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KPH Equestrian
11:56:14 Rapcoon | Jester
congrats bluey! she's pretty :D
Blue Diamond
11:55:20 Bluey
My very first WWW!!!
-HEE Click-
KPH Equestrian
11:54:23 Rapcoon | Jester
*-* even if she doesn't get good bravery, I'm happy xD
-HEE Click-
Lynx Glory
11:48:12 ⛈ whisper/lynx
aw i didn't see you lol sorry
Lynx Glory
11:47:58 ⛈ whisper/lynx
myth!
Breadcrumbs
11:47:35 
Zooombs.. are you there?
Angels angels
11:40:25 [1k+ brindles] Angel
With my bank you are also supposed to be able to just take a picture of a check and it will go into your account, or put it in through an atm but for some reason it doesn't work on mine.
Angels angels
11:38:07 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Then she shouldn't be working the money center
Glacier Bay Cove
11:37:03 Arctic Katz
Maybe she is a new employee and doesn't know that they cash hand written checks
Angels angels
11:36:02 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Every single week when I get my paycheck I take it to Kroger to cash it. Never had any issues with it. Then I tried to do it today and the lady says they don't cash handwritten check. Um yes they do .-.
Glacier Bay Cove
11:34:54 Arctic Katz
What did she do
Angels angels
11:34:32 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Ugh this lady just pissed me off so bad
Glacier Bay Cove
11:32:38 Arctic Katz
To see if there's anything good there
Glacier Bay Cove
11:31:06 Arctic Katz
Looking at the hidden falls
Mythological
11:29:48 Crowley
Lynx
Nightingales Ridge
11:26:06 Issy
Heres*
Nightingales Ridge
11:25:58 Issy
I'm trying to rebuild my cashback and he's me in the auction house "oooo" *click click*
Lynx Glory
11:25:19 ⛈ whisper/lynx
xD
Nightingales Ridge
11:25:02 Issy
Whoopsy daisies Lynx 😬
Lynx Glory
11:22:04 ⛈ whisper/lynx
SHOOT i just bid on a retired EEE mare

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KPH Equestrian
11:56:14 Rapcoon | Jester
congrats bluey! she's pretty :D
Blue Diamond
11:55:20 Bluey
My very first WWW!!!
-HEE Click-
KPH Equestrian
11:54:23 Rapcoon | Jester
*-* even if she doesn't get good bravery, I'm happy xD
-HEE Click-
Lynx Glory
11:48:12 ⛈ whisper/lynx
aw i didn't see you lol sorry
Lynx Glory
11:47:58 ⛈ whisper/lynx
myth!
Breadcrumbs
11:47:35 
Zooombs.. are you there?
Angels angels
11:40:25 [1k+ brindles] Angel
With my bank you are also supposed to be able to just take a picture of a check and it will go into your account, or put it in through an atm but for some reason it doesn't work on mine.
Angels angels
11:38:07 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Then she shouldn't be working the money center
Glacier Bay Cove
11:37:03 Arctic Katz
Maybe she is a new employee and doesn't know that they cash hand written checks
Angels angels
11:36:02 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Every single week when I get my paycheck I take it to Kroger to cash it. Never had any issues with it. Then I tried to do it today and the lady says they don't cash handwritten check. Um yes they do .-.
Glacier Bay Cove
11:34:54 Arctic Katz
What did she do
Angels angels
11:34:32 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Ugh this lady just pissed me off so bad
Glacier Bay Cove
11:32:38 Arctic Katz
To see if there's anything good there
Glacier Bay Cove
11:31:06 Arctic Katz
Looking at the hidden falls
Mythological
11:29:48 Crowley
Lynx
Nightingales Ridge
11:26:06 Issy
Heres*
Nightingales Ridge
11:25:58 Issy
I'm trying to rebuild my cashback and he's me in the auction house "oooo" *click click*
Lynx Glory
11:25:19 ⛈ whisper/lynx
xD
Nightingales Ridge
11:25:02 Issy
Whoopsy daisies Lynx 😬
Lynx Glory
11:22:04 ⛈ whisper/lynx
SHOOT i just bid on a retired EEE mare

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Critiques? November 18, 2017 10:24 AM


Andraste Equine
 
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http://funkyimg.com/i/2zt8M.jpg

I've been working on an updated art style for about two weeks now and I'd love some critiques on my first stage of progress with this. Please no negativity, I'd just love some suggestions and critique on this piece so I can improve :)
Critiques? November 18, 2017 10:29 AM


Flipperruby30
 
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It looks amazing!!Try perhaps editing the top of the landscape behind but other wise Well Done!
Critiques? November 18, 2017 11:47 AM


Jellos Warmbloods
 
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I think it looks lovely! I've always enjoyed your art.

