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Horse Eden Eventing Game

Horse Eden Eventing Game

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Thu 10:48am

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10:48:04 Loony/Loony Tune

Win, I choose… HEE!

Glacier Bay Cove

10:47:49 Arctic Katz

Good choice

10:46:58 Win | Water

Sunfire

10:46:45 Win | Water

Loony, we need to choose. Probably-- Ehh-- HEE. I think that's my decision

10:46:30 Peggy (or) Peg

Second reading!

10:46:13 Win | Water

Anna, my name is Winter curtain in Wolf Play game, and Gunfire Guard in Draconis theory.

10:45:43 Anna/Jewel

-HEE Click-
Win- you could sign up for my role play

10:45:41 [1k+ brindles] Angel

Read a book :)

10:45:00 Loony/Loony Tune

Win, I know right, It’s so hard to decide…

10:44:18 Win | Water

Loony. Exactly. I don't know what to choose. Its so hard

10:43:48 Anna/Jewel

Win- there's other games made by the same people as HEE.
Draconis Theory and Wolf Play Game. I play both and my name is Sweet Valley on them too lol

10:43:42 Loony/Loony Tune

Win
Hmm. 🤔 let me think…
Maybe HEE… not sure though

Glacier Bay Cove

10:43:03 Arctic Katz

Or just play HEE

10:42:38 Win | Water

Loony. Like my dad says. "the options are: play HEE or HEE. What do you choose"

Glacier Bay Cove

10:42:35 Arctic Katz

Read, listen to music, watch movies, draw artwork, do art crafts or a jigsaw puzzle

10:41:34 Loony/Loony Tune

Win, Ummmm.
Draw.. Play HEE… Play More HEE..

Actually after more consideration Just Play HEE and sleep :)

10:40:41 Win | Water

I could draw.

10:39:40 Anna/Jewel

When I got my broken ankle I drew and did beaded bracelets

10:38:43 Win | Water

Does anyone have an idea of what to do in a bed all day. The doctors don't let me stand up yet.

10:38:31 Anna/Jewel

-HEE Click-
oo love that color

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10:48:04 Loony/Loony Tune

Win, I choose… HEE!

Glacier Bay Cove

10:47:49 Arctic Katz

Good choice

10:46:58 Win | Water

Sunfire

10:46:45 Win | Water

Loony, we need to choose. Probably-- Ehh-- HEE. I think that's my decision

10:46:30 Peggy (or) Peg

Second reading!

10:46:13 Win | Water

Anna, my name is Winter curtain in Wolf Play game, and Gunfire Guard in Draconis theory.

10:45:43 Anna/Jewel

-HEE Click-
Win- you could sign up for my role play

10:45:41 [1k+ brindles] Angel

Read a book :)

10:45:00 Loony/Loony Tune

Win, I know right, It’s so hard to decide…

10:44:18 Win | Water

Loony. Exactly. I don't know what to choose. Its so hard

10:43:48 Anna/Jewel

Win- there's other games made by the same people as HEE.
Draconis Theory and Wolf Play Game. I play both and my name is Sweet Valley on them too lol

10:43:42 Loony/Loony Tune

Win
Hmm. 🤔 let me think…
Maybe HEE… not sure though

Glacier Bay Cove

10:43:03 Arctic Katz

Or just play HEE

10:42:38 Win | Water

Loony. Like my dad says. "the options are: play HEE or HEE. What do you choose"

Glacier Bay Cove

10:42:35 Arctic Katz

Read, listen to music, watch movies, draw artwork, do art crafts or a jigsaw puzzle

10:41:34 Loony/Loony Tune

Win, Ummmm.
Draw.. Play HEE… Play More HEE..

Actually after more consideration Just Play HEE and sleep :)

10:40:41 Win | Water

I could draw.

10:39:40 Anna/Jewel

When I got my broken ankle I drew and did beaded bracelets

10:38:43 Win | Water

Does anyone have an idea of what to do in a bed all day. The doctors don't let me stand up yet.

10:38:31 Anna/Jewel

-HEE Click-
oo love that color

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September 29, 2019 01:58 PM

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Hello.. I will just have this for Critique of my art? I make it rarely so I won't put stuff up on here much.. Please be honest in what you think ;-; Thank chew!

https://postimg.cc/dLkmvCLb
What do you think of this? Is it O.K? I understand the coloring is a lot .. odd..

This is a WIP but I thought I'd share, I still have shading on the body, face hooves.. everywhere! And the mane & tail to color in... + everything else on the thing lol Also - This next piece is obviously not for use one HEE.

https://postimg.cc/7JkMSjb5
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Eek. Okay. Took alot of time off to work on line-art coloring and stuff. I decided to do a manip, so far I think it's ok. (It is a work in progress)

https://postimg.cc/SJzcWxW6

Does it seem ok so far?

Edited at December 30, 2019 11:45 PM by Broken Meadows

September 29, 2019 02:00 PM

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Fixed link

https://postimg.cc/dLkmvCLb

Edited at September 29, 2019 02:00 PM by ~Running Free~

September 29, 2019 03:46 PM

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Thank you @Freedom Elites
I don't know why the link won't work..?

September 29, 2019 11:03 PM

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I like it but it does look a bit odd with the lineart horse against such a realistic background.

October 3, 2019 01:17 PM

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I think the colouring is lovely,but the mane/rail needs a bit more...shape?

October 5, 2019 09:13 PM

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Coloring highlights and shadows on the horses would improve it a lot

October 22, 2019 11:14 PM

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Thank you all! I forgot about this forum :/

I have been working on shading / fitting the horses into different backgrounds.

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