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Mythological
05:56:33 Crowley
DD
Mhmm excuses lol (Just kidding.)
Gemstone Stable
05:54:55 Snow❆Gem
I gotta go now. See-yas later. :)
Gemstone Stable
05:54:45 Snow❆Gem
@myth

Talent!
Dash and Duchess
05:54:41 DD | ~Squizard~
Myth, Oop xD I've been swapping between reading, arts, and hee and I got lost xD
Crestwood Eq.
05:53:47 Ivy / poison ivy
Angel

XD
Mythological
05:52:48 Crowley
Angel
Yes!! 🙌
Angels angels
05:51:27 [1k+ brindles] Angel
-YT Click-
I need this like yesterday lol
Mythological
05:51:14 Crowley
Just took a bunch of pears out of a tree with a pail lid. 💀
Gemstone Stable
05:50:06 Snow❆Gem
@myth

Its taking longer then normal, me thinks? Happened on Friday, and even if it started on a Monday, its now Thursday.
Gemstone Stable
05:49:12 Snow❆Gem
*cut and done
Mythological
05:48:50 Crowley
Autopsy is routine I believe.
Gemstone Stable
05:45:58 Snow❆Gem
@myth

Yup. Not a cut and down classic case here. His poor mom... and his still in autopsy from what his mom said on FB. O.o

I wonder if he was dead before the accident or it they want to know if he was dragged out of the burning car, if he might have lived. :(
Mythological
05:43:14 Crowley
Gem
That's a little concerning.
Crestwood Eq.
05:40:26 Ivy / poison ivy
Snow

I use duolingo too!
Gemstone Stable
05:40:05 Snow❆Gem
@ivy

I hate heat. Cold I like. And yes, I completed the full Duolingo course and am going back through it a second time. :)
Crestwood Eq.
05:39:24 Ivy / poison ivy
Snow

Are you learning german, too?
Crestwood Eq.
05:38:19 Ivy / poison ivy
Snow

Hot as fuck
Gemstone Stable
05:37:44 Snow❆Gem
@ivy

Yikes!
Gemstone Stable
05:37:33 Snow❆Gem
@myth

You know that guy that I was talking about died in a car accident. It was Friday afternoon, and they still don't know who was driving?! O.o
Crestwood Eq.
05:36:58 Ivy / poison ivy
Snow

Soccer practice. XP

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Mythological
05:56:33 Crowley
DD
Mhmm excuses lol (Just kidding.)
Gemstone Stable
05:54:55 Snow❆Gem
I gotta go now. See-yas later. :)
Gemstone Stable
05:54:45 Snow❆Gem
@myth

Talent!
Dash and Duchess
05:54:41 DD | ~Squizard~
Myth, Oop xD I've been swapping between reading, arts, and hee and I got lost xD
Crestwood Eq.
05:53:47 Ivy / poison ivy
Angel

XD
Mythological
05:52:48 Crowley
Angel
Yes!! 🙌
Angels angels
05:51:27 [1k+ brindles] Angel
-YT Click-
I need this like yesterday lol
Mythological
05:51:14 Crowley
Just took a bunch of pears out of a tree with a pail lid. 💀
Gemstone Stable
05:50:06 Snow❆Gem
@myth

Its taking longer then normal, me thinks? Happened on Friday, and even if it started on a Monday, its now Thursday.
Gemstone Stable
05:49:12 Snow❆Gem
*cut and done
Mythological
05:48:50 Crowley
Autopsy is routine I believe.
Gemstone Stable
05:45:58 Snow❆Gem
@myth

Yup. Not a cut and down classic case here. His poor mom... and his still in autopsy from what his mom said on FB. O.o

I wonder if he was dead before the accident or it they want to know if he was dragged out of the burning car, if he might have lived. :(
Mythological
05:43:14 Crowley
Gem
That's a little concerning.
Crestwood Eq.
05:40:26 Ivy / poison ivy
Snow

I use duolingo too!
Gemstone Stable
05:40:05 Snow❆Gem
@ivy

I hate heat. Cold I like. And yes, I completed the full Duolingo course and am going back through it a second time. :)
Crestwood Eq.
05:39:24 Ivy / poison ivy
Snow

Are you learning german, too?
Crestwood Eq.
05:38:19 Ivy / poison ivy
Snow

Hot as fuck
Gemstone Stable
05:37:44 Snow❆Gem
@ivy

Yikes!
Gemstone Stable
05:37:33 Snow❆Gem
@myth

You know that guy that I was talking about died in a car accident. It was Friday afternoon, and they still don't know who was driving?! O.o
Crestwood Eq.
05:36:58 Ivy / poison ivy
Snow

Soccer practice. XP

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Photo critiques? June 27, 2022 07:57 PM

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(Added shadow; Thanks Brook xD)
So this is my favorite piece that I have done. I am currently a T3 artist and this is my first piece that I have painted on (war paint), done a proper mane for, and tried to make the horse blend with its surroundings (which not gonna lie is quite nice imo.) But I feel like there's just something missing. I hope you guys can help me figure it out. Critiques on the piece in general are obviously appreciated.

Edited at June 27, 2022 08:11 PM by Araminta Farms
Photo critiques? June 27, 2022 08:04 PM


Brook Mill Dressage
 
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I'm not an artist. I have ZERO art abilities. I just thought I'd get that out of the way ;)
I think adding the shadow of the horse would really help so that it look more planted (I think). I hope this helps? Just the first think that came to me! Otherwise, it's quite good and the mane is quite nice :)
Photo critiques? June 27, 2022 08:07 PM

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I actually forgot the shadow. *facepalm* I just went in to fix it, posting the edited version now since adding a shadow is very easy lol

Brook Mill Dressage said:
I'm not an artist. I have ZERO art abilities. I just thought I'd get that out of the way ;)
I think adding the shadow of the horse would really help so that it look more planted (I think). I hope this helps? Just the first think that came to me! Otherwise, it's quite good and the mane is quite nice :)


Photo critiques? June 27, 2022 08:12 PM

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There is potential here! The horse is the size of a titan right now. It is much too big for the background. The shadow you added does not line up with the horse either, and it's a little sharp for such chill lighting in my opinion. There are details lost by the smudging on the horse that you could definitely benefit from drawing back in. Those are the main things throwing the piece off, plus poor grounding.
Photo critiques? June 27, 2022 11:52 PM

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One thing that may help is adding highlight! If the sun is shining in front of the horse (causing the shadow to go behind him) Then you could add a highlight where the sun would hit the horse directly like his mane, top of face/ears, front of the legs(ish) and upper back!
Photo critiques? June 28, 2022 09:49 AM


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Additionally please use a more readable size and font for the credits - thanks ;)

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