My one suggestion would be to add the slightest of high/low lights where body parts get a wee bit hard to differentiate. On this piece I would suggest where the front leg and stomach are kinda blending together. :)
Critiques? November 18, 2017 11:53 AM


Andraste Equine
 
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Jellos Warmbloods said:
I think it looks lovely! I've always enjoyed your art.

My one suggestion would be to add the slightest of high/low lights where body parts get a wee bit hard to differentiate. On this piece I would suggest where the front leg and stomach are kinda blending together. :)



Thank you! This helps a lot.
Critiques? November 18, 2017 02:45 PM


WhizBar Eventing
 
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Gahh oml. Alright, sorry xD I just literally typed out this whole long thing, and then somehow hit a wrong button slid right back onto my previous page -_- stupid mac, lol

Anyways without further complaining, here I go =D

Alright, so I was supposed to start with a "This is super lovely, Toast!" ...or something along those lines, lol. This is great work! Alright, but there's two things I'd love to point out =)

1. I do really think that it would be super awesome if you checked out a few mane tutorials on DA =) I think repainting a lovely mane really finishes pieces off nicely ;) It also adds a bit of uniqueness since everybody paints manes differently xD

2. I'd also love seeing some interesting lighting added =) I love to have my pieces follow an obvious lighting scheme, but even just a more evident source of light would be nice. It would also spruce up the bg a bit, and maybe something like a light vignette would be good ^-^

Just my thoughts! Again, I kinda struggled to type everything like I had it before xD It might be badly worded, but anyways I hope it helps <3 Keep up the great work toast =)
Critiques? November 18, 2017 02:49 PM


Andraste Equine
 
Posts: 2325
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VellaDun Manor said:
Gahh oml. Alright, sorry xD I just literally typed out this whole long thing, and then somehow hit a wrong button slid right back onto my previous page -_- stupid mac, lol

Anyways without further complaining, here I go =D

Alright, so I was supposed to start with a "This is super lovely, Toast!" ...or something along those lines, lol. This is great work! Alright, but there's two things I'd love to point out =)

1. I do really think that it would be super awesome if you checked out a few mane tutorials on DA =) I think repainting a lovely mane really finishes pieces off nicely ;) It also adds a bit of uniqueness since everybody paints manes differently xD

2. I'd also love seeing some interesting lighting added =) I love to have my pieces follow an obvious lighting scheme, but even just a more evident source of light would be nice. It would also spruce up the bg a bit, and maybe something like a light vignette would be good ^-^

Just my thoughts! Again, I kinda struggled to type everything like I had it before xD It might be badly worded, but anyways I hope it helps <3 Keep up the great work toast =)



Thank you! I've been thinking about trying to paint manes but they never come out how I'd like, no matter how many tutorials I look at xD I'll try that though as well as the lighting. There is a vignette on there, it's light though.
Critiques? November 18, 2017 02:53 PM


WhizBar Eventing
 
Posts: 4325
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Mhmm, haha =)

I actually have struggled sooo much with hair, lol, and all the DA tutorials made it look super easy and then mine came out as crap xD So I honestly just played around myself until I finally found something that looked decent and had some potential if I refined the style a bit and such... but yea, feel free to PM me if you need any help with stuff like pesky hair x)
Critiques? November 18, 2017 02:56 PM


Andraste Equine
 
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I will :P I've got a tablet, but my stupid hand doesn't like drawing xD
Critiques? November 22, 2017 09:06 PM

Former Stable
 
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It looks wonderful but the glow around the horse could be slightly less intense and the horse seems a little too smudged but I love it! Looks amazing
Critiques? November 22, 2017 09:08 PM


Casanova
 
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It looks great! Only thing I would look into is manes (As mentioned above) But I love the strong glow around the horse! It's personally a style I really like.

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