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Horse Eden Eventing Game

Horse Eden Eventing Game

Year: 192 Season: Winter

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Stables Online: 51

Greenheart Stables

03:52:38 Green|Gren|Grenlin

Aaand 2 sexed sevns snatched

Calela Eventing

03:48:23 Cali

After 5 years of riding and about 10 well-schooled dressage horses I still can't do half-passes or leg yields when not out on the trails.
So grateful that my horse puts up with my dressage nonsense

WolfRunner Acres

03:42:21

How does my avatar look? My laptop is making it look washed out...

03:40:29 Honey

Looks good Mochi :)

Mochi~

03:28:46

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How does this match look?

Caaldir Equestrian

03:05:07 Caal/Deor/Trash Rat

Not bad!
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Paradise Stables

02:11:33 Ariel / Tara

I both wish and don't wish it was lol

Dark Shadows Estate

02:06:47 Bazz

for some reason I thought it was the first today lol...

02:04:51

My brain is melting slightly
Trying to sort out US eventing levels, with the dressage level equivalents - and then corelating that with British eventing.

and reminding myself the difference between shoulder-fore and shoulder-in, renvers and travers

WolfRunner Acres

02:04:45

Thank you Lily

Greenheart Stables

01:55:45 Green|Gren|Grenlin

-HEE Click-
👀

Paradise Stables

01:51:03 Ariel / Tara

Lily, are you still here?

Paradise Stables

01:50:32 Ariel / Tara

Marsh, so cute!!

01:44:45 marsh 🌈

tigors -Click-

01:35:49 Lily

WolfRunner
green means your horse is doing well in training and is at the same level as their rider, so yes it is good :)
Red means they have levelled up before their rider and need to be switched to a rider that is the same level as them

Sport Pony Island

01:32:00

And my last brindle

-HEE Click-

Sport Pony Island

01:31:07

Ye

Sport Pony Island

01:30:54

Нуб she is a beauty

Sagewood Stables

01:30:44

this is my first brindle :D
-HEE Click-

01:29:44

Woah

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Greenheart Stables

03:52:38 Green|Gren|Grenlin

Aaand 2 sexed sevns snatched

Calela Eventing

03:48:23 Cali

After 5 years of riding and about 10 well-schooled dressage horses I still can't do half-passes or leg yields when not out on the trails.
So grateful that my horse puts up with my dressage nonsense

WolfRunner Acres

03:42:21

How does my avatar look? My laptop is making it look washed out...

03:40:29 Honey

Looks good Mochi :)

Mochi~

03:28:46

-HEE Click-
How does this match look?

Caaldir Equestrian

03:05:07 Caal/Deor/Trash Rat

Not bad!
-HEE Click-

Paradise Stables

02:11:33 Ariel / Tara

I both wish and don't wish it was lol

Dark Shadows Estate

02:06:47 Bazz

for some reason I thought it was the first today lol...

02:04:51

My brain is melting slightly
Trying to sort out US eventing levels, with the dressage level equivalents - and then corelating that with British eventing.

and reminding myself the difference between shoulder-fore and shoulder-in, renvers and travers

WolfRunner Acres

02:04:45

Thank you Lily

Greenheart Stables

01:55:45 Green|Gren|Grenlin

-HEE Click-
👀

Paradise Stables

01:51:03 Ariel / Tara

Lily, are you still here?

Paradise Stables

01:50:32 Ariel / Tara

Marsh, so cute!!

01:44:45 marsh 🌈

tigors -Click-

01:35:49 Lily

WolfRunner
green means your horse is doing well in training and is at the same level as their rider, so yes it is good :)
Red means they have levelled up before their rider and need to be switched to a rider that is the same level as them

Sport Pony Island

01:32:00

And my last brindle

-HEE Click-

Sport Pony Island

01:31:07

Ye

Sport Pony Island

01:30:54

Нуб she is a beauty

Sagewood Stables

01:30:44

this is my first brindle :D
-HEE Click-

01:29:44

Woah

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June 22, 2018 05:17 PM

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Edited at May 1, 2019 02:51 PM by Equity Falls

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June 22, 2018 05:20 PM

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The back is a little rough, maybe you can smooth the way that the back is shaped? Looks really good so far though!

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June 22, 2018 05:24 PM

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BT21 Stables said:
The back is a little rough, maybe you can smooth the way that the back is shaped? Looks really good so far though!

What on the back is rough? So I know what to edit :) the withers? The back? The loin? The croupe?

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June 22, 2018 05:28 PM

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This looks great! Except that there is no apparent light source, unless someone is shining a light onto the horse, to make it look like that. You can use a burn tool to make the horse darker.

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June 22, 2018 05:36 PM

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Celestial Estates said:
This looks great! Except that there is no apparent light source, unless someone is shining a light onto the horse, to make it look like that. You can use a burn tool to make the horse darker.

I plan on adding one in the top left :D and thanks! I don't use the burn tool unless it's on the color layer, but I have ways >:3

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June 22, 2018 05:40 PM

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It will be amazing if you add in a flashy blue eye!

Beautiful work by the way

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June 22, 2018 06:09 PM

Jellos Warmbloods

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I think this is awful.

You should just give it to me....

and try again. :P<3

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June 22, 2018 07:13 PM

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Jellos Warmbloods said:
I think this is awful.

You should just give it to me....
and try again. :P<3

Deal! Lol kidding <3 Thanks Jelly-Oh

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