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Calela Eventing
01:30:30 Cali
Hey Win
Gilded Roses
01:27:29 River / Brody
Well your not champagne but you are pretty O.o
-HEE Click-
Winter Curtain
11:43:11 Win | Water
Thanks ! Even though there is not a lot of chestnut in the parents genes.
Red Horizon Ranch
11:42:03 Red
He's so pretty Win
Winter Curtain
11:38:37 Win | Water
Look at this guy -HEE Click-
Winter Curtain
11:38:08 Win | Water
o
Sierra Views Stable
11:37:44 AZ
Win - it's a random one, you can't breed for it
Winter Curtain
11:35:00 Win | Water
How do you find mares chimeras for breeding ?
Sierra Views Stable
11:32:43 AZ
-HEE Click- new chimera <3
Dash and Duchess
11:32:06 DD | ~Squizard~
I'm honestly debating whether to give her favorite child featured privileges 🤔
-HEE Click-
RFS Thoroughbreds
11:30:25 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf
you should
Halloween stable
11:29:26 
Does everyone wanna look at my featured horse he is very pretty I think I wanna keep him
RFS Thoroughbreds
11:28:27 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf
:'(
RFS Thoroughbreds
11:28:21 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf
I remember I made this awesome piece which was a white horse (good) with birds and tentacles reaching out and charging at this black horse with ravens and the tentacles (evil apparently) on a bridge with a waterfall in the background and I totally regret it
Dash and Duchess
11:25:40 DD | ~Squizard~
Peggy, yup I feel that 🥲
Dash and Duchess
11:25:23 DD | ~Squizard~
Oop I poofed earlier 😭
Winter Curtain
11:25:00 Win | Water
I have 34k more to breed, and try to get a brindle.
Pegasus Lane
11:24:05 Peggy (or) Peg
I also have an art piece I regret selling 🥲 You live and learn I guess
Halloween stable
11:14:40 
OMG I forgot I had these on my stable
RFS Thoroughbreds
11:10:49 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf
not bad for a quick 30 min piece after three months :)
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Calela Eventing
01:30:30 Cali
Hey Win
Gilded Roses
01:27:29 River / Brody
Well your not champagne but you are pretty O.o
-HEE Click-
Winter Curtain
11:43:11 Win | Water
Thanks ! Even though there is not a lot of chestnut in the parents genes.
Red Horizon Ranch
11:42:03 Red
He's so pretty Win
Winter Curtain
11:38:37 Win | Water
Look at this guy -HEE Click-
Winter Curtain
11:38:08 Win | Water
o
Sierra Views Stable
11:37:44 AZ
Win - it's a random one, you can't breed for it
Winter Curtain
11:35:00 Win | Water
How do you find mares chimeras for breeding ?
Sierra Views Stable
11:32:43 AZ
-HEE Click- new chimera <3
Dash and Duchess
11:32:06 DD | ~Squizard~
I'm honestly debating whether to give her favorite child featured privileges 🤔
-HEE Click-
RFS Thoroughbreds
11:30:25 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf
you should
Halloween stable
11:29:26 
Does everyone wanna look at my featured horse he is very pretty I think I wanna keep him
RFS Thoroughbreds
11:28:27 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf
:'(
RFS Thoroughbreds
11:28:21 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf
I remember I made this awesome piece which was a white horse (good) with birds and tentacles reaching out and charging at this black horse with ravens and the tentacles (evil apparently) on a bridge with a waterfall in the background and I totally regret it
Dash and Duchess
11:25:40 DD | ~Squizard~
Peggy, yup I feel that 🥲
Dash and Duchess
11:25:23 DD | ~Squizard~
Oop I poofed earlier 😭
Winter Curtain
11:25:00 Win | Water
I have 34k more to breed, and try to get a brindle.
Pegasus Lane
11:24:05 Peggy (or) Peg
I also have an art piece I regret selling 🥲 You live and learn I guess
Halloween stable
11:14:40 
OMG I forgot I had these on my stable
RFS Thoroughbreds
11:10:49 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf
not bad for a quick 30 min piece after three months :)
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Art Critique September 14, 2019 12:26 PM

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https://i.postimg.cc/pT0bBfVZ/Untitled229-1.jpg
https://i.postimg.cc/wTVYD0YS/Untitled230-1.jpg

Thoughts? Critiques? I've been practicing.

If I were to reopen my shop (should I?) What tier should I be in? What would be fair prices?

Edit: some credits

Edited at September 15, 2019 01:28 PM by Golden Meadows
Art Critique September 14, 2019 12:51 PM

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I love it
Art Critique September 14, 2019 01:23 PM

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I vote it !very pretty maybe try adding markings next time,adventure into new things!
Art Critique September 14, 2019 01:26 PM

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Raven Hollow Elite said:
I vote it !very pretty maybe try adding markings next time,adventure into new things!


I leave my pieces bare so the auction winner can have them added ;)
Art Critique September 14, 2019 01:33 PM


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I would still pop the credits on there, since you technically have published the image ;)

Not hard to just pop them on and then hide the layer while you're actually working.

Critique time!
The horse's lighting is a good foundation - adding a touch of light to the shoulder/withers may help give the horse some definition, and fit with how bright that highlighting is on its back. (Right now, the horse seems just a little out of whack with the backgrounds lighting)

The composition is alright, and I enjoy how you have placed the horse to be crossing the stream.

With that though - Might want to add some splashes! :D If you're not confident on drawing them, there are DA stock artists who provide pre-cut splash effects you could put to good use here. Really add some motion and cement the horse in the background realistically.

The mane and tail are nice! They fit well with the smoothed style you chose for the horse.

Lighting: The color of the horses lighting is on-par with the background :D



EDIT: Unsure if they were added while I was writing or if I just missed them.. but the credits are really hard to read with the font you chose. I'd either brighten them so they are more easily legible, or pick a different font.

Edited at September 14, 2019 01:35 PM by Squeeing Onion RIDs
Art Critique September 14, 2019 01:38 PM

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Squeeing Onion RIDs said:
I would still pop the credits on there, since you technically have published the image ;)

Not hard to just pop them on and then hide the layer while you're actually working.

Critique time!
The horse's lighting is a good foundation - adding a touch of light to the shoulder/withers may help give the horse some definition, and fit with how bright that highlighting is on its back. (Right now, the horse seems just a little out of whack with the backgrounds lighting)

The composition is alright, and I enjoy how you have placed the horse to be crossing the stream.

With that though - Might want to add some splashes! :D If you're not confident on drawing them, there are DA stock artists who provide pre-cut splash effects you could put to good use here. Really add some motion and cement the horse in the background realistically.

The mane and tail are nice! They fit well with the smoothed style you chose for the horse.

Lighting: The color of the horses lighting is on-par with the background :D



EDIT: Unsure if they were added while I was writing or if I just missed them.. but the credits are really hard to read with the font you chose. I'd either brighten them so they are more easily legible, or pick a different font.



If you zoom in, I painted splishes on the feet ;)

Thanks :DD. I'll brightest the credits :D
Art Critique September 15, 2019 01:28 PM

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Should I reopen my art shop? If so, what would be fair prices and what tier would I be in?
Art Critique September 15, 2019 03:10 PM

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I would say Tier 1 at 30-45k would be okay.
Art Critique September 15, 2019 03:20 PM

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https://horseeden.com/forums.php?f=57&t=31246

How's that pricing?

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