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Horse Eden Eventing Game

Horse Eden Eventing Game

Year: 193 Season: Summer

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12:29:00

How do I see my horses progeny reports

12:25:39 Rapcoon | Jester

I've thrown 1k balloons ;-;

Insignia Elites

12:22:06 Em

I can't breed a pearl for the life of me xD

12:15:51 Rapcoon | Jester

12:15:03 Rapcoon | Jester

12:13:35 AL, mum to Nemi

20 more days so you guys have plenty of time to waste money

12:12:06 ghost

Ive thrown about 200 for west so far but will be doing as many as I can later on xd

12:11:54 Rapcoon | Jester

we deserve a win for once x'D

Dash and Duchess

12:11:16 DD | ~Squizard~

Our only competition is West xD

12:10:55 ghost

jester, so you're the reason east is so far ahead!

Glacier Bay Cove

12:10:52 Arctic Katz

Please cease fire, I am begging you

12:10:05 Rapcoon | Jester

that's officially 900 balloons thrown😌

Glacier Bay Cove

12:09:14 Arctic Katz

I am not participating, and I am still getting splattered by water balloons

12:07:56 Bug | Flea | KPH

this account had 57 xD sad the page on my main is broken, nobody's been able to throw em at me :(

Insignia Elites

12:04:55 Em

I just got like 20 splat notifications xD while playing a game

12:04:29 Rapcoon | Jester

sorry DD x'D
I feel bad for everyone who has their splat notifications on xD

Dash and Duchess

12:03:26 DD | ~Squizard~

Cease fire I beg 😭

12:01:21 Rapcoon | Jester

I'm the HEE equivalent of spider georg xD

Dash and Duchess

12:00:31 DD | ~Squizard~

East needs a win 😭 we never do xD

Imperial Warmbloods

12:00:30 Imp/Impie/Impy

I think I`ve done about 300, >-<

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12:29:00

How do I see my horses progeny reports

12:25:39 Rapcoon | Jester

I've thrown 1k balloons ;-;

Insignia Elites

12:22:06 Em

I can't breed a pearl for the life of me xD

12:15:51 Rapcoon | Jester

12:15:03 Rapcoon | Jester

12:13:35 AL, mum to Nemi

20 more days so you guys have plenty of time to waste money

12:12:06 ghost

Ive thrown about 200 for west so far but will be doing as many as I can later on xd

12:11:54 Rapcoon | Jester

we deserve a win for once x'D

Dash and Duchess

12:11:16 DD | ~Squizard~

Our only competition is West xD

12:10:55 ghost

jester, so you're the reason east is so far ahead!

Glacier Bay Cove

12:10:52 Arctic Katz

Please cease fire, I am begging you

12:10:05 Rapcoon | Jester

that's officially 900 balloons thrown😌

Glacier Bay Cove

12:09:14 Arctic Katz

I am not participating, and I am still getting splattered by water balloons

12:07:56 Bug | Flea | KPH

this account had 57 xD sad the page on my main is broken, nobody's been able to throw em at me :(

Insignia Elites

12:04:55 Em

I just got like 20 splat notifications xD while playing a game

12:04:29 Rapcoon | Jester

sorry DD x'D
I feel bad for everyone who has their splat notifications on xD

Dash and Duchess

12:03:26 DD | ~Squizard~

Cease fire I beg 😭

12:01:21 Rapcoon | Jester

I'm the HEE equivalent of spider georg xD

Dash and Duchess

12:00:31 DD | ~Squizard~

East needs a win 😭 we never do xD

Imperial Warmbloods

12:00:30 Imp/Impie/Impy

I think I`ve done about 300, >-<

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November 30, 2017 11:11 PM

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Well I tried to do my first horse image art piece and I'm not sure what to think? Any opinions?

https://horseeden.com/horse.php?id=14193968

December 1, 2017 12:24 AM

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Looks better than my first go, that's for sure.

My comment would be to make the hair more detailed - add individual strands and clumps. Perhaps focus on making the nose more distinguishable from the rest of the neck as it kinda meshes together.

Overall nicely done

December 1, 2017 12:27 AM

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Try blurring the BG too

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