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Horse Eden Eventing Game

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07:32:06

Wasn’t expecting this when I rated her this morning but very excited <3
-HEE Click-

Insignia Elites

07:29:46 Em

Love the look of him! Gonna see how he trains and decide if he keeps his bits xD -HEE Click-

07:29:26 Sting

Yuck, that sucks.

07:28:45 Void Malign

I threw hands with giant ass horseflies

07:27:30 Sting

Bit of rough & tumble out there today Void? :D

07:24:11 Void Malign

And no, I don't care how that sounds for people with zero context

07:23:33 Void Malign

Look. It's my random thought of the evening because I had to wash my hands of all the blood after coming in from feeding the horses.

07:22:14 Sun/Sunny

Absolutely 🤩

07:21:07 Crowley

Hey McFossil.

07:17:19 Wolf Burger (Leg)

Sunny
Ohh nice! You'll have to show off final results and like a before/after thing too!

07:15:38 CƐ

Bird, fair enough.

07:13:45 Sun/Sunny

yessss!! It’ll be a fun project to fix up, it’s a 55 ft with a great interior kinda house boat style and a great roof deck hang out. So pumped.

Hummingbird Meadows

07:13:06 Bird

@Cozmic, probably just for advertising and to raise awareness for their bank. You also get to donate $10k to an organization of your choice.

MC Ace

07:12:31 McFossil

Nothing or gore, yep

Dash and Duchess

07:10:49 DD | ~Squizard~

Void, that is unfortunately an impeccably accurate statement 🤣

07:10:24 Wolf Burger (Leg)

Sunny Oh yay!!!

MC Ace

07:10:09 McFossil

Well ok then.

Dash and Duchess

07:09:54 DD | ~Squizard~

Sunny, yay!! That's so exciting, congrats!

07:09:47 CƐ

Bird,
Forgot to include context i meant why would the bank give away 10k Lol

07:09:12 Void Malign

It's always a 50/50 chance that when slapping a horse fly it'll either do nothing or explode into a mess of blood. There's no in between.

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07:32:06

Wasn’t expecting this when I rated her this morning but very excited <3
-HEE Click-

Insignia Elites

07:29:46 Em

Love the look of him! Gonna see how he trains and decide if he keeps his bits xD -HEE Click-

07:29:26 Sting

Yuck, that sucks.

07:28:45 Void Malign

I threw hands with giant ass horseflies

07:27:30 Sting

Bit of rough & tumble out there today Void? :D

07:24:11 Void Malign

And no, I don't care how that sounds for people with zero context

07:23:33 Void Malign

Look. It's my random thought of the evening because I had to wash my hands of all the blood after coming in from feeding the horses.

07:22:14 Sun/Sunny

Absolutely 🤩

07:21:07 Crowley

Hey McFossil.

07:17:19 Wolf Burger (Leg)

Sunny
Ohh nice! You'll have to show off final results and like a before/after thing too!

07:15:38 CƐ

Bird, fair enough.

07:13:45 Sun/Sunny

yessss!! It’ll be a fun project to fix up, it’s a 55 ft with a great interior kinda house boat style and a great roof deck hang out. So pumped.

Hummingbird Meadows

07:13:06 Bird

@Cozmic, probably just for advertising and to raise awareness for their bank. You also get to donate $10k to an organization of your choice.

MC Ace

07:12:31 McFossil

Nothing or gore, yep

Dash and Duchess

07:10:49 DD | ~Squizard~

Void, that is unfortunately an impeccably accurate statement 🤣

07:10:24 Wolf Burger (Leg)

Sunny Oh yay!!!

MC Ace

07:10:09 McFossil

Well ok then.

Dash and Duchess

07:09:54 DD | ~Squizard~

Sunny, yay!! That's so exciting, congrats!

07:09:47 CƐ

Bird,
Forgot to include context i meant why would the bank give away 10k Lol

07:09:12 Void Malign

It's always a 50/50 chance that when slapping a horse fly it'll either do nothing or explode into a mess of blood. There's no in between.

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July 31, 2018 01:01 AM

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https://s20.postimg.cc/q4cmq04nx/EC613344-_A996-4_F85-_B5_DD-7_B923095_A187.png

Wondering what I could do next time to improve.

I know the markings could use some work on the edges to make them a bit more realistic, but other thoughts?

July 31, 2018 01:03 AM

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Try making the edges of the hooves disappear into the grass. Right now, it looks like the horse is trotting on grass patterned concrete.

July 31, 2018 01:13 AM

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Alright, is this any better?
https://s20.postimg.cc/fpbk1n34d/3_ECD0_EC1-_B3_AF-4_F07-9_C9_B-_A5_D2652_E3_E9_C.png

July 31, 2018 04:08 AM

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RavenHale said:
Alright, is this any better?
https://s20.postimg.cc/fpbk1n34d/3_ECD0_EC1-_B3_AF-4_F07-9_C9_B-_A5_D2652_E3_E9_C.png

Yes it looks more like the the horse is part of the image

July 31, 2018 04:25 AM

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You could make the hair that you have drawn on thinner so they look more natural, in the tail especially they are quite thick and they dont taper at the end like normal hair does.

Still a very good piece though :)

July 31, 2018 09:20 AM

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After you finish the markings, use the smudging tool at about 50% with a small soft brush (around 2px) then go along the side of the marking pulling in an out slightly. It will make the marking look more blended into the horse instead of a sudden stop/beginning. Also the mane by the cheek looks short, I'd suggest making it slightly longer. Other than that, very nice :D

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