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Calela Eventing

11:17:48 Cali

So...
HEE,HEE or HEE?

London Estates

11:17:33 rainy/fritzi

heheh its finally rained here it's chilly outside yess

Crestwood Eq.

11:17:11 Ivy / poison ivy

One day....the party trio will be known all over every HEE. (notice i said every to please the crazies). mwhahahahaha

Snow Stable

11:16:28 Snow❆Gem

@pheezy

Ack! O.o

Crestwood Eq.

11:16:25 Ivy / poison ivy

lily

of course!

Crestwood Eq.

11:16:16 Ivy / poison ivy

Cali

fair xD

Winter Curtain

11:16:06 Win | Water

Just-- Forget it. Too long to explain

Calela Eventing

11:15:53 Cali

Win
Read? Audiobooks? That's what I did

Alpine Acres

11:15:50 Lily/Alpine

thanks Ivy! <33

London Estates

11:15:31 rainy/fritzi

I've been online for like an hour win lol

London Estates

11:15:07 rainy/fritzi

lmao what

Winter Curtain

11:14:58 Win | Water

Rainy, from the start, when I wrote, what can I do in the hospital?

Winter Curtain

11:14:28 Win | Water

Cali. I can't stand them too. Like, who are they. Supporting HEE instead of HEE, but us, the real ones. We only like HEE. HEE and HEE are horrible, just can't understand how people like them.

Snow Stable

11:14:22 Snow❆Gem

@myth

LMAO I'll save that then, and when I make a T-shirt shop online I'll let you know! :D

Calela Eventing

11:14:00 Cali

Ivy
Hah! Sucker, we all know your the weirdest out of us there!

Crestwood Eq.

11:13:59 Ivy / poison ivy

fritzi

same

London Estates

11:13:43 rainy/fritzi

win
I read the whole convo yet I do not understand

Crestwood Eq.

11:13:26 Ivy / poison ivy

pheezy

that sounds horrible

Crestwood Eq.

11:13:09 Ivy / poison ivy

CALI CALELA

How dare you call me the weirdo. xD facts though

pandemoniu_m

11:13:06 pheezy

im okay ivy
my boss has yet to turn on the ac is this mfer and im sweating like a pig in a meat locker but other than that im thriving lol

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Calela Eventing

11:17:48 Cali

So...
HEE,HEE or HEE?

London Estates

11:17:33 rainy/fritzi

heheh its finally rained here it's chilly outside yess

Crestwood Eq.

11:17:11 Ivy / poison ivy

One day....the party trio will be known all over every HEE. (notice i said every to please the crazies). mwhahahahaha

Snow Stable

11:16:28 Snow❆Gem

@pheezy

Ack! O.o

Crestwood Eq.

11:16:25 Ivy / poison ivy

lily

of course!

Crestwood Eq.

11:16:16 Ivy / poison ivy

Cali

fair xD

Winter Curtain

11:16:06 Win | Water

Just-- Forget it. Too long to explain

Calela Eventing

11:15:53 Cali

Win
Read? Audiobooks? That's what I did

Alpine Acres

11:15:50 Lily/Alpine

thanks Ivy! <33

London Estates

11:15:31 rainy/fritzi

I've been online for like an hour win lol

London Estates

11:15:07 rainy/fritzi

lmao what

Winter Curtain

11:14:58 Win | Water

Rainy, from the start, when I wrote, what can I do in the hospital?

Winter Curtain

11:14:28 Win | Water

Cali. I can't stand them too. Like, who are they. Supporting HEE instead of HEE, but us, the real ones. We only like HEE. HEE and HEE are horrible, just can't understand how people like them.

Snow Stable

11:14:22 Snow❆Gem

@myth

LMAO I'll save that then, and when I make a T-shirt shop online I'll let you know! :D

Calela Eventing

11:14:00 Cali

Ivy
Hah! Sucker, we all know your the weirdest out of us there!

Crestwood Eq.

11:13:59 Ivy / poison ivy

fritzi

same

London Estates

11:13:43 rainy/fritzi

win
I read the whole convo yet I do not understand

Crestwood Eq.

11:13:26 Ivy / poison ivy

pheezy

that sounds horrible

Crestwood Eq.

11:13:09 Ivy / poison ivy

CALI CALELA

How dare you call me the weirdo. xD facts though

pandemoniu_m

11:13:06 pheezy

im okay ivy
my boss has yet to turn on the ac is this mfer and im sweating like a pig in a meat locker but other than that im thriving lol

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Critique

July 31, 2018 01:01 AM

Former Stable

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https://s20.postimg.cc/q4cmq04nx/EC613344-_A996-4_F85-_B5_DD-7_B923095_A187.png

Wondering what I could do next time to improve.

I know the markings could use some work on the edges to make them a bit more realistic, but other thoughts?

Critique

July 31, 2018 01:03 AM

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Try making the edges of the hooves disappear into the grass. Right now, it looks like the horse is trotting on grass patterned concrete.

Critique

July 31, 2018 01:13 AM

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#206024
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Alright, is this any better?
https://s20.postimg.cc/fpbk1n34d/3_ECD0_EC1-_B3_AF-4_F07-9_C9_B-_A5_D2652_E3_E9_C.png

Critique

July 31, 2018 04:08 AM

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#206055
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RavenHale said:
Alright, is this any better?
https://s20.postimg.cc/fpbk1n34d/3_ECD0_EC1-_B3_AF-4_F07-9_C9_B-_A5_D2652_E3_E9_C.png

Yes it looks more like the the horse is part of the image

Critique

July 31, 2018 04:25 AM

Fox Crest Manor

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You could make the hair that you have drawn on thinner so they look more natural, in the tail especially they are quite thick and they dont taper at the end like normal hair does.

Still a very good piece though :)

Critique

July 31, 2018 09:20 AM

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After you finish the markings, use the smudging tool at about 50% with a small soft brush (around 2px) then go along the side of the marking pulling in an out slightly. It will make the marking look more blended into the horse instead of a sudden stop/beginning. Also the mane by the cheek looks short, I'd suggest making it slightly longer. Other than that, very nice :D

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