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Wild EEE premium bravery pony mare 20k or send an offer
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Open to offers :)

The Northern Lights

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ISH Auction
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God is Mighty Stable

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looking for a 90k 1 month upgrade

Storm Wtr Creek Farm

04:43:07 SWC

-HEE Click- Taking offers on all TB's in this barn. Multiple WWW's. Proven producers. PM me ANY offers!

04:35:00

WWW TB freshman needs testing also looking for a one month upgrade
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WWW WB mare for sale
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WWW AA #13 on the AALB stud fee is only 20K

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November 30, 2017 11:11 PM

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Well I tried to do my first horse image art piece and I'm not sure what to think? Any opinions?

https://horseeden.com/horse.php?id=14193968

December 1, 2017 12:24 AM

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Looks better than my first go, that's for sure.

My comment would be to make the hair more detailed - add individual strands and clumps. Perhaps focus on making the nose more distinguishable from the rest of the neck as it kinda meshes together.

Overall nicely done

December 1, 2017 12:27 AM

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Try blurring the BG too

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