08:21 anti gen ai
HEE vs HEE is a joke i think lol
Midsummer Meadows
01:06:58 
Fanta

If a horse was rated lower but performed better in shows - like beating it's rating
Gypsy Family Farm
01:06:55 
I thought so; I mean I've been around forever (like since an ASS horse could win the World Games) but then yesterday happened. ;P
Alpine Acres
01:05:43 Lily/Alpine
Gypsy, it was a joke that started yesterday. there's only one HEE xD
Financially Stable
01:05:03 Tobi | SA
There is definitely Luck with RF, but there's also plenty of other factors.
Financially Stable
01:03:34 Tobi | SA
No Gypsy they're just fucking with you.
Fantasy Horses
01:02:49 Fantasy | Fanta
Gypsy
...no, I don't think so. I mean, there's DT and WP.
Nolified
01:02:34 noli,SH thief,bread
I think it’s based more on luck summer,
Gypsy Family Farm
01:02:05 
Wait now I am really confused. Were there two HEE games?
Fantasy Horses
01:01:17 Fantasy | Fanta
Summer
What do you mean?
Fantasy Horses
01:00:27 Fantasy | Fanta
-HEE Click-
For instance ^^ She was WWW x EWW and they matched pretty well, balancing out each other's strengths and weaknesses. And still got a EEE. That's just how random factor works.
Midsummer Meadows
12:59:50 
honestly, it would be nice if your horse performed better than it's rating
Fantasy Horses
12:58:48 Fantasy | Fanta
Right. Just matching a WWW to a WWW doesn't mean you'll get a WWW.
Midsummer Meadows
12:57:31 
so don't go off of ratings alone?
Fantasy Horses
12:56:17 Fantasy | Fanta
Midsummer
Well, you need to know their strengths and weaknesses before you match them.
Mentally Un-Stable
12:56:06 Chey
After. That way you can match your horses and get the best chance at a good foal
Midsummer Meadows
12:54:33 
is it better to breed before training or after some training?
Mentally Un-Stable
12:53:58 Chey
*with very little training

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Midsummer Meadows
01:10:44 
ah probably because HEE doesn't want. anyone to slander horses
Gypsy Family Farm
01:08:22 
As I also discover that you can't say the name of another horse game or chat dumps your post.
Elysium Opalus
01:08:21 anti gen ai
HEE vs HEE is a joke i think lol
Midsummer Meadows
01:06:58 
Fanta

If a horse was rated lower but performed better in shows - like beating it's rating
Gypsy Family Farm
01:06:55 
I thought so; I mean I've been around forever (like since an ASS horse could win the World Games) but then yesterday happened. ;P
Alpine Acres
01:05:43 Lily/Alpine
Gypsy, it was a joke that started yesterday. there's only one HEE xD
Financially Stable
01:05:03 Tobi | SA
There is definitely Luck with RF, but there's also plenty of other factors.
Financially Stable
01:03:34 Tobi | SA
No Gypsy they're just fucking with you.
Fantasy Horses
01:02:49 Fantasy | Fanta
Gypsy
...no, I don't think so. I mean, there's DT and WP.
Nolified
01:02:34 noli,SH thief,bread
I think it’s based more on luck summer,
Gypsy Family Farm
01:02:05 
Wait now I am really confused. Were there two HEE games?
Fantasy Horses
01:01:17 Fantasy | Fanta
Summer
What do you mean?
Fantasy Horses
01:00:27 Fantasy | Fanta
-HEE Click-
For instance ^^ She was WWW x EWW and they matched pretty well, balancing out each other's strengths and weaknesses. And still got a EEE. That's just how random factor works.
Midsummer Meadows
12:59:50 
honestly, it would be nice if your horse performed better than it's rating
Fantasy Horses
12:58:48 Fantasy | Fanta
Right. Just matching a WWW to a WWW doesn't mean you'll get a WWW.
Midsummer Meadows
12:57:31 
so don't go off of ratings alone?
Fantasy Horses
12:56:17 Fantasy | Fanta
Midsummer
Well, you need to know their strengths and weaknesses before you match them.
Mentally Un-Stable
12:56:06 Chey
After. That way you can match your horses and get the best chance at a good foal
Midsummer Meadows
12:54:33 
is it better to breed before training or after some training?
Mentally Un-Stable
12:53:58 Chey
*with very little training

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Art Critique September 14, 2019 12:26 PM

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https://i.postimg.cc/pT0bBfVZ/Untitled229-1.jpg
https://i.postimg.cc/wTVYD0YS/Untitled230-1.jpg

Thoughts? Critiques? I've been practicing.

If I were to reopen my shop (should I?) What tier should I be in? What would be fair prices?

Edit: some credits

Edited at September 15, 2019 01:28 PM by Golden Meadows
Art Critique September 14, 2019 12:51 PM

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I love it
Art Critique September 14, 2019 01:23 PM

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I vote it !very pretty maybe try adding markings next time,adventure into new things!
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Raven Hollow Elite said:
I vote it !very pretty maybe try adding markings next time,adventure into new things!


I leave my pieces bare so the auction winner can have them added ;)
Art Critique September 14, 2019 01:33 PM


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I would still pop the credits on there, since you technically have published the image ;)

Not hard to just pop them on and then hide the layer while you're actually working.

Critique time!
The horse's lighting is a good foundation - adding a touch of light to the shoulder/withers may help give the horse some definition, and fit with how bright that highlighting is on its back. (Right now, the horse seems just a little out of whack with the backgrounds lighting)

The composition is alright, and I enjoy how you have placed the horse to be crossing the stream.

With that though - Might want to add some splashes! :D If you're not confident on drawing them, there are DA stock artists who provide pre-cut splash effects you could put to good use here. Really add some motion and cement the horse in the background realistically.

The mane and tail are nice! They fit well with the smoothed style you chose for the horse.

Lighting: The color of the horses lighting is on-par with the background :D



EDIT: Unsure if they were added while I was writing or if I just missed them.. but the credits are really hard to read with the font you chose. I'd either brighten them so they are more easily legible, or pick a different font.

Edited at September 14, 2019 01:35 PM by Squeeing Onion RIDs
Art Critique September 14, 2019 01:38 PM

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Squeeing Onion RIDs said:
I would still pop the credits on there, since you technically have published the image ;)

Not hard to just pop them on and then hide the layer while you're actually working.

Critique time!
The horse's lighting is a good foundation - adding a touch of light to the shoulder/withers may help give the horse some definition, and fit with how bright that highlighting is on its back. (Right now, the horse seems just a little out of whack with the backgrounds lighting)

The composition is alright, and I enjoy how you have placed the horse to be crossing the stream.

With that though - Might want to add some splashes! :D If you're not confident on drawing them, there are DA stock artists who provide pre-cut splash effects you could put to good use here. Really add some motion and cement the horse in the background realistically.

The mane and tail are nice! They fit well with the smoothed style you chose for the horse.

Lighting: The color of the horses lighting is on-par with the background :D



EDIT: Unsure if they were added while I was writing or if I just missed them.. but the credits are really hard to read with the font you chose. I'd either brighten them so they are more easily legible, or pick a different font.



If you zoom in, I painted splishes on the feet ;)

Thanks :DD. I'll brightest the credits :D
Art Critique September 15, 2019 01:28 PM

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Should I reopen my art shop? If so, what would be fair prices and what tier would I be in?
Art Critique September 15, 2019 03:10 PM

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I would say Tier 1 at 30-45k would be okay.
Art Critique September 15, 2019 03:20 PM

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https://horseeden.com/forums.php?f=57&t=31246

How's that pricing?

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