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Whitewolf
11:13:47 
WWW 1/59 Copper Bay Colt. PrlPrl. Has art in remarks. Taking ebs offers. Bred using a glass and his daddy is Silver Dollar <3
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MakeEm Fancy
11:12:27 Ally 💜
EWE 20k
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Pegasus Lane
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Please help me test my freshie! #1 ABLB x #16 ABLB, up all week 4/8 AND has pearl!
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WIP art auctions clear out! Help my undecisive ass and get a custom piece out of it 🥰
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Sunni
10:46:06 Sunni bunny
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Stained Glass Horse Intelligence +3 for sale $100'000 only one.
Lunalovegood
10:16:23 Loony
New random auction, Colour, Ratings and much, much more…
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Stallions for stud (PM me if you wish to breed to one that is not up for stud or you want to reserve one for the future)
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WWW Freshie…
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SH Mares.. WWW Producer!
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Horse Haven Stables
10:02:08 HHS⎹ Lyla
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WWE SH Stallion
EWE Combos
EEE Mares
SD W Jumping stallions
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194 Maiden WWW SH first and second embryos for auction! Check this forum out for more info!
Vecchia Modo
08:42:31 Vecc - TBs
TB auction in progress
Lots of Ws
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DragonFyre Estate
08:02:16 Whip
Clearout auction. WWW AA stallion. Consistent AALB landing stud out of ABLB and LB stock. No sabino and no roan.
WWW AA mare. Has not been prioritized and is going to waste here.
EWW TB mare. Consistent EEE producer when not matched and prioritized.
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Angels angels
07:32:12 Will Buy Brindles!!
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EEE AA tobi filly for sale. Svnned maych
PricklyCactus Equine
07:21:32 Prickly | PCE
Need gone, open to offers!
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Whitewolf
11:13:47 
WWW 1/59 Copper Bay Colt. PrlPrl. Has art in remarks. Taking ebs offers. Bred using a glass and his daddy is Silver Dollar <3
-HEE Click-
MakeEm Fancy
11:12:27 Ally 💜
EWE 20k
-HEE Click-
Pegasus Lane
10:53:08 Peggy (or) Peg
Please help me test my freshie! #1 ABLB x #16 ABLB, up all week 4/8 AND has pearl!
-HEE Click-

WIP art auctions clear out! Help my undecisive ass and get a custom piece out of it 🥰
-HEE Click-
Sunni
10:46:06 Sunni bunny
-HEE Click-
Stained Glass Horse Intelligence +3 for sale $100'000 only one.
Lunalovegood
10:16:23 Loony
New random auction, Colour, Ratings and much, much more…
-HEE Click-

Stallions for stud (PM me if you wish to breed to one that is not up for stud or you want to reserve one for the future)
-HEE Click-

My new adopt shop… -HEE Click-

WWW Freshie…
-HEE Click-

SH Mares.. WWW Producer!
-HEE Click-

Enjoy!
Horse Haven Stables
10:02:08 HHS⎹ Lyla
-HEE Click-
Auction!
Includes:
WWE SH Stallion
EWE Combos
EEE Mares
SD W Jumping stallions
-
-HEE Click-
194 Maiden WWW SH first and second embryos for auction! Check this forum out for more info!
Vecchia Modo
08:42:31 Vecc - TBs
TB auction in progress
Lots of Ws
-HEE Click-
DragonFyre Estate
08:02:16 Whip
Clearout auction. WWW AA stallion. Consistent AALB landing stud out of ABLB and LB stock. No sabino and no roan.
WWW AA mare. Has not been prioritized and is going to waste here.
EWW TB mare. Consistent EEE producer when not matched and prioritized.
-HEE Click-
Angels angels
07:32:12 Will Buy Brindles!!
-HEE Click-
EEE AA tobi filly for sale. Svnned maych
PricklyCactus Equine
07:21:32 Prickly | PCE
Need gone, open to offers!
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Critique? September 19, 2019 02:46 PM


Diamanté
 
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So... I recently started using GIMP in addition to my usually art process. What do y'all think? Is there anything that jumps out at you as something I could do better?

https://i.postimg.cc/Hk3XmFtS/ISA-fin.jpg
Critique? September 19, 2019 04:59 PM


Raindrop Ridge
 
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I love that piece, I think the Bridle is too bright/glowy.
Critique? September 19, 2019 05:46 PM


LostCause
 
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Pretty!

I love a good backlight glow on a horse, but it may be too bright/needs to fade out a little more to make it appear more blended.

If possible, maybe a little bit different blend on that ground hoof; it looks like the hoof just poofed below the coronet band.

I agree with Raindrop, the bridle is a bit too bright. I had difficulty deciphering that it was a bridle due to the head angle, so perhaps some sort of defined lines are needed.

Edited at September 19, 2019 05:48 PM by LostCause
Critique? September 19, 2019 05:54 PM


WildWillow
 
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I personally think the horse is too bright in places for the background. Either lighten the background or darken the horse. If you are really wanting a glow behind the horse, lower the opacity. The glow, when it is that bright and that solid, looks odd since there is no obvious light source. I would also add a few more highlights onto the horse and the mane and tail. The horse looks quite dull when it has the glow behind it.
I would also edit out the bridle or lower the brightness. It took me a few seconds and a zoom in to actually realize that it was a bridle.
The edges of the horse also looks quite blurry. I would sharpen the horse up a bit. I would also sharpen the background. When I zoom in on the footing of the horse, the "front" of the background is just as blurry as the "back" of the background. Because of this reason, the splash on the footing looks too sharp and out of place compared to the rest of the background. I would sharpen the front of the background and slightly blur the splash to get them to match.
I hope this makes sense. :) If you need clarification - feel free to mail me. I can be a bit confusing at times lol!

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