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Gypsy Family Farm
12:25:46 
He's so shiny on the chestnut looking part.
MC Ace
12:22:22 McFossil
Oh pretty Gypsy.
Sunni
12:21:26 Sunni bunny
Thank you Diva
Gypsy Family Farm
12:17:30 
Random chimera I did not know I owned. Fun color combo. -HEE Click-
Moonrose Magic
12:12:54 🎀 Diva
2.30am
Sunni
12:06:35 Sunni bunny
Dose the games day start at 12am?
CWY country
11:49:53 C
Oh, I'll have to get a picture of our newest addition that we got a few months ago. He's about a six month old kitten who has one eye.
KPH Equestrian
11:45:51 Rapcoon | Jester
oh my goodness šŸ˜he's so handsome🄰
CWY country
11:36:46 C
-Click-

Hopefully this works?
KPH Equestrian
11:24:18 Rapcoon | Jester
aw cute<3
CWY country
11:17:23 C
The one in my lap, is a big black cat with a white spot on his chest that adopted the family when he was living as a stray alley cat. His name is Kopi.
KPH Equestrian
11:13:53 Rapcoon | Jester
I've got 5 too xD via cat distribution system lol
CWY country
11:12:58 C
We have 5 cats in the house. All have been rescues from not so good circumstances.
KPH Equestrian
11:11:43 Rapcoon | Jester
he is strange
-Click-

C
aww<3
CWY country
11:10:12 C
Pretty kitty.

I currently have one of our cats on my lap at my desk doing biscuits on my leg.
KPH Equestrian
11:09:47 Rapcoon | Jester
-Click-
RFS Thoroughbreds
11:08:25 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf
Kph -*Snatch*
RFS Thoroughbreds
11:07:19 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf
Right omg
KPH Equestrian
11:07:17 Rapcoon | Jester
fern
-Click-
RFS Thoroughbreds
11:07:02 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf
Superman rihu

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Gypsy Family Farm
12:25:46 
He's so shiny on the chestnut looking part.
MC Ace
12:22:22 McFossil
Oh pretty Gypsy.
Sunni
12:21:26 Sunni bunny
Thank you Diva
Gypsy Family Farm
12:17:30 
Random chimera I did not know I owned. Fun color combo. -HEE Click-
Moonrose Magic
12:12:54 🎀 Diva
2.30am
Sunni
12:06:35 Sunni bunny
Dose the games day start at 12am?
CWY country
11:49:53 C
Oh, I'll have to get a picture of our newest addition that we got a few months ago. He's about a six month old kitten who has one eye.
KPH Equestrian
11:45:51 Rapcoon | Jester
oh my goodness šŸ˜he's so handsome🄰
CWY country
11:36:46 C
-Click-

Hopefully this works?
KPH Equestrian
11:24:18 Rapcoon | Jester
aw cute<3
CWY country
11:17:23 C
The one in my lap, is a big black cat with a white spot on his chest that adopted the family when he was living as a stray alley cat. His name is Kopi.
KPH Equestrian
11:13:53 Rapcoon | Jester
I've got 5 too xD via cat distribution system lol
CWY country
11:12:58 C
We have 5 cats in the house. All have been rescues from not so good circumstances.
KPH Equestrian
11:11:43 Rapcoon | Jester
he is strange
-Click-

C
aww<3
CWY country
11:10:12 C
Pretty kitty.

I currently have one of our cats on my lap at my desk doing biscuits on my leg.
KPH Equestrian
11:09:47 Rapcoon | Jester
-Click-
RFS Thoroughbreds
11:08:25 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf
Kph -*Snatch*
RFS Thoroughbreds
11:07:19 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf
Right omg
KPH Equestrian
11:07:17 Rapcoon | Jester
fern
-Click-
RFS Thoroughbreds
11:07:02 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf
Superman rihu

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Photo critiques? June 27, 2022 07:57 PM

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(Added shadow; Thanks Brook xD)
So this is my favorite piece that I have done. I am currently a T3 artist and this is my first piece that I have painted on (war paint), done a proper mane for, and tried to make the horse blend with its surroundings (which not gonna lie is quite nice imo.) But I feel like there's just something missing. I hope you guys can help me figure it out. Critiques on the piece in general are obviously appreciated.

Edited at June 27, 2022 08:11 PM by Araminta Farms
Photo critiques? June 27, 2022 08:04 PM


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I'm not an artist. I have ZERO art abilities. I just thought I'd get that out of the way ;)
I think adding the shadow of the horse would really help so that it look more planted (I think). I hope this helps? Just the first think that came to me! Otherwise, it's quite good and the mane is quite nice :)
Photo critiques? June 27, 2022 08:07 PM

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I actually forgot the shadow. *facepalm* I just went in to fix it, posting the edited version now since adding a shadow is very easy lol

Brook Mill Dressage said:
I'm not an artist. I have ZERO art abilities. I just thought I'd get that out of the way ;)
I think adding the shadow of the horse would really help so that it look more planted (I think). I hope this helps? Just the first think that came to me! Otherwise, it's quite good and the mane is quite nice :)


Photo critiques? June 27, 2022 08:12 PM

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There is potential here! The horse is the size of a titan right now. It is much too big for the background. The shadow you added does not line up with the horse either, and it's a little sharp for such chill lighting in my opinion. There are details lost by the smudging on the horse that you could definitely benefit from drawing back in. Those are the main things throwing the piece off, plus poor grounding.
Photo critiques? June 27, 2022 11:52 PM

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One thing that may help is adding highlight! If the sun is shining in front of the horse (causing the shadow to go behind him) Then you could add a highlight where the sun would hit the horse directly like his mane, top of face/ears, front of the legs(ish) and upper back!
Photo critiques? June 28, 2022 09:49 AM


Kuewi knn stable

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Additionally please use a more readable size and font for the credits - thanks ;)

